Okay, this is the one you've all been waiting for. Or at least, I hope you have. I have written up to chapter 6 already, but will continue to post one or two a week, so I'll still have time to write more (I've learned the hard way that it's best to have some material ready in case of Writer's Block, or last-minute appointments).
So, as is implied by the title, this is the sequel to my latest fan fiction,
Legend of Link: The Fatal Game. The title's obviously supposed to be like
AOL's. Don't worry, you'll know who Caleb is really soon...
After reading, please reply with
reports of typos and any form of criticism that will help me improve this story. Praise is welcome too, but try and keep it on the helpful side. No noobish "OMG, awsum!!!!!11!!!1!!!!"s in here, 'kay? Nor any "Wtf?! This sux!" Please, be constructive. A few promising threads have been locked because of such spam, so I'm warning you now not to let that happen here.
Additional info: As said before, chapters will come out every weekend. Usually just one, and usually on Saturday. But I may post two, one for each day, if I'm on a roll/on fire/whatever you want to call it, as long as you understand that I don't mean those figures of speech literally. Chapters may be revised after you read them, so feel free to read again if you'd like. I do it mostly for the benefit of new readers...and also to...clear things up (a.k.a. to make sense of mistakes I make later on that I thought were perfect ideas at the time). But don't worry, it won't always be anything that big.
First one (read it, or you'll be confused):
<<Legend of Link: The Fatal Game>>
I believe that is all...Enjoy!
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Legend of Link II: Adventure of Caleb Chapter 1
Link is not a normal Hylian. As you most likely know, he is the Hero of Time, the savior of Termina, and after being found by Fierce Deity, entered the Trivulian Tournament. After much hardships, he helped Dark Link fight Fierce Deity and Eleah (an Emotion electricity mage) at the interrupted fifth round. He saved Laura (though she really hadn't been in any danger), and married her five months later. It has been sixteen years since that time.
A lot of things are possible at this point. Dark Link, the Gray Wizard, and Hannah, his assistant, could find the whereabouts of the Death mage any second, and ask Link to tag along in fighting him. Possibly, Eleah could find a way to defeat the Death mage and visit them whenever he wanted. Link and Laura's marriage could suddenly become horrible for both parties. Or the world of Hyto, where they lived, could break out into war.
But this story is not about those possibilities, or an account of the sixteen years prior. It is about what is currently happening to this retired hero, on August 14, as he continues to live his wonderful life with Laura. He is currently in bed, blindly fumbling for the alarm clock to end its annoying reminder of the dawn's arrival.
Finally reaching it, he pushed the snooze button slowly, as if savoring his victory over the small piece of technology. As his sight became clear, he turned over to gaze into the shining emerald green eyes of his wife.
"Good morning," Laura whispered, before they kissed, as they did every day. She shifted and sat up, yawning quietly. The dark red sheets fell from her naked figure, and Link sneaked yet another quick glance before her black cloak materialized to cover her. It was a very weird summer, where it was cold in the morning and hot at night. They had started to go to sleep without any clothes, but with sheets, to keep their temperature medium. Link swung his legs out of bed, and stood up swiftly, as his jeans and white T-shirt appeared on him in the same fashion (this was the outfit that Laura had picked out for him). "What time is it?"
"Five thirty," Link replied, not knowing why she didn't just check herself. He grabbed his small orange bracelet from beside the alarm clock, and slipped it on.
"'Kay, let's wake up Caleb and his friends, they'll want more time to play their games..." she sighed, taking the silencing spell off of their room. The second she had done so, they heard an indistinguishable exclamation from downstairs: the very reason she had made the silencing spell last night. "Never mind, doesn't sound like we need to..."
"Don't tell me they stayed up all night..." Link said with a hint of rising anger.
Apparently not sensing their son's impending punishment, she joked, "'Kay, I won't tell you," and only made him feel angrier. This called for the worst weapon in his arsenal...
Without another word, Link stomped out of the room. Laura giggled as she heard a silence (obviously Caleb had turned the game off to futilely hide the noise). She reluctantly left the cover of the bed, and walked out into the hall to check on Sara and Lucia, their two daughters.
"And as punishment..." she heard Link's voice carry up the stairs. Finding Sara and Lucia sharing a room, she joined them in their laughter. "Caleb, hand me your controller. I get fifteen rounds, one-on-one. The rest of you take turns fighting me." And after a loud sigh from the group, the game started again. Laura led the girls downstairs, and into the kitchen for breakfast.
Their house was very big; almost like a mansion. Each room had at least ten square feet of open space, including the kitchen. Their refrigerator, counter, sink, cabinets, etc. were all on one wall, and the table stood five feet away, almost in the center. The rest of its area was for walking towards and away from the glass slide screen doors, which allowed them to view the magnificent lake behind the building. The kitchen was attached to the living room by an empty doorway, which also led to the staircase, and the three of them watched Link beating Caleb's friend, Steve, at Halo on their huge TV. They were soon bored of it, not caring for video games.
Laura filled three bowls with Frosted Flakes before Caleb walked in, looking resentful. He took the box, pouring his own bowl, and headed back, swiftly procuring a spoon from the drawer. Laura closed the forgotten drawer, and sat down across from Sara. As you may remember, Sara and Lucia were the names of Laura's best friends, and partners in her successful attempt at winning the Trivulian Tournament 20 years before. She and Link had decided that whichever gender their kids were, the parent of the same gender would name them. Link had wanted to name Caleb, their firstborn, after himself, but Laura insisted that they save his name for a son who looked exactly like him.
For, as I've implied, Caleb's similarities with Link stopped at his facial features. His eyes were green, and his hair jet-black. He looked like a young Eleah, though it was impossible for him to have had any part in it. Dark Link had told them the day after he was born that he had inherited their recessive traits for hair color, and it was only coincidence (it seemed that both Link and Laura were heterozygous blondes). To Laura's continued discontent, they had Lucia, and then Sara, who both had the same hair as her, but with Link's eyes. Of course, the worst of it all for Laura was that they only had three kids, when they'd been married almost sixteen years, and had had lots of chances to have more.
Sara wolfed down as much of the cereal she could, and jumped off her chair. "Mommy, can I go swimming?" she asked eagerly. Lucia ritually dumped Sara's cereal into her own bowl.
"You just ate! You have to wait an hour after eating before--"
"But I've done it before!
Please?"
"Oh, okay. But I'm coming too. What about you Lucia?" Lucia nodded, her mouth still full of cereal. Laura jumped away from her unfinished bowl, and stepped into the living room. "Link, we're gonna go swimming. If anyone wants to come, they can." And she walked out, still unnoticed.
"Damn Caleb, your dad's better than
you," Steve laughed, as the others agreed, staring in a mix of awe and hilarity at Link's skills.
"Shut up," Caleb said through gritted teeth, now wishing that he had made the others go to sleep. Link had practiced a lot more than him, since he had more opportunities to do so (Link didn't need to work since Laura still had a fortune saved over from her time as the Princess of Sonura which her parents weren't able to legally take back when they disowned her; she was a wizard too, so she could summon lots of things anyway). "The only reason he's beating you is because he's screen-peeking."
"So am I," Steve chuckled. "We all do it. I'm surprised you're so good when you don't... Crap, he's got a rocket launcher!"
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Fourteen hours later, Link knocked on Caleb's door, and as usual got no response. He pushed it open and found Caleb sitting on his bed, holding his iPod. It was the same scene, every time. The room was a mess, which Laura was repeatedly forced to clean up magically. His guitar was in the only empty corner. Equally immaculate posters of bands like U2, Def Leppard, Queen, and Oingo Boingo adorned the walls, completely covering them, and in some instances, overlapping.
Caleb scowled as he noticed Link, turning his music off. "What?"
Link disregarded Caleb's defiant tone. "Well...tomorrow--"
"
Crap, I forgot," Caleb interrupted, removing his headphones by yanking the iPod.
"We thought we'd spend the day here, so we hoped maybe you three could go somewhere with your friends or--"
"No," Caleb said firmly. "You do that every year! Don't you ever think we might have stuff to do at home too?"
Link raised his eyebrows. "And do you?"
"No, but it's the principle! You don't give us any freedom, any privileges--"
Link snatched the iPod from Caleb's hands. "Yeah, well what d'you call this? And your guitar? And your Xbox?"
"An iPod, a guitar, and an Xbox," Caleb said with even more steel to his voice.
Link sighed. "Look, why don't you just call Angela, see if you can go out tomorrow. I think her father said they'd be free this weekend--"
"We broke up," Caleb said flatly, removing his black cell phone from his pocket. "Which reminds me, I gotta take her outta my five..."
"You broke up?!" Link had done the same with Laura at one point, and was quick to ask, "Are you sure about this? I mean, you were always so happy with--"
"Pfft.
Happy? Being with her was
hell. She's got a damn superiority complex..."
Link calmed himself down, accepting this a lot easier than he thought he would. Their two families had become great friends, and now this...well, not everyone had his luck. It wasn't always that easy to pick the right person on the first try. "Laura's not gonna like this... She's been joking that you two were gonna get married for
ages. Half believed it myself... Please tell me it was mutual agreement. If it was either one of you separately who ended it, they'll look down on us as parents too, ya know."
"'Mutual agreement'? Do you know how stupid you sound saying that? No one
wants to break up. Just a matter of how long you can stand it. Relieved I'm through with that b--" he caught himself, and quickly improvised. "--that narcissist."
"Well...just go to Steve's," Link suggested, not picking up on Caleb's delay. "Get the band together; practice."
"I told you, we can't," Caleb said, irritated. He was the lead singer and guitarist for a small band he'd formed with fellow students at his high school. Last year they'd played at the talent show, and were now very popular. "We need new drums because Steve's broke his. That's why we were playing
Halo."
"Then play Halo at his house! Heck, it's summer! Go do something
outside!"
"No, I'm staying
inside," Caleb insisted, pulling his iPod back out of Link's grasp. "If it means that much to you, I'll stay downstairs, okay?"
Link sighed. "Okay, but the girls are going to Celia's, and you'll be alone. I knew you wouldn't want to go, so I didn't ask. Good night." He walked out, and Caleb resumed his song ("Rio", by Duran Duran). He thought darkly to himself,
just one more year 'til I get my license...then I'll drive away from this hellhole.
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Link awoke the following morning feeling extremely energetic. He shot straight up, and jabbed accurately at the snooze button, checking the time as he did. Laura yawned next to him. "Happy anniversary," she said, before he bent over and kissed her. "I'll go wake the girls, and you can get Caleb, 'kay?"
They got out of bed, dressed, and proceeded to follow the plan. Link found Caleb still asleep, somehow deaf to the very loud alarm (most likely as a product of staying up the night before). He jostled him awake, told him to meet him and the others for breakfast, and walked out, running down the stairs to prepare the food. He put five waffles in the toaster (for it was one with that capacity, thanks to Laura's modifications), and started to cook bacon and eggs in two frying pans by the time Laura, Sara, Lucia, and Caleb had entered the room. Laura summoned five plates, and they all sat down.
In less time than it normally took, all the food was done, and Laura teleported portions of each to every plate, followed by forks and knives on either side. "So," started Laura, "Juyk says he'd feel better if I brought you two there
physically. Thinks it'll be safer." She rolled her eyes, meaning she thought Juyk was being paranoid. Or maybe he hadn't entirely gotten over her... "So we'll be walking."
Juyk was the owner of a vintage store, which had somehow stayed in business for as long as anyone could remember. He had been infatuated with Laura for almost his whole life, but upon meeting Ruto, he had begun to control his desires. He'd gotten married to a woman named Jessica, and now had one daughter, Celia, who had befriended Lucia and Sara.
"So...Caleb..." Laura said slowly, not knowing what exactly she expected of him now. "I hear you broke up with Angela. Which one of you--?"
"Me."
"Why--?"
"She's bossy! I don't know why I even went out with her in the first place..." Caleb said angrily, stabbing his waffle with his fork and slicing it with the knife.
"Who're ya gonna date now?" Laura asked childishly. She snapped her fingers, and Caleb's phone appeared in her hand. She flipped it open and giggled. "You like Mary?"
"No! Give me that!" Caleb exclaimed, dropping his utensils and reaching for it. But Laura held it above her, and they both stood up as he struggled to try and take it back. A few seconds later, Laura got bored of it, and handed it to him gracefully. "Steve's her boyfriend. And
I think she's ugly."
"I know who he likes," Lucia said teasingly. "Claire. He even changed his schedule so they'd have all the same classes--"
"I do not, and
did not," Caleb lied. He had done exactly that, but...how did she know?! "That's only coincidence."
"But I heard you talking to John about her--"
"What, I'm not allowed to talk about girls unless I have a crush on them?"
"But you were saying how beautiful you thought she looked!"
"Yeah, so I can't have my own opinion?" Caleb shot back, trying his best to control the redness of his face. "I think Angela looks good too, but that doesn't change anything!"
"Well, we should get going," Laura said hastily. She leapt from her chair, leaving the completely uneaten food, which Link took as his own. Caleb did the same with Lucia and Sara's. The girls got up from the table and walked into the living room, and after about a minute, out the door.
"
Do you like her?" Link asked, thinking he'd have more luck. "I won't tell, I promise."
Not wanting to look like a liar, he replied, "No!" and pushed his loaded plate away, no longer hungry. "Is that all anyone cares about?!"
"I was just asking... You know, when I was your age, I didn't exactly have the opportunity--"
Caleb slowly rose from his seat and walked out, upstairs, and into his room. Link started to go after him, but stopped, thinking better of it. He had been telling him far too many times about his seven year journey in the Lost Woods, but still...a simple "You told me already" would've sufficed...
Caleb had already lost himself in his music ("All Star", by Smash Mouth). If he'd wanted a lecture on how his Dad had gone without all the privileges he now had, he would've asked for it. Lying in bed, he felt very comfortable, and his eyes closed involuntarily as the song continued, his place in it forever to be forgotten as he drifted into what his body felt was much deserved slumber.
His eyes burst open, and he turned to avoid the blinding light. He couldn't hear anything, and looked around to see his iPod next to his guitar, turned off. Link had been here, no doubt. He checked the time on his cellphone. 1:26. By now they'd probably moved on to that...so the house was basically his for another half hour. Only one thing to do: catch up on Halo training.
And so, after making sure his parents were in their bedroom, he settled himself into the living room sofa, his iPod playing every song he had on it. Though, he had not gotten his Xbox turned on before he heard what he now realized had awoken him: the doorbell. Cursing whoever was there, he ran to the door, looking through the windows on its side. For a second, Caleb was sure he was still sleeping. A pinch to his left arm told him differently. Standing on the steps to their house was Link, wearing a light gray cloak, and staring directly at him, as if to ask why he wouldn't answer the door. Beside him, there was a tall woman with brown hair, eyes, and cloak.
But Link was upstairs! He'd just checked...and who was this woman? Slowly, unsure of what to expect, he opened the door. The Link look-alike stepped forward, offering his hand to shake. "Hello Caleb. My name is Dark Link."
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