Half bird Half Human

hi gutys its me and im writing a story!
The story is about people called phenexians
(Phe_Nex_E_ens)They are half human half bird, theres human with feathers around their body they have wings and talons and beaks.
A few days later a guard came to Phenox’s Shack
“Phenox? The king wants to see you about you’re... Punishment...”
“Yes, fine” Replied Phenox with a sigh. Again! How many times is the king going to summon him!
When Phenox reached the castle he saw the king almost straight away, but there was something different about him, he seemed, just, different...But he ignored this and said.
“Greetings , King Phineus.What is my Punishment?
“Oh Phenox, Your Punishment, yes, you , from now on , will be my slave!
“ Whaaaaat?!”Cried Phenox “But I fell TWELVE YEARS AGO!”
“Yes, well. Goodbye Phenox.”
“But...”
“GOODBYE, Phenox.”
i hope you like it
that was a passage from my story!

Edit:Is nobody interested in my story? its my first story and nobody likes it?! oh man...