Old 10-10-2006, 04:30 PM   #1
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No title as for yet, but right now I'm keeping it up writing, though I havn't come very far, due to lots of homework and tests (maths tomorrow). But I'll use the remainder of the week and the weekend to catch up. Right now I got about 2000 words (better get on with it).
The story is about a vampire army invading the lads of Keso, where inhabitants from my old school stories are living. I simply put a number of my favourite characters and have them fight against the army of vampires. The main character is a Goblin, whos name I have forgot. But I will try to find that particualr story. Anyhow, this goblin is a vampire slayer, and he leads the restistance along with his bear friend Roy (who also acts as steed).
It's sort of nostalgic for me, so I guess I enjoy it pretty much. Others won't get much but... I think I write pretty good, so I hope somebody reads this, and comment.

So here's the first chapter, I don't feel like posting more as for now. Enjoy!

Chapter 1:

The vampires kept sweeping over the lands like rabies sweeps over dogs. Nobody was left alive. The vampire King, Lord Thermos had great plans for the lands he was about to enter. The lands of Keso, in which all kinds of weird creatures were living. It would not be an easy place to conquer. In the forests lived such infamous beings as the Goblin vampire slayer, Officer Dublin, The Lion Knight and the unknown wizard of the Carbonium stone.
Not to mention the infernal Crodosol, an infernal beast roaming the skies.
But the vampire Lord knew he could win. He was absolutely super trained in the Ninjas skills, and a exellent commander. And he was the King of vampires, the only one powerful enough to have enslaved the Pharao of Necromancy, the mummy who created the Undead race. No necromancer here though, just thousands upon thousands of Vampires. The undead armies stayed at home, checking up on their newly captured slaves.
No more hesitation, though lord Thermos, and so the army of vampires began to enter the Forest of Keso.

In a small cottage lived the Goblin vampire slayer. He was an experienced warrior, and with his bear friend Roy as mount, he was a formidable weapon in the Resistance of Keso; RoK.
He was at his attic, assembling all the weapons that he could use in battle. The news of the vampire army entering the very same night came to him from a bird. As quick as possible, the creatures of Keso formed a resistance force. Almost all of the creatures able to fight were at the crisis meeting at 6 AM. All the members were issued silver weapons. Even such creatures as the seven mutant foxes were issued silver teeth covers.
“These are nice gifts” said a giant killer robot, 5 meters high, with a Nilar Death Mask as cover of its head. A symbol of elite warriors. He continued:
“But I prefer using my standard weapons, no silver bullets.”
“But you must use silver bullets!” insisted Officer Dublin. “You can’t kill vampirs without silver. Tell you what. I give you this liquid silver. Make sure to enhance all of your weapons, including that rocket launcher.”
“Agreed” answered the robot.
As the Gobin vampire slayer arrived, riding Roy, Officer Dublin said that they were to be the commanders, if they should be forced into open war.
“As the vampire slayer you are, you would be fit for it” he said.
“I wish my granpa was here… He was twice the slayer I am” answered the goblin.
“I’m sure you will pull it off in an extraordinary way.”
“Well… I sure hope so. But you don’t know vampires, do you, officer?”
“Not really.”
“They are powerful, and shall not be underestimated. I’ve encountered some who can transform into terrifying beasts. I do fear our little resistance is no use for the vast army.”
“But we got a secret weapon.”
“really? What is that, have you fixed your revolver?”
“No, it’s still broken, and I have no intension of ever getting it repaired, or purchase a new one. The secret weapon is the human called Kepa-Jocke.”
“The one with the hat which grants him superhuman strength?”
“The very same!”
“That is a secret weapon indeed…” Who else have joined us since I went back home?”
“The Lion Knight came an hour ago. And we also have Octo-Stig; the crazy Santa, The daemons slayer Gareth, and the Super Villain.”
“Good. I shall commence my strategies immediately. I need every man here in five hours.”
“Do we even have that kind of time?”
“The vampires don’t come at daytime, my friend. Sunlight can kill a vampire. They only hunt at night.”
“Oh… Fine, I shall spread the words.”
At the meeting, the vampire slayer talked about honor, duties, and glory. After the psychological morale stuff, he moved on to the important part, how to kill a vampire.
“A vampire is like a human. If you cut him, he will die. The same weaknesses. That is, if you have silver enhanced weapons. If you lose your weapons, you can also kill a vampire by stabbing the heart, or simply chop its head off. But if you cut them, their wounds will heal. So if you do lose your silver, which you shall not… Hold on to it as if was your kid! But if you should lose it, aim for a killing strike. Now , when we fight them, they will retreat before dawn, due to the sunlight. If there is any possibility to extend the fight and cut their escape routs, we shall do so. Nothing kills a vampire as the sun does. There is though, a matter of superiority. The vampires are well trained, they have lived through many centuries and are far more experienced than you are. They can drink you blood to gain strength, they can fly, and they are fast, strong, and some of them I know perform magic.”
A silence fell over the small band of warriors. They seemed horrified.
“You seem horrified. Well, you should be. Vampires are not easy met. And they have their King, who is the dreaded Lord thermos. He…” the goblin was suddenly interrupted.
The Lion Knight stepped forward.
“I’ve fought this vampire king. He is a worthy foe. But if we all pitch in, we can kill him.”
Cries of courage rose among the warriors.
Roy said to his friend:
“I think they are ready.”
The goblin nodded. Then he rose to speak.
“Now we shall prepare for battle. First we must locate their position. I have sent out every squirrel, every bird, every mouse, every mole and even the fishes are looking for them. Until we find them, Roy and I shall begin planning for the night. I shall let the Lion Knight tell you his impressions of vampire fighting, and officer Dublin will lead the fortification of this very area. You can do whatever you wish. Pitch in and help Dublin protect this place, listen to the Lion Knight, or practice fighting. But ensure to have full stomachs and to be rested as night falls. We need fit warriors for tonight as far as it seems, so don’t work yourselves out.
The goblin went to the tent made up especially for him. Roy made him company.
The two friends started discussing possible attack areas and scenarios. The whole day, they thought about their strategy plans, knowing that if they made a mistake, it may become their last.

*To be continued... *
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