The legend of Nayru! Verans strike.

Whats an Parnodas

they will be explained in next chapter. A Blush, a crush and a Huge fright!

cool chapter name keep em coming

Great story!

I love fan fics. im also a post whore

Seriously though this is one great fan fic. keep up the good work.

Sorry I haven't replied in a while, it's really getting quite interesting, though! Wonder what a Parnodas or whatever is though...?

Well, I guess I'll find out soon enough, huh?

(And, by that, I mean, "Update soon!" )

you know i havent been on top of my story lately so, heres the next chapter. i am typing it up now so give me some time.

Blue rose up and jumped to the right once again. What Blue thought was strange however was that he knew exactly everything about the Parnodas. They were Raven like creatures but with razor sharp teeth and talons that could rip right through you. Blue was flailing his arms everywhere hoping not to get scratched and ripped apart. He saw a glimpse of light. He noticed a key in the mouth of a Randora. Still flailing he had to think of something. Blue encased himself in ice, then, Exploded with great power! As the shards shot up, the Parnodas fell to the ground one after one. While kneeling to grab the key, Blue had an idea. Once he unlocked the door on the floor he made a sword and shield out of ice and moved on. While walking down the stairs, Blue came to a floor that was dark and damp. He could not see anything. A blinding light flashed and the room filled with light. It was a small room with concrete bars revealing a prison cell and of course, prisoners. Blue ran to the cell seeing two people. One his age, in a blue dress with brilliant blue hair. There was another man in a gold robe with a jeweled crown. There backs were turned. Blue came to the bars. The girl turned... She smiled. She was beautiful to Blue. He tried to keep back a blush but the smile faded there was an empowering shaking. The girl started to tear.

“What is wrong? I can help!” Blue said with confidence.

“Because you will die….” That was the last thing she said before the terrible explosion.

Blue was sent flying back and hit the wall.

Blue gets bashed around alot dosent he?

Whoa! Was that Nayru? And, did she just explode?

That was unexpected.

Okay i am making a new thread for this so please understand that i need your help people/fans. i need you guys to put your votes there and i am fixing everything, just please put in your votes i will no longer be using this. i would really like to also hear your thoughts on making this a choose your own adventure Fic, if you know what that is.