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Old 05-31-2005, 12:33 AM
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Re: The legend of Zelda: The Ocarina of Time-Revisited

sweet! Can't wait till next chapter. Just one question.....do you see Link as an adult in this story? just wanna noe
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The next chapter is almost done, well kinda. But I can't tell you if you see adult Link in this, but what I can ask you is did you see adult Link in oot?
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Old 06-01-2005, 09:33 PM
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Re: The legend of Zelda: The Ocarina of Time-Revisited

Awesome! Kinda violent... Oh, another "Silly Mistake", you spelled minute as 'minuet'.
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Old 06-10-2005, 07:05 AM
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Re: The legend of Zelda: The Ocarina of Time-Revisited

Yes i did, so I know he's in it.....and it sorta got pointed out in your previous sig(I think)poor link is so helpless
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Re: The legend of Zelda: The Ocarina of Time-Revisited

whoa, this is really good!! please continue!! i want to see what happens to link!

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Old 02-13-2006, 07:42 PM
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Re: The legend of Zelda: The Ocarina of Time-Revisited

wow this is awesome good work
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Old 02-14-2006, 03:48 PM
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you know, i'd given up ever seeing this again. keep up the good work!
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Re: The legend of Zelda: The Ocarina of Time-Revisited

omg, its been almost a year since I posted a new chapter, I had no idea it had been that long.....BUT If you are still interested in this I will be posting a new chapter later today after I get home from school.

its a short chapter, but I have more. I'm just awaiting your replys.
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The unconscious body was lifted by the two Gerudos, and placed on a table about as high as Ganondorf’s waist, and as long as link’s body. Link lay on the table, with wrist and ankle cuffs on, tethering him to the table.
“You will be quite the apprentice won’t you?” Ganondorf said to the unconscious boy lying on the table.



Part II. The other Dimension

Ch10.Ganondorf II

After link had gotten the third spiritual stone he headed towards the temple of time. When he reached the castle gates he was stopped by a white horse that ran in his way with princess Zelda and Impa on its back Zelda looked back at link with a worried expression on her face as she took the ocarina of time and tried to throw it to link but it landed in the mote behind him. Soon after Zelda and Impa’s horse passed a dark rider, the same man that link and Zelda had seen while in her room as they peeked through her window known as Ganondorf , Came out following them he stopped by link and said “Boy, which direction was that white horse going in?!”
Link stood his ground because he knew that this man was evil and he wouldn’t give away any information to him he answered with a stern look on his face “...”
“How dare you try and defy me!” roared Ganondorf. He gathered up some dark energy in his hand and said “now one more time, which direction did the white horse go?!”
Link still staid firm and once again did not answer “...”
Fine then boy, take this! Then Ganondorf pulled back his hand and while he did that Link unsheathed his sword and stood in the ready position, then Ganondorf released the ball of energy and yelled. Link Flew back when the ball of energy hit him, almost landing in the mote. Then, he saw the feet of the hoarse in front of him blur, then trample off into the distance as he fell unconscious.

……………..seven years later…………..

“Six sages, now!” Zelda screamed.
All of the sages gathered up their power simultaneously, and opened the gate to the sacred realm, sucking Ganon into the white abyss.
“You...Curse you Zelda! Curse you sages! Curse you Link! Some day when this seal is broken, this is when I will exterminate your descendents. As long as the Triforce of power is in my hand!” when he was sealed in the chamber of time
“Thank you Link...Thanks to you, Ganondorf has been sealed inside the Evil Realm! Thus peace will once again reign in this world...for a time. All the tragedy that has befallen Hyrule was my doing...I was so young; I could not comprehend the consequences of trying to control the Sacred Realm. I dragged you into it. Too. Now it is time for me to make up for my mistakes...You must lay the master to rest and close the Door of Time. However by doing this, the road between times will be closed.” Zelda reaches her hand out and says “Link give the ocarina to me. As a sage I can return you to your original time with it.”
Link handed over the ocarina
“When peace returns to Hyrule...It will be time for us to say goodbye. Now, go home, Link. Regain your lost time! Home where you are supposed to be...the way you are supposed to be.” Zelda then played her lullaby and with the echoes of music and clouds, Link was transported to the Temple of time.
Link turned his head to the pedestal and slowly walked forward. He then un sheathed the master sword, then pointed it downward and grasped its cold, steel handle with both hands and raised his arms high and while he lifted up the sword he closed his eyes and took a deep breath then quickly and powerfully he stuck the pedestal with the master sword and while he placed the sword into the pedestal and as the white glow appeared he saw the face of…him self with his face soaked in blood with strange markings on his face laughing a sadistic laugh. Then Link opened his eyes widely with an expression of shock on his face as he disappeared in time.

…………………..

“Ahh!” Link hopped backwards off of the pedestal and pulled his kokiri sword out of its sheath violently, nearly falling. Link looked around nervously, his heart pounding rapidly. He could almost see the evil figure as if it were in front of him in his mind’s eye. After a few minutes, he realized that no one was there, and placed his sword back in its sheath and his heart started beating normally again. Just to make sure, he walked back up to the pedestal, and looked around, then turned his back to it and started towards the exit. When he left the master swords chamber, something unusual happened. There was a loud rumbling noise, so Link turned around to face it. The door of time was closing! Now he remembered he had given the Ocarina of Time to Zelda, so that must be why it was closing. He quickly ran towards the slowly closing door then stopped in front of it. The young hero thought, should I really miss out on seven years of my life? Then placed his hand on the door, now at waist level, turned around and left.
BAM! Something hit Link hard in the back. Blood streaming through his clenched teeth, he fell on his face. He opened his eyes a crack hoping to get a glimpse of his attacker before he passed out, but all he saw were two black leather boots, and heard a sinister laugh fading into black.

Link awoke from the strike to his back, with anger teeming through his body. He got up shakily and reached for his sword “huh?” his sword was missing. He looked around on the ground, and saw that his sword and shield were lying there. Well, what was left of them, his sword had a large scar in its middle, there was only about a centimeter thickness in the very center of the gash. His Deku shield however had a clean cut right down the middle. Using the shield again was out of the question. He couldn’t use the sword again until he got it fixed, or bought a new one entirely.
He thought, what could have hit me? Angry rage fueling his body, he forgot about his wound and ran towards the exit, only taking his sword with him. Link exited the temple and searched all around the castle town, asking the towns people if they saw a man wearing black boots. But every answer was the same “There are about two hundred people in this town and black boots are the new trend” or they would make a joke along those lines.
Knowing that he couldn’t find any information here he went to the Bizarre hoping that the black smith there could fix his sword and he could possibly buy a new shield. Link walked into the Bizarre and approached the main counter. “I was wondering if you could fix my sword.” Link asked. Then he unsheathed his sword and placed it on the counter.
The shop owner took a look at it and picked it up then said “Hmm...It might be possible to salvage some of its value, but I think it would be wiser to just buy a new one, this wouldn’t be as powerful when reconstructed.” He took a moment more to look at the sword and then noticed the Kokiri emblem in the handle. The mans eyes got large, he peered over the sword and looked at the boy. “Isn’t this the kokiri sword? This sword is of too great a value to repair, my metal would only down its value.” He placed the sword on the counter, and walked towards the back of his shop then he bent down and picked up a box that was a little bigger than a rolling pin.
Out of curiosity Link blurted out “What’s that?” The man replied only a split second after Link spoke “This my boy is a Hyrule guard short sword, used mostly as a last resort after their spear or broad sword has been knocked out of their hands.” He took the sword out of the wooden box and held it up, it was a little larger than the kokiri sword, and didn’t have a very fancy design “I just got a pretty big shipment of them about a month ago and not many guards have come asking for them. So I guess I could sell this to you for cheap if you really want it.” The man took the sword to an Iron block in the back of the bizarre and struck it with the sword, the blade fell from the handle. “I guess I’ll have to fix it up a bit before you can use it…hey by the way, what do you need a sword for, you’re just a kid.” Link had to think of a quick excuse. “Umm I am giving it to my father as a birthday gift…he uh…broke his last one as you can see” he motioned toward the kokiri sword “so I thought I’d buy him a new one, or repair his old one…but I guess that’s out of the question.” He paused for a moment, then continued “ uh, how much do you think it would cost to get that sword fixed?”
The owner replied “I can probably do the bare minimum for about 50 rupees; however I can sharpen the edge and custom make a sheath for It for around 200 rupees if you have the extra gem.” Link thought about it, he had exactly 200 rupees on him If he got the best sword he wouldn’t have enough to buy a shield. Quite the decision, he figured maybe he could do some blocking with his sword instead. “ Do you suppose my father could block enemy attacks with only a sword?” Link asked the owner of the Bizarre.
“Well, not as effectively as you could with a shield, but it is possible if your fast enough…What does your father plan on guarding against anyways?” replied the owner.
“He likes to spar with his friends” Link said unsure of himself.
“Heh hah heh, ok come back in an hour or two and I’ll have your sword ready for yah. Heh huh hah!” The owner guffawed back at Link.
Link thought “whatever, as long as he was going to be getting a sword to hold a guard against enemies.” Link waved bye and left the shop.
After what seemed Link an “hour or two” of a fruitless search for clues on his attacker Link decided to head back to the Bizarre in hopes of his sword being finfished.
When Link entered the shop, he handed over the 200 rupees, and received a much more detailed short sword, which looked more like a sword Link would use and not some generic short sword. After receiving his new and improved blade and sheath, he left the shop with an empty wallet and full attack power.
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Re: The legend of Zelda: The Ocarina of Time-Revisited

Z OMG! tripple post?!?!?!?!?!

grrrr, somebody read my above chapter and comment on it so I can post my next chapter and not have to .....Quadruple post!!1!!one!

So please, someone read and comment on this I will delete this post as soon as someone comments on my story. I just want to post my next chapter. Because after this, the story actually gets interesting. I think. its been three days since I posted my last chapter, and I am hard at work on my story, so please comment this.

Sorry if this is a rude post ZU mod/admin/authorative people. If so pleae let me know because I've never gone into anything past a double post, and I think I double posted once before. But I'm not sure. But feel free to delete this post....not that you would hesitate in any way......
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Old 03-07-2006, 05:03 AM
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Re: The legend of Zelda: The Ocarina of Time-Revisited

nice twist! what's next? please post more, if we don't post replies then ignore it - we are reading we're just a bit busy. can't wait for the next bit
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hi
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