(ZGen/Com/Act/Rom)The Legend of Zelda: The Queen of Evil(M)

This is a story I made up. It's about a war, and how Link get's caught up in it. In the war, Link mets up with many interesting people as well.

Prologue

There is a land called Delusuu, (credit to this land goes to Shrub) which is home to a race. A cold hearted race. The race is called, Dark Elves. The Dark Elves are very different from Hylans. The color of their skin isn’t a tanish color, their skin is black. The color of their hair is white, white as snow. Delusuu can be found southwest of Hyrule. The capital city of Delusuu is called Delu. Delu is a very rough city. If you walk down the streets of Delu without some kind of weapon, you’re bound to be killed by something. Delu is like an oasis in the middle of the harsh desert of Suu. Oddly enough though, there are many farms located in the desert Suu.

Of coarse, like many other races, the dark elves have a ruler, a queen to be exact, a queen named Rova. Rova, is a demon, born in the Dark Realm and summoned to The World of Hyrule by an evil wizard. Rova hates happiness and love and all that s*** so she sends armies, powerful armies to destroy other lands, and she has newly thought of invading and destroying Ranelu.

Ranelu (credit of this land goes to Shrub) is another land, located Southeast of Hyrule. Ranelu is home to another race, the race of the wood elves. Unlike the Dark Elves, the Wood Elves are a peaceful race. Ranelu is rich with beautiful trees, much like the Kokiri Forest in Hyrule. Normally The people of Ranelu wouldn’t take part in war, but if war were to actually happen the Wood Elf race won’t just sit around and nothing about it, they’ll kick some @$$.

The king of Ranelu is named Roland, and (like everyone else in Ranelu) is very peaceful. Although, that all changed when the Dark Elves attacked. Most of the king’s family had been killed, except his son, Kakashi, and he is willing try anything to get his son back.

I Know it may be a little short, but hey it's a prologue. It's not really supposed to be long.
I'll probably have the first chapter done in a few days.

Chapter 1

It has been exactly five years since Link left to find Navi, but he found nothing. Then Link admitted to himself that he would never find Navi. So Link decided to go back to go back to Hyrule. When he got back to Hyrule he first went to the Kokiri Forest.

The second he set foot in the forest he was greeted by a loud scream. “He’s here,” screamed a little girl with familiar green hair. Right after she said this she rushed over and gave Link a giant hug. “I’ve missed you so much, Link.” said the girl, “I missed you too Saria,” said Link with a smile. Link then let go of Saria and heard, “Link’s here everybody,” said another familiar voice. Link looked and saw it was Mido, “Hey, Mido,” said Link. Then everybody came rushing out of their houses celebrating Link’s return with food everybody was preparing.

After a good minute or so of celebrating, Link asked,
“How did you all know I was coming back home today,” everybody stopped and looked at Mido, who cleared his throat and said,
“The Great Deku Tree foresaw you coming and called me. He asked me to tell to go see him the second you got back you go and see him,”
“Why?” asked Link,
“I don’t know, but he said it was very important that he Speak to you,” replied Mido,
“O.k. I’ll go over there right now,” said Link as he left.

When Link got to the meadow where the Great Deku Tree was He said, “Um…hello…Great Deku Tree… you wanted to see me?” asked Link, looking up at the Great Deku Tree.
“Yes, Link I called upon thee,” said the tree,
“Um…for what reason Great Deku Tree?” asked Link,
“Well Link, I summoned thou because I sense a disturbance from the south, a war to be exact,” he said, “I know it may not concern us, but I just have a feeling that the troubles from the south may soon effect this land also, maybe I’m just being a little of a worried wart… go ahead and celebrate your return with the rest of the Kokiri,”
“Well, thanks, and nice seeing you again Great Deku Tree,” said Link,
“Nice seeing thee again too,” said the tree.

As Link walked through the narrow pathway ahead he saw most of the sages. There was Zelda (Sage of Time), Darunia (Sage of Fire), Ruto (Sage of Water), Sheik (Sage of Shadow), and Nabooru (Sage of Spirit). They all ran up to Link and greeted him, with a hug, but when Darunia tried to give Link a hug, Link took a few steps back and said, “Uh, that’s ok Darunia, a handshake will do,” he said hoping Darunia would say ok, “Don’t be crazy, now come over here and give me a hug. Links then gulped and slowly walk over to Darunia with open arms. Darunia then snatched him off the ground and gave him a giant goron hug. Link felt very uncomfortable and gave a little grunt. Then Link tried to squirm out of the deadly goron hug and finally Darunia let him go and fall to the ground. Then Link got back up grabbing his shoulder.
“So how did all of you know I was coming back today… did the Great Deku Tree tell you I was coming back today too?” asked Link,
“No, actually we all had a feeling something was gonna happen at the Kokiri Forest today, so we all left and came here, then we found you,” said Zelda,
“Oh,” said Link,
“It’s because we’re all linked together,” said a voice,
“Who is that?” asked Ruto,
“Oh, how disappointing…non of you even remember me,” said the voice,
“Then a flash of golden light appeared in front of them. Then from the light appeared a familiar old face. It was Rauru, the sage of light.
“Rauru…I almost forgot about you,” said Link. Rauru then gave frown, then had a smile and gave Link a handshake.

Then out of nowhere Link got hit in the back of the head by a certain blue fairy. This hit made Link fall over on his chest.
“Where the f*** were you, I looked everywhere for you!” exclaimed the fairy, who was starting to glow a pink color of anger. Then Link got up and said,
“Navi? Is that you? Why are you angry? I should be angry at you for leaving?” said Link,
“I was on vacation, stupid! I even left a note in your house saying I was gonna be on vacation!” said Navi,
“What? I never saw a note,” said Link,
“IT WAS RIGHT NEXT TO THE DOOR!” said Navi really loudly, grabbing all the Kokiri’s attention from within their houses.
“Oh,” said Link nervously,
“Oh…OH…THAT’S ALL YOU HAVE TO SAY FOR YOURSELF…OH!” scolded Navi, then Link gave Navi an innocent smile as she turned an angry red color. This smile on Link’s face soon faded as Navi then charged at Link, hitting him in the eye,
“Ahhh, my eye!” said the hurt Hylan. Then he looked straight back at Navi (with the eye he could see with). Navi then charged again, hitting link in the forehead, which gave him a little lump.
“Um… Navi I know you’re mad,” but before Link had a chance to finish Navi charged once more, Link quickly dodged her, but this only made Navi even angrier. Link then saw this and ran, and Navi was right behind him. Navi then hit Link in the back of the head a couple of more times. Then out of nowhere Navi stopped and said, “Link wait, look in front of you,” but Link kept running and said, “You’re not gonna trick me Navi,” said Link as he ran into the side of Saria’s house with a giant thud. Link then fell over on his back. Everyone rushed over to Link and stared at him. Link then opened his eye and saw everyone staring down at him “Ow,” said the hurt Hylan. Then everybody in the forest started busting out laughing.

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Link was sitting alone on the edge of the cliff that leads to the entrance of the Forever Forest looking down the group of sages who were talking about something. Zelda then came over and sat next to Link.
“Uh… pretty um… interesting, what happened earlier on,” she said with a smile,
“You mean humiliating,” said the Hylan who’s face was a burning red,
“Oh, don’t be silly it wasn’t,” then Zelda saw the look on Link’s face, it had one black eye, on the right side, the left side of his face was covered in scratches, and he had one lump in the middle of his head.
“Ok it was, but still, it doesn’t mean you can’t come with us to the castle to celebrate your return,” said the kind princess,
“Ok,” said Link. Link then stood up, where Zelda stuck out her arm. Link looked at her arm then at her, “Aren’t you going to escort me down,” she said with a smirk. Link’s cheeks then turned a light pink, “Uh…sh-sure,” he said as he took her hand and Zelda came in and softly kissed Link on the right cheek.
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The whole group of Sages (except Saria, who stayed in the Kokiri forest) and Link walked down the path to Hyrule Castle with Link in the front. Everyone behind Link had a great big smile, because of what happened earlier in the day. Every time Link looked back at them they would make their faces straight. Then finally Link said, “Ok, I know, it was funny, ha ha ha, let’s just move along and forget what happened back there, ok?” then every body started laughing again. Link then looked down at his feet and his face turned a deep red,
“Link, I’ve seen some dumb things before, but that, was, the dumbest,” said Darunia,
“Ok, take it a little easy there,” said Link,
“Ok guys, I think Link had enough,” said Zelda trying to keep back her little chuckles,
“We need to continue our coarse to Hyrule castle,” said Zelda,
“Actually I was wondering if we could stop by Lon Lon Ranch, you know, to see Malon,” said Link. Then a frown appeared in front of Zelda’s face. Then she wiped the frown off and said, “Ok, I guess we could stay for the night,” she said as she looked to see the sun about to setting.

The whole group soon arrived at Lon Lon Ranch. “Huh… this place has changed since I last saw it,” said Link as he looked at the ranch that doubled in size.
“That’s because Hyrule has been getting a large amount of visitors,” then everybody looke at the little ranch girl in front of them,
“They come from the south, and first thing they see is this ranch so they just come here, so we build inns, so they can have a place to stay for the night,” said the ranch girl. Link then gave her a smile, “Nice to see you again Link,” said Malon. She then scurried over to Link and gave him a hug, which made Zelda a little pissed off.
“Um… Malon,” said Link,
“Yes Link,” said Malon
“Could you let go of me?” said Link,
“Oh, sorry,” said Malon, and by this time Zelda was very, very angry.
“Oh… who are all these people you brought with,” asked Malon,
“Oh them, they’re just some close friends, they’re names are Darunia, leader of the Gorons. Nabooru, leader of the Gerudos. Ruto, princess of the Zoras. Zelda, princess of Hyrule. Impa, Zelda’s caretaker,” said Link,
“Wow, you know a lot of important people Link,”
“Well,” said Link.
“So, Malon… is it alright if we stay for the night,” asked Zelda who was trying her best to keep a smile on her face,
“Oh of coarse you can stay, but I’ll have to see if we have a few vacant rooms. Oh and if my dad says it’s ok,” she said,
“Come and follow me to the entrance,” she said,
“Thanks, I’m not used to walking for so long,” said Ruto.

Chapter 2

Link and everybody else were sitting in the corner of the main building (which would be the first building to the left) waiting for Malon’s return. Link looked around and saw the house had changed as well. There was a big desk in front of the stairs with a notebook with all the guest’s names. Link saw that Talon still kept a few cuccos in the building, they’re probably the super cuccos Talon was talking about last time he talked to him. Finally Malon walked down the stairs and looked at the group with a smile. “Ok, I asked my dad if you guys can stay here for free… and he said no. But he did say you can stay here at half price,” said the little ranch girl,
“Well that’s ok, how much is it?” asked Link,
“About 20 rupees each,” she said,
“Ok,” said Link as he gave Malon the rupees,
”Thanks… Follow me,” she said.

Link and co. walked down the green grass to a three foot high building. As Link walked along he started looking around and saw there were four new buildings that were added to the ranch. Link then saw an old man walking around ‘Probably one of the guest’ thought Link. As the group got closer he was very surprised to see the man, he looked as though he was one hundred fifty years old, which struck Link as odd, because from his earlier travels, Link learned that it’s almost impossible for Hylans to go past the age of eighty. Link then asked Malon,
“Who these people again,”
“Oh them, they’re just some visitors that came from the south,” she said,
“You don’t think it’s strange that a lot of them just started coming here,”
“Not really, Hyrule is a beautiful place this time of year,” she said. Then Link remembered what the Great Deku Tree told him ‘I sense a disturbance from the south, a war to be exact’ then Link said,
“Maybe they’re refugees,”
“What… refugees?” said Zelda,
“Yeah, back in the Kokiri Forest the Great Deku Tree told me there was a war happening in the South,” he said,
“War is a horrible thing,” said Nabooru,
“I remember the war we had twelve years ago, it was horrible,” half of the Gerudo race was destroyed. It was when Ganodorf’s dark side first surfaced,” said the Gerudo. Everybody then walked up to the building in the middle of all the other inns.

Everybody walked into the inn and made their way up to the third floor. Then Malon stopped and said, “Ok, listen, we only had three rooms, they each have two beds, so you are all gonna have to choose your roommate,” then everybody looked at each other.
“Well, I’m Zelda’s caretaker so I’ll be her roommate,” said Impa,
“I guess I’ll be with Nabooru,” said Ruto,
“And I’ll be with the same room as Link,” said Rauru,
“But what about Darunia,” said Link,
“It’s ok, when I was younger I used to travel all around Hyrule, I’ll be ok sitting outside,” said the Goron,
“Well if you’re sure,” said Malon.
“I’m sure,” said the Goron. So everybody entered their rooms and went to sleep.

Chapter 3

Link woke up in a daze. He looked over to his left and saw Rauru had left somewhere. Link then got out of bed and went out the door. He slowly walked down the oddly quite hallway. He looked to his left and saw every five feet there was a vase full of roses. He looked to his right and he saw a vase full of carnations. Made his way to the stairs that was made of flimsy wood. Every time he stepped on a step it would make squeaky noise like if it were about to break. He made it to the first floor and went outside to the fresh air.

He looked around for a while and saw a few kids walking around, they were about three or four years younger than him. He went over to them and asked whom they were,
“Who are you guys?” then the kids looked up at him, and then Link gave them a little half smile.
“He’s Rayu, he’s Leon, and I’m Brolio,” said the oldest child,
“Oh,” said Link as he looked at what they looked like. Rayu (who was twelve years old) had light blue eyes and dark brown hair. He wore a brown shirt, and black pants. Leon (who was twelve also) had dark brown eyes and black hair. He wore a light blue shirt and white pants. Brolio (who was thirteen) had hazel eyes and very dark blue hair. He wore a jet black shirt and blue pants.
“I’m Link. You wouldn’t happen to know where I could get something to eat around here,”
“Yeah, right over there,” said Brolik pointing to a small building with the words ‘Breakfast, Lunch, and Dinner’ written over the door, then under it said 'Diner'.


Link walked into the building and saw that everybody was already eating breakfast. Link went over to the counter and ordered some food. Link saw Ruto was eating by herself so he went to her table and sat in front of her.
“So… Ruto… you’ve been quiet the whole trip over here. Is something bothering you?” said Link,
“I don’t really feel like talking… to you,” said Ruto with the slight bit of anger in her voice,
“What do you mean?” asked Link,
“You know very well what I mean,” said Ruto starting to slightly raise her voice. Link starting to get confused,
“I saw you and Zelda holding hands,” said Ruto with a calmer voice,
“I still don’t know why you’re so mad?” said the very confused Hylian,
“You promised to marry me,” said Ruto. At that same time Link suddenly remembered what she was talking about, ‘I guess you can call it, the Zoran engagement ring’ thought Link.
“I told you what giving you the sapphire meant and you took it without any second thought,” she said as she started to sob,
“I’m sorry, but I was only ten. I lived with the Kokiri my whole life and they didn’t know what marriage was either. I’m sorry,” said Link, looking at the crying Zora in front of him. Link then looked around and saw everyone in the room was looking at him. Ruto then stood up and ran out of the building and link went and ran after her.

Ruto rushed into her room with tears in her face. Ruto then laid down on her bed and started to sob. Link then knocked on her door and said,
“Ruto! We need to talk about this,” said the concerned Hylian,
“We don’t need to talk about anything!” screamed Ruto,
“Please Ruto,” he said,
“Just go away,” she said sobbingly, Link then turned around and punched the wall as hard as he could and made a hole, then left.


Link was sitting in the stables next to the cows and horses thinking of what to do, when Malon walked in.
“Link, what happened back in the diner?” she said, but Link didn’t answer,
“Link!” she said again,
“Huh,” he said as he looked at Malon,
“Oh, it’s you,” he said,
“What happened back there? I just walked in to see how you all were doing and out of nowhere I heard yelling and you and Ruto ran off?”
“It’s a long story, if you have the time I can tell you it?”
“I have time. I don’t do my chores for another hour or so,” she said. So Link filled her in on everything about, the sapphire, and the marriage, everything.
“Wow, it sounds to me that you have a lot of fixing up to do,” she said,
“Yeah, I know,” he said,
“Well, tell me when you’ve got it all figured out,” she said,
“What!” he protested, thinking that she might give him some advice,”
“Just kidding. Look, she just needs some time alone, that’s all, and this will all blow over before you know it,”
“Are you sure?”
“Positive,”
“(sigh) Well…alright,” said Link as he got up and left with Malon.


Zelda was sitting at a table talking with her caretaker when the big scene between Link and Ruto just happened.
“What just happened?” said Zelda confusedly,
“I think I know what happened,” said Impa,
“I remember once when I was delivering a message to the Zoras, I stopped and noticed a Zora who held the spiritual stone in her hands. My guess is that it was Ruto’s mother. I asked her what it was she was holding and she told me it was the Zora’s Sapphire, but she also told me that it is much more than that. To the Zoras it also signified marriage,” then Zelda realized what had just happened right now between Link and Ruto.
“Oh my, I can’t imagine how hurt she must feel,” said Zelda,
“Well it’ll be best if we leave her alone for a while,” said Impa,


Link walked in the diner with a frown on his face. Everyone saw him come in and stared at him for a while then they resumed their privies conversations. Zelda then walked over to Link and sat next to him.
“Link,” she said, Link didn’t hear her,
“Link!” she said louder,
“Huh,” he said,
“Oh, you’re probably wondering what happened earlier,”
“No, Impa told what giving you the Zora Sapphire meant to Ruto,”
“Oh… what do you think I should do?” he asked her,
“Just give her some time, she probably just wants some time alone,”
“That’s what Malon said. I just feel like I should do something to help her feel better,”
“Sometimes you just need to let things resolve on their own,” said Zelda. Link then gave Zelda a smile, and she smiled back.

At that exact moment the doors blew open and a Dark Elf came in. The elf came in at a towering seven feet tall. He wore black pants a white shirt and a black trench coat. He looked around with his scarlet red eyes and saw a few certain elves. “You kids over there,” he said. Link looked over and saw that he was pointing at Brolio and his friends. “You kids are coming with me,” he said ignoring everybody else in the room,
“You stay away from them!” exclaimed Link pulling out his sword,
“I have no business with you, High Elf. I’m only here for the Wood Elves,” said the towering Dark Elf who was about ¾ of a foot taller that Link,
“You’re not taking anyone from here,” said Darunia who walked in front of Link,
“Yeah exactly,” said Nabooru also walking in front of Link, but the man didn’t even seemed fazed about the uprising of the Goron and Gerudo. He just raised his hand and it started to glow. Everybody just stared confusedly at it. Then a giant wave of energy shot out and everybody was thrown backwards into the wall. He then walked over to Brolik and his friends and said,
“Brolik… you and you’re friends are coming with me,”
“No way Droz, I’m staying here,” said Brolio,
“I was given specific orders to take you to Queen Rova unharmed,” he said
“But I don’t think she’ll mind if you were knocked unconscious,” he said as he raised his to shoot another energy blast, but then out of nowhere Darunia tackled Droz from his side. “Bastard,” swore Droz under his breath as he went crashing through the wall. Link then came and rushed to the younger children.
“It’s ok, I’ll get you out of here,” said the Hero of Time,
“What about the brown guy,” said Rayu,
“Darunia can handle himself,” said Link confidently,
“WATCH OUT!” screamed Leon as Darunia came flying right in front of them almost hitting Link,
“We have to get out of here now,” said Brolik,
“Ok,” said Link pulling out a piece of paper and writing something down.
“Impa, Nabooru, Rauru, come over here,” said Link,
“Take each kid and get out of here. For some reason this guy is after them and we need to keep them safe. I think Darunia and I can take this guy,” said Link.

Note: this is my first fight scene, so please excuse it if it’s crappy.

Chapter 4

Darunia then got up and charged at Droz. Link then ran in front of him and yelled, “Stop! If we want to stop him we’re gonna have to work together,”
“Ok brother,” said Darunia,
“You sneak up from behind while I distract him,”
“Ok,” Link said. Link then took out his sword and charged at Droz, with Darunia right behind him. Droz then got ready for an attack from Link, but then Link sidestepped left and Darunia from behind started swinging his giant fists, but Droz easily dodged all of his swings. Droz was too busy to notice where Link was so Link positioned himself behind him and when Droz got in the right spot He slashed at his side, unfortunately the hit had a minimal effect. He looked at Link very angrily and then and started going after Link.

Zelda (who was still in the room) went and hid behind the counter. Droz then started shooting energy blasts and Zelda noticed that his blasts were magic blasts. Zelda then started saying an incantation Impa taught her. After a while, Droz got Link in the shoulder with one of his energy blasts and again in the chest, which made Link go back a few feet. Droz went in for the kill when Darunia then stepped in and hit him really hard in the spine, breaking his back. Droz fell to the ground gasping for air. Link got up and went to Darunia’s side.
“Good job Darunia,” he said,
“Thanks brother,” said Darunia looking at Droz.
“You’re not… finished… with me… yet,” said Droz moving around on his hands,
“You can’t win,” said Link,
“You don’t know anything…boy,” said Droz,
“You can’t even walk. Face it, you’ve lost,” said Link. Droz made his way to a table and helped himself on to his feet. Link and Darunia looked curiously at what he was doing. He then stumbled his wall to the wall and leaned against it. He then put his hands together and started saying something. A flash of light then came from his body. After the light cleared up, out came Droz standing on his feet as if his back had never broke. He then made his way to link and Darunia.
“I told you… you don’t know anything…boy,” said Droz.
“Darunia,” said Link,
“Yeah brother,”
“I think we’ll need some help taking this guy down,”
“I think so too,”


Nabooru, Impa, and Rauru ran into the stables, where they found Malon who was cleaning the animals.
“Malon!” yelled out Impa,
“Yeah,” she said,
“We need horses,” said Nabooru,
“What for?” she asked,
“There is a man after us and we need to get out of here as soon as possible so nobody gets hurt,” said Rauru,
“How many horses do you need?” she asked,
“Four. we need four horses”


Link was standing there looking at the merciless dark elf. Droz then pulled out a couple of swords from his side and said,
“Enough fooling around. It’s time to get rid of you two,”
“Not without a fight,” said Link and Darunia.

Droz observed his adversaries very carefully. He looked at Darunia and then looked at Link. He saw Link was bleeding from his shoulder. Link looked back at him and finally noticed this and thought, ‘I’m bleeding…probably from that energy blast.’ Link then put on hand on his chest and thought, ‘If that first one made me bleed how come the second didn’t? The second was probably weaker, but why did he make it weaker. He could have killed me, but he didn’t.’ Droz then gave Link and Darunia a sadistic little smirk.
“You’re probably wondering why that blow to the chest didn’t kill you, kid. Well, just so you know, I did try to kill you. I don’t know why it didn’t, but I don’t care, cause all it did was delay the inevitable, you two are going to die,” said Droz,
“Yeah, but hopefully in about seven decades,” said Link. Droz then charged at Darunia. He slashed at Darunia with his left blade. Darunia quickly dodged, but Droz expected this and so he slashed at him with his other sword. Darunia dodged, but it barely nipped him in the side. “Huh, you’re slow. You’re gonna have to be faster if you want to live,” said Droz. He then charged at Darunia one more time, only this time his blades magically turned into daggers. Thanks to his smaller blades Droz was now faster and put Darunia in a disadvantage, but also, thanks to his smaller blades, Droz now had to get closer to make contact, and with Darunia huge hands, it put Droz at a disadvantage also.

Droz then charged at Darunia. He swung with his left dagger and missed, but with his right dagger he got him in the shoulder and made a deep cut. Darunia then got hit in the head with Droz’s boot. Darunia then went stumbling backwards. Droz saw this and went on the attack once again. Droz was about five feet away from him, when he got slashed in the back. He then turned around and saw Link with his sword out with Droz’s scarlet red blood. “You, little, bastard,” he swore at Link. Darunia regained his balance and saw Droz left himself open for attack. Darunia went for this and charged at Droz. Droz (who was acting like he left himself open) quickly turned around and made one of his daggers into a sword. Darunia ran into Droz’s sword. The end of the sword pierced through his skin and went straight through his body. Droz kicked Darunia off his sword and on to the floor and left Darunia for dead.

Link looked at Darunia on the floor. Darunia was flat on his back with his hand on his wound. Darunia then started coughing up blood. Droz then started laughing maniacally and walked over to Darunia. He looked down at Darunia with a big sadistic smile on his face. “Pathetic,” said Droz, as he put his boot on Darunia’s gash. He then pushed his boot into the wound, which made Darunia scream in pain. Droz put his boot down and then started laughing again. He then put his hand in the air and aimed his palm at Darunia. He his hand then started to glow once again. “Good bye,” he said as he pulled back his hand and pushed it forward and let out another energy blast. The blast then came straight to Darunia’s face then disappeared. “What the f***?” said Droz confusedly, “Who the f*** did that!” said Droz looking around. He then looked at Link and then stopped completely, like if he was frozen stiff. He then closed his eyes and listened for the culprit who stopped his energy blast.

Link saw Droz standing still and thought ‘There’s an opening!’ he then picked up his sword and got ready for an attack he took on step and out of nowhere he heard someone yell out ‘STOP!’ Link then stopped as the voice commanded. He looked around trying to figure out who said it. Link then looked at Droz to see if he heard it, but he was still in the same place with his eyes closed. Link then thought
‘Oh my gods. I almost walked into a trap’
‘Yes you did, Link’ Link looked around really freaked out.
‘Who are you?’ thought Link,
‘In time’ said the voice solemnly.

Link looked at Droz who was still in the same position. Then out of nowhere Droz opened his eyes and said, “You f****** s***,” Droz then grabbed a knife from under his trench coat and threw it at the counter. After he threw it you can hear a girl scream. Zelda then jumped up from behind the counter. “You b****. It was you. You were saying an incantation that made my magic useless. Well, just so you know, I don’t let anybody mess with my magic,” Droz then started mumbling another incantation to counter what Zelda did. Droz then picked up his hand and it stated to glow. “I hoped you lived a good life, because I’m about to end it,” said Droz. The glow from his hand started to glow even stronger when the voice said ‘Now blondie, he’s open.’ Link then ignored the blonde comment and charged at Droz.

Link got Droz in the back right before he shot at Zelda. Link made a very deep and long cut in his back. It was at least and two inches deep and went from the back of one shoulder to the back of the other. Droz dropped his swords and fell to his knees in pain, but then he quickly got back up.
“You little bastard,” said Droz,
“You’re not going to hurt anyone,” said Link, but Droz then gave a chuckle,
“You think you can stop me. I suppose you’re gonna stop me like you stopped me from killing that goron over there,” Link suddenly remembered about Darunia who laid on the ground of the diner lifelessly,”
‘Darunia’ thought Link,
“Yeah. You’re a real hero. You’re such a coward. Even when he was on the ground and I was ready to kill him, you just stood there, stupidly,” said Droz. Link then looked at his feet, ashamed,
“Yeah… you’re a real hero,” said Droz,
“Don’t listen to him Link!” said Zelda,
“No… he’s right, but just because I messed up once doesn’t mean I’ll mess up again,” said Link.

Then out of nowhere Droz started clapping very slowly. Then he said,
“Nice speech kid, but I think it’s too late for talk, it’s too late to save your goron friend and it’s too late to save yourselves,” Droz then picked up his swords off the floor and Looked at Link. Link looked back at Droz and said,
“No… good will always prevail,”
“Oh please, even if by some miracle that you defeat me, others will take my place. Queen Rova will make sure that you’re disposed of, and that the children are taken to her,” said Droz,
“Just answer me on thing. Why do you need the kids?”
“That is none of your business you ignorant little fool,” said Droz starting to get annoyed,
“Link,” said Zelda, “You won’t fight alone,”
“Hehehe, like a couple of sixteen year olds are gonna stop me,” said Droz,
“You have no idea what we can do,” said Link.

Zelda put her hands together and then they started to glow a yellow glow. She then shot out a blast of magic, but Droz easily dodged this. Zelda then shot out even more blasts. She finally realized that her attacks were too slow and she needs faster attacks. Zelda then put her hands together and her hands started to glow a different color, a red color. Droz then looked at Zelda with a look on his face that looked as though he knew what she was going to do. Droz raised one of his swords and mumbled some thing that made the sword glow a purplish-black. Zelda then started shooting, but it wasn’t normal blasts, they were razor sharp disks that looked as though they could go as fast as the speed of light. Droz knew how fast these disks were and knew he wouldn’t be able to dodge them, so instead he blocked with his newly strengthened sword. While Zelda was shooting magic disks, Link snuck behind Droz. Link then charged at Droz on the other side, but Droz anticipated his attack, and blocked with his other sword. What the battle looked like was very astounding Link was attacking endlessly while Droz was blocking every blow, and Zelda was still shooting and Droz was still blocking them also. This continued for a few more minutes when Droz finally had enough and tried something very risky. Droz quickly jumped away escaping with only a small cut on the shin. Unfortunately for Link he wasn’t expecting for him to jump out of the way and was cut across the cheek. Zelda was very startled to see that she accidentally hit Link. Although Link didn’t really care, because it was only a smile cut, not really a big deal.
“Link. Are you ok?” said Zelda worriedly,
“Yeah. It’s just a small cut,” Link said, he then looked at Zelda who looked really relieved to hear him say that. Link and Zelda then looked at Droz and then Link said to Zelda, “Zelda. I think I have an idea that might work, but it’s very risky. Are you up for it?”
“Of coarse, Link,” said Zelda.

If anybody even bothers to read this (and I'm surprised if they do) please post so I know if people think it's good or bad.

Just so you reader know, I made some small changes in the story, don't worry, all I did was change the ages. Link is now 16, Brolik is now 13, and Rayu and Leon are now 12

In light of recent events I was forced to change a character, Brolik's name, his new name is now Brolio.

The fight scene was awesome@ I wish I could write a fight like that. Now the nex part of this post is filled with upmost regret

Originally Posted by onilinkc4

Link then looked at his feet, ashamed,
“Yeah… you’re a real hero,” said Droz,
“Don’t listen to him Link!” said Zelda,
“No… he’s right, but just because I messed up once doesn’t mean I’ll mess up again,” said Link.

Originally Posted by onilinkc4

“four, we need four horses”

Originally Posted by onilinkc4

“Nice speech kid, but I think it’s too late for talk, it’s too late to save your goron friend and it’s too late to save yourselves,” Droz then picked up his swords off the floor and Looked at Link, Link looked back at Droz and said,
“No… good will always prevail,”
“Oh please, even if by some miracle that you defeat me, others will take my place, Queen Rova will make sure that you’re disposed of, and that the children are taken to her,” said Droz,

Comma splices! Ever since my English teacher attacked me with these, I've seen them everywhere. You need to look over these sentences and many others. Word does nothing to help. I meant that too. Comma splices can be fixed three ways. I'll fix this sentence that Droz makes.

Originally Posted by onilinkc4

Oh please, even if by some miracle that you defeat me, others will take my place, Queen Rova will make sure that you’re disposed of, and that the children are taken to her,

1. Change the comma ( , ) into a semicolon ( ; ).

Oh please, even if by some miracle that you defeat me, others will take my place; Queen Rova will make sure that you’re disposed of, and that the children are taken to her.

2. Change the comma into a period ( . ) and capitalize the next letter.

Oh please, even if by some miracle that you defeat me, others will take my place. Queen Rova will make sure that you’re disposed of, and that the children are taken to her.

3. Add a coordinating conjunction (FANBOYS)

For
And
Nor
But
Or
Yet
So

Oh please, even if by some miracle that you defeat me, others will take my place, and Queen Rova will make sure that you’re disposed of, and that the children are taken to her.

Sorry about this long post of grammar, but keep posting! I am loving this story. I'll be on the lookout for grammar mistakes. *Sails to other fics to find grammar mistakes*

Chapter 5

After going over the plan to defeat Droz Link and Zelda got ready to get rid of him once and for all. Link swiftly ran behind Droz. While Zelda (instead of shooting magic blasts) took out the light arrows she had she had in her magical satchel (bag) which if you put something in there it magically shrinks. Link swiftly pulled out his mirror shield. Droz just looked at them and said,
“Hehehe, you can’t win… well I admire your will to go on, but it’s useless, just give up,” Link and Zelda just gave him a smirk and said,
“It’s not over yet,” Zelda then shot two light arrows at Droz. Droz quickly put up his swords and tried to block them, but the second the arrows touched the swords, the swords broke and the dark glow around them faded. “You little b****” swore Droz. Link knowing that Droz was now defenseless went on the attack. Droz forgot Link was behind him and so Droz got slashed in the back. Droz quickly turned around and saw that it was Link. He then quickly kicked Link in the stomach, making Link go a few feet backwards. “I’m getting really tired of this, just tell me where the kids are and I’ll leave you alone,” said Droz,
“Never,” said Link. Droz then charged at Link. Zelda quickly got another light arrow and shot it at Droz and got him straight in the back. Droz yelled in pain from the attack and from the arrow came yellow lightening which went all over his body (similar to what happened to Ganodorf when Link shot him with a light arrow) and put Droz in even more pain. Droz then swiftly got back up and looked at Zelda. At this point Droz was very angry and shouted “ENOUGH! I DON’T EVEN CARE ABOUT THOSE BASTARD KIDS. NOW ALL I CARE ABOUT, IS KILLINNG, YOU, BOTH,” Droz then looked at Link then to Zelda then back at Link. Droz then charged towards Link and kicked him in the stomach. Link then hunched over in pain, and then Link dropped his sword and shield, and Droz just took advantage over this and grabbed his head to keep him still and he just started kneeing him over and over in the solar plexus. Link then started coughing up blood. Droz then grabbed Link by the shirt and threw him very far into the field. Link then got back up and looked at Droz. Droz once again charged at Link, but this time he pulled out a knife he had under his trench coat.

Zelda saw the knife, so she then put another light arrow on her bow and shot it at Droz. Droz wasn’t paying attention to Zelda at the time, and so he was hit Droz in the arm. Once again yellow lightening surged through his entire body making him scream in pain and fall to the ground. Droz quickly got up and Looked at Zelda and Link and he just started laughing hysterically. Then out of nowhere again, Droz yelled out very loudly and put his hands together, his whole body started to glow then only his hands glowed, but they glowed an evil black glow. Droz then put his hands on the ground and two dark pools of some kind of liquid came from where Droz put his hands.

Link looked at Zelda and saw that she had a look on her face that screamed out ‘Run’. Zelda looked back at Link and then they nodded to at each other and they both started walking backwards. Link then said to Zelda, “Zelda! You got to get me my sword and shield. Meanwhile, the dark pools that Droz made, just kept getting even bigger and bigger. After the pools have reached a size of fifteen feet wide Droz slowly started to sink into the dark pool, and after a few seconds, Droz was completely submerged in the dark liquid. Zelda then went and got Link’s weapons. She then chanted something and the weapons disappeared in a bright light and suddenly appeared in front of Link. Link then picked his stuff up and then looked at where Droz was once standing. For a while it was completely quiet, then what seemed to be an earthquake started happening and a pair of giant, black, and scaley wings came out of the pool of darkness. Then the head of the creature came out, looking straight at Zelda. The giant fifteen-foot high creature who was standing on his hind legs was now completely out of the black pool. Link looked at the creature and saw that it was a dragon, a black dragon, although, it didn’t look to be completely dragon. Zelda saw that it was a dragon type creature as well and then she looked at Link.

The Dragon looked at Zelda and Link and they just stared back. They stared and noticed that it had the same scarlet red eyes Droz had, so they assumed he was Droz. Droz then looked elsewhere. Link and Zelda saw this and looked in the same direction. They saw that it was Nabooru, Impa, and Rauru. Link and Zelda saw that they have returned with the children safely hidden. Nabooru, Impa, and Rauru made their way over to Link, and so did Zelda. Once they were all in a group Link asked,
“Why are you three here? You were supposed to keep the kids safe,”
“Don’t worry Link. They’re safely hidden in my house at Kakariko Village,” said Impa,
“How did you get there and get back so fast?” asked Zelda,
“I used the Nocturne of Shadow to take us to the graveyard, and I also teleported a few horses so we would get here faster,” said Rauru,
“Oh, well, we’re lucky you got her when you did this gut just turned into a dragon,” said Link, Then out of nowhere Droz let out a horribly loud roar that even made one of the buildings collapse. Everyone looked in horror at what Droz had just done. Nabooru then looked around and said,
“Hey… where’s Darunia,” Link and Zelda unfortunately stayed silent.
“Oh no, he isn’t… dead is he?” she said,
“Yes, unfortunately… he was killed,” said Link,
“Not quiet,” said a familiar voice everyone looked at who it was,
“Sorry for worrying you like that, I just blacked out for a while,” said Darunia who was crawling around on the ground.
“Darunia!” said everyone as they rushed over to the wounded Goron on the ground,
“Luckily his attack missed all of my vital organs,” he said,
“Great, I’ll have you fixed up in a second,” said Link as he took out the Ocarina of Time and played the Song of Healing. In a flash of pink light the wound near Darunia’s stomach was gone. Darunia then got up as if he was never hurt in the fist place. “Thanks brother. Now let’s get rid of this guy once and for all,” he said as he turned around to look at the new dragon form of Droz.

Droz looked at them and he started laughing, but his mouth didn’t move. “You pitiful Idiots. Do you honestly think you can defeat me in this state?” said Droz. Everybody looked blankly at Droz. “What? You idiots don’t even know that when a dragon reaches the age of sixteen (in dragon years) he is able to take the form of elves and speak their language,” said the Droz,
“So let me get this straight. You’re actually a dragon in elfin form, not a elf in who just found a way to turn into a dragon?” said Link,
“Yes,” said Droz,
“Interesting, but, how can you talk if you don’t move your mouth?” said Droz,
“Enough of this c***! Time for you six to die!” exclaimed Droz. Out of nowhere, he was hit in the back of the head with a fin. Droz then roared and looked and saw that it was Ruto, “Make that seven,” she said with a smirk. “Ruto,” said Link as Ruto made her way to the group.
“Nice to see you’re ok,” said Zelda,
“Yeah, I was a little sad, but all I needed was a little time alone,” she said, Zelda then looked at Link and had a look on her face that said, “I told you so,”
“You know how to fight?” asked Link,
“Of coarse. After what happened with Ganondorf, I started training to be prepared for anything,” she said,
“That’s good to know, but how did you know this guy was here? I’d imagine you’d be asleep or something,” said Zelda,
“I was. Except when I heard the loud roar I woke up and ran down here to see what woke me up,” said Ruto. All of a sudden Droz roared and said,
“Am I f****** invisible here! Seriously, I’m right here! Damn it,”
“Oh right, I forgot,” said Link,
“Oh you little bastard,” muttered Droz.
“Ok, ready everybody,” said Link,
“Yeah,” they said,
“Let’s go,” said Link,


Brolio, Leon, and Rayu were sitting in Impa’s house. Leon then got up and said,
“This is bull. We’ve got to help them somehow,” Brolio then got up and said,
“Hold on, we have to think about this. We have no weapons and if we did, we have almost no experience with them. Back in Ranelu we would sneak our weapons from the weapon room at night, sneak off somewhere, and practice with our weapons with each other. We had no special training or anything the only one who did was Kakashi,”
“So. That doesn’t mean we can’t help. I’m pretty sure That women has some kind of weapons here,” said Rayu,
“Remember, we were the one that accidentally lead Droz here, so he’s our responsibility. We have to at least help fight him,” said Rayu. Brolio then thought about what Rayu just said. After a few minutes, Brolio said,
“Ok, but we have to get some weapons first,”
“Maybe there are some upstairs,” said Leon. So they all went upstairs to find weapons. They entered a room and were very surprised.
“Wow, that’s ironic,” said Rayu,
“Yeah, these are the same weapons we used back in Ranelu,” said Brolio as he went up to a pair of short katanas. Rayu then went up to a long silver staff with a blade on each side. Leon then went up to a long katana. Everybody looked at each other with smirks, but they soon faded as Brolio said,
“Um… does anyone even know how to get to Lon Lon Ranch?”
“I don’t. We teleported here remember,” said Leon,
“Well… how hard could it be to find it?” said Rayu.

So much suspense! Big fight scene coming up, eh? Can't wait for that and the inevitable fact that the other three will be lost, found, and then the heroes!

Originally Posted by onilinkc4

Droz then said to Zelda, “Zelda! You got to get me my sword and shield.

Interesting, but, how can you talk if you don’t move your mouth?” said Droz,

All of a sudden Droz roared and said,
“Am I f****** invisible here! Seriously, I’m right here! Damn it,” said Droz angrily,

Um… does anyone even know how to get to Lon Lon Ranch is?”

I am confused on all of these.

First sentence: How can Droz ask Zelda for such a favor?
Second sentence: Why would Droz comment himself?
Third sentence: This is a typo, right?
Fourth sentence: Do they want to know where it is or how to get there?

I don't mean to be cruel, but I just bring things like this to your attention. Love the story though, but you said in a previous post:

Originally Posted by onilinkc4

In light of recent events I was forced to change a character, Brolik's name, his new name is now Brolio.

So, I think you'd better change his name in this chapter since it surprised me. Sorry, and again, I don't mean to be mean.

Wow. I messed up a lot in this chapter. Thanks for catching them.

In sentence one: instead of Droz said. It has to be Link said.
In sentence two: It was supposed to be Zelda.
In sentence three: As for the Droz talking without moving his mouth, I'll reveal that next chapter, not a typo.
In chapter four: I accidentaly added the is

You misinterpreted sentence three. You said that he said something twice. He roared and said, but he then said it angrily. That must be a typo.

I just want to point out a few small mistake real quick, so you can deal with them as you see fit:
Dark Elves, also known more commonly as Drow, as legend proclaims, are not fond of, and openly scorn, sunlight, because, since the majority if not the entirety of a Dark Elf's life is spent in cities beneath the earth's crust, it burns their sensitive eyes, and makes the dark magic with which their weapons and armor are enchanted fade away and become useless, and even weakens their inherant powers of levitation and the like. So having those Drow living in a desert, where the sun scorches even those used to it's bright gaze, doesn't really make sense.

The evil Godess of the Drow is called Lloth, or Lolth, in a different spelling and pronounce by the Svirnelbi, the Deep Gnome people, Lloth the Spider Queen, as almost any official book will tell you, is also known as the Godess of Chaos, so you slightly messed up on that point.

But other than that, I'm enjoying this fanfic immensly, and can't wait to read more.^_^

To smash,
Wow. I didn't know all that about the dark elves. I just heard about them in another fanfic and decided to use them.

To Dark Zero,
:embrsd: Ooops, I guess I did misinterpreted. I'll fix my mistake right now.

Originally Posted by onilinkc4

To smash,
Wow. I didn't know all that about the dark elves. I just heard about them in another fanfic and decided to use them.

To Dark Zero,
:embrsd: Ooops, I guess I did misinterpreted. I'll fix my mistake right now.

If you want to learn more, there is a book series called Forgotten Realms by R.A. Salvatore. All the books are different, but the ones I learned all this from were "The Dark Elf Saga"[3 books], "The Icewind Dale Trilogy"[3 books], and the series I'm currently reading, linking up to the others, is "Legacy of the Drow"[4 books].
All of them tell the many stories of the life of Drizzt Do'Urden, a Dark Elf who, while growing up with his own kind, comes to realise that the evil ways they live are not the same ways that his good heart wants to follow, and his struggles to find a better life as he struggles to hold onto the good aspects of his heart when everyone else around him is telling him that he should be just as sinister as they are. He's also one of the best swordsmen in the world, wielding 2 Scimitars, and fighting in ways that no one could duplicate. That all happens in just the first 3 books! Afterwards, it only get's better.^_^
All of them are awesome, and well worth the time to read.^_^

That seems like a cool book, but I'm not really interested. I'm happy with the dark elves I have now. Besides, that's only one person's perspective on the Dark Elves. Unless he is the person who made the Dark Elves, then, who cares, it's my story and I should be able to do whatever I want in it.

Originally Posted by onilinkc4

That seems like a cool book, but I'm not really interested. I'm happy with the dark elves I have now. Besides, that's only one person's perspective on the Dark Elves. Unless he is the person who made the Dark Elves, then, who cares, it's my story and I should be able to do whatever I want in it.

Granted, and agreed. It is your story, so you do have the right to alter the aspects of it as you wish. I only thought I'd impart any knowledge I had to help you out. From what I've seen, using official information helps the reader to connect to the subject, when it comes to things like creatures with established histories, so I thought I'd just try to lend you a hand however I could.^_^