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{FF} Legacy's Dawn
Before I begin this, I want everyone to be aware some facts beforehand. Now, this fic is a story inside the Zelda world created in the Shattered Sword. The story itself begins in New Hyrule, though depending on where it goes after that, it will cross paths with Earth. This story begins in the middle of a conflict that has destroyed New Hyrule under the influence of Shadows One. That's all I'm going to reveal as of right now.
And with that, I begin. Comments are welcome. Part One The boy’s ears perked up, glancing over the hedge of brush he was clearing away. A wolf howled in the distance, and his eyes lit up at the prospect of fresh meat. It had been several weeks since he had heard another creature’s cry, and he was beginning to run low on the salted beef that usually sustained him, stolen from the farmers that lived several miles off. He set down both his long knives, directing his attention to where the call had issued from. He could just as easily send Link, but it would be better training to fetch the beast himself. The boy had been training for many years, and was not afraid. “Do you hear it?” a voice asked on his left, prompting the boy to turn to the shadows. The disembodied voice of Link he knew well sounded eager, Link wished to hunt once more. “Do you hear it, Xander?” The boy named Xander nodded, sheathing both of his long knives, Orca and Balmung, into the holsters on his belt. Readjusting the headband that held back his short mane of red hair, Xander peered through the dim light of the winter’s day, his crimson eyes gazing intently in the direction he had heard the wolf. His brisk traveling garb, while different from the outfit he had worn on Outset, consisted of the furs of the animals he had trapped and defeated over the two years, with Link’s help. It was his task to look after Link, just as it was Link’s to watch over Xander. “Let’s hunt,” the boy answered, rising from the stump he sat on, snow falling from his pants. He had been sitting there for some time, training his body to fight against cold. “Come.” Link’s long shadow fell into stride against the boy’s, and together they descended into the dark forest they lived in. Xander had grown past the age he was now, which couldn’t have been more than twelve, becoming a warrior worthy of Master Fangor’s training. It had been almost two years since he had been abandoned, to train and grow with Link, until the time was right. Until they could defeat Shadows One. Xander barely thought of life before the forest, it seemed like a warm dream. He shivered, not because of the cold, but rather because of the memory. Orca’s death, and Master Fangor taking him in. The Gilla Blade. Everything he had was taken away in the blink of an eye, and he had traded his life as apprentice under Orca for the adventures of his Master. He had only been ten, his face bronzed by the sun of the Great Sea. Now he was twelve, and already a man, if not physically, then mentally. Link wasn’t much better, he was only two, and he had had to grow up even quicker. Because of who, and what he was. Still, he was the only friend Xander had, and that was worth something. He heard Link panting with anticipation, waiting for the hunt to begin. He knew that Link could smell the wolf, even though he couldn’t exactly see Link. He liked to hide a lot in the shadows, until the time was right to attack. Xander understood, and they had founded a very good system for catching animals who thought that Xander was alone. The boy drew Orca and Balmung, feeling their cold, glimmering steel against his gloved hands. He walked out of the shadows, wandering into the clearing he knew the wolf was in, and would enter. He didn’t have to wait long, and was soon rewarded with the wolf wandering into the clearing, leaving the confines and safety of the snow-capped trees that stood around them. It grinned a wolfish smile, baring all of its stained teeth in challenge. Xander looked down on it, thought it was almost as big as he was, holding up his knives. “Let’s see what you got,” he muttered. The wolf growled. Orca and Balmung flashed, just as the wolf’s face bared itself, and the beast reared, charging at the boy. Xander deflected the first set of claws, scoring a deep slash along the flank of the beast’s left side. The animal moaned, and Xander grinned, lending himself and his talents to the task at hand. The wolf was still standing, though Xander saw he had pierced some major organ along the cut. Blood tricked from Orca’s blade, and Xander swung Balmung around as the wolf attacked again, howling with dark lust. Xander dodged the beast, goring the other side of the wolf. It howled again, whining in pain. “Now, Link!” Xander ordered, lowering his weapons. The wolf never saw the dragon as he descended, jaws wide open. The emerald beast chomped down on the wolf, wings beating loudly. His fangs met the wolf’s head, gripping roughly on the neck, and twisting until Xander heard the hard snap of the neck bone severing, and the wolf’s body went limp, dead. Xander looked up at the dragon, who was almost as big as his Master Fangor. With a look of mild amusement, Link the dragon removed the body from his fangs with the scaly claws that were his forehands. His jade eyes glinted intently at Xander, who picked up the carcass from the snowy floor of the forest. Link beat his wings, shrouding Xander in shadows. “That should last us a day or two,” Xander said, examining the corpse. It was a heavy wolf, with plenty of dark meat inside the hulk. “Three, if we start that diet of yours.” Xander grinned, looking at the slowly-expanding girth of Link’s pale underbelly. Link chuckled, light steam emerging from his narrow nostrils. “Let’s head back home, Xander,” he retorted, leaning forward to walk on all four of his limbs. All three toes on each of his legs crushed deep into the snow below. “It’s getting cold, and I hate this freezing climate.” “But you hate it when it’s warm too,” Xander pointed out, beginning to drag the carcass of the defeated wolf to the place they called home, nestled deep within the woods. |
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So far, I find this one of your more complex stories to date - then again, I haven't kept up everything you's written (it's a goal, though! =P), and the preponderance of names and titles already present in "Legacy's Dawn" perhaps gives me this impression of complexity. All three installments have been a fun read, and having mentioned names, I must add that your method of beginning with each primary character's name is a capital one - I like Tobias's and Kor's appellations especially. They fit the atmosphere of your story very well. (I have to blink whenever I come to Ne Ella's name, as I keep forgetting both words formulate one name.) I liked the conciseness of Xander's history in Part One, the descriptions of Two, and the peculiarities in Three. Fine work! ::sits back in expectation of Part Four:: =D
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The Absent-Minded Philosopher of Disorder
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Part 11 “Stand back.” Kor walked forward, against the voice of darkness. He didn’t fear anything dark, he lived in eternal darkness. Both women followed him regardless, terrified beyond belief at the specter before them. Ne Ella’s hands trembled, barely able to hold onto her guns. Hailey’s fur stood on edge, she was hissing frantically. Kor levered the staff in front of him, assuming a defensive stance against the unseen threat that had emerged from the Yea Medallion. He tapped the ground with his feet, the vibrations giving him a decent amount of knowledge about the room, and the figure before them. It was tall, about as big as he was. The magical aura around it made it dark in his mind’s eye, like everything else, only even more noticeable. In one hand, a small katana hung limply in his fingers, detectable through the wind currents it made as the figure swished it. Other than that, Kor had no idea what stood before him, waiting for his attack. Hailey and Ne Ella, on the other hand, saw its hooded body, the white-and-black tunic it wore, and the shrouded hood that covered its head, leaving only the grinning mouth exposed. The teeth flashed, and the warrior within the talisman chuckled, the voice echoing in Kor’s mind, vibrating inside his cranium. -Son of Madra- the voice commanded. -Why have you summoned me- “I am here for that Medallion,” Kor answered, though he was slightly confused. The Medallion spirit had just named him a Son of Madra, something he was not. He was a child of Earth, just like Tobias. “And there’s no Madra here, just Kor Hawkeye.” -Nonsense- it whispered. -I know Madra scent when I smell it, though yours is tainted with something…is that Shana- The grin increased in size. -Ah, it doesn’t matter. Only a descendant of Madra can summon me, so that must mean you need my precious Yea Medallion…- Kor nodded. “I need it to return a friend from Hyrule. And you’re not going to stop me.” He heard the figure laugh, but did not lower his walking cane. “Relinquish the Medallion to me.” The specter continued to laugh, taking a step forward. -Tell you what, Son of Madra- the specter said, its voice growing louder in Kor’s mind. -If you can defeat me, blind as you are, you can have it- “Deal,” Kor answered, crouching into his normal stance, preparing for combat. He hadn’t fought since Tobias had left, but he still remembered how to battle. The blind man summoned his strange senses together, the balance that was due his blindness. His scent picked up the blade’s steel, his hearing perked with each step and motion. He even felt every movement in the air. He didn’t call his blindness a skill, but it sure came in handy in facing the unknown. At least he never knew what it looked like. “Kor!” The blind man turned around to Ne Ella, and smiled. “I handled myself before you guys came,” he said softly, so she would understand. “I can do it again if I have to.” He didn’t know if that would make her less protective of him, but was fairly certain that she would understand. He brushed Ne Ella out of his mind, his ears searching once more for presence, for the specter that had emerged from the Yea Medallion. Kor’s arm blurred. The katana clanged against the walking cane, just at the precise moment when the blade spun down. Kor relaxed, it was just another sparing session with Tobias. The katana was the metal pipe, the museum room was the Academy’s training center, and the feeling in the pit of his stomach was nothing more than the thrill of battle. Kor parried, then delivered a kick to the windpipe of his opponent. The shade was thrown back, flipping calmly onto its feet. -Not bad, Son of Madra- Kor ducked immediately, sending a build up of magical energy. He bent himself backwards, just as something went whizzing over his chest, slamming into the wall behind him. Kor snarled, rushing in the direction of the blast, and felt the katana against his staff, vibration jarring him. With his fist, the specter was grabbed by the hood it wore, and was pulled back, flipped onto its back and slammed against the ground. Kor hammered the stick down hard against its chest. “Surrender,” Kor commanded, lifting the butt over where he heard the specter’s head. “I do not like fighting, but I will if you force me.” -Never- “Ne Ella! Colts!” Kor dodged, twisting his way out of the specter’s reach as it came up from behind him, the breeze it generated warning the blind man. On his order, two metal items whirled into the air, landing firmly in Kor’s arms. Cocking both guns, Tobias parried the katana edge with one of the handguns, and fired the second where he thought the stomach was, blasting a hole through the shade as he did so. Kor didn’t miss a beat, but neither did the shade, and both continued, blocking and striking with their respective weapons. Both shade and man lunged, Kor holding the upper hand only by a small inch. That was when the shade really kicked in, stabbing through the blind man’s shoulder in an attempt to disable him. Kor grunted, and Ne Ella shouted in protest, but he kept going, tossing one of the used guns away to the Hylian, and picking up the staff against. Kor dropkicked his opponent, blood flowing freely from his shoulder. The sting was annoying him, something he didn’t need. The pain he could take, the distraction in his senses he could not. Ne Ella, who could take it no longer, watched as the blind man battled, growing all the more tired as the battled continued. The wound from his shoulder looked bad, cutting deep into his flesh. Kor moved a second too late, and his weak shoulder caved in against the power of the shade. He fell, just as the specter raised its hand upwards, the katana slicing downwards. Ne Ella rushed forwards, her gun reloaded. |







