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Old 04-09-2005, 01:50 PM
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For my 100th post I thought I would start a new thread, so I thought long and hard untill I thought of something! A thread where you could make your own Zelda Game, in the form of a story. To express it, you would explain exactly what Link does in story form, but explaining what Items he gets and what he does in Dungeon's. The posts in this thread are expected to be exeptionly long, apart from ones that would just say "Well Done!" and things like that. Heres my one, it takes place between MM and the WW. This idea of a game also tells excactly what happened to the Hero Of Time...

Part One: The beginning Video.

Link rode away from termina hoping to find his friend he had been searching for, Navi. Epona suddenly stumbled into a hole in some tall grass, followed by Link. They hit the floor with such an impact it knocked them out. As they woke up, they found they were lying in the lost woods, with Wolfos clawing at them. Link jumped up and snaped out his Gilded sword, the wolfos wimpered and ran away. Link looked behind him to see that Epona had vanished.
"EEEAAAA!" Screamed Link, "not again." He thought. Link rushed out of the Lost Woods, atleast that was what he planned. He soon found that he was Lost. Link looked down at his hands, leaves were rapidly growing out of them. He felt his face become dark and his eyes glow. He knew what had happened straight away. He was a lost Kid! He was a Skull Kid! He became blind, all he could see was a blip in the distance and a faint echoey giggle. As the blip came closer he saw what it was, the Majoras Mask circling towards him. Then it stopped a few feet away from Link, and the Skull Kid appeared; legs crossed, wearing the Majoras Mask. "Your Cursed" he whispered while silently laughing to himself. "Hyrules doom has finnaly come, and I'm involved in it! And theres nothing you can do about it! You and your friends will drown in darkness... your time is over!"

Link Landed in a place with gigantic stems climbing up to the sky. There was leaves convieniently placed on the stems so you could easily climb them. Link noticed that all his equipment had gone. He became fiercly angry, with the skull Kid. Thankfully, he noticed he still had the Ocarina of Time in his pocket. Link dashed forward and scrambled up the giant stem. He climbed and climbed untill he found a small hut nestled comfortably atop a leaf. Link rushed into the house, desperate to find some answers. Where was he? How did he get here? What has just happened? Was he even in Hyrule?. As Link barged in he saw a Kokiri sitting down at the table. But he didn't look right. Link hadn't remembered kokires to have spinning twig like things sprouting from his head. The kokiri swung around startled.
"AAAAAA!" Link shrieked! The kokiris face looked green, mangeled and deformed. It shrieked abnormally! "Somethings happening to us! Where changing!" said the Kokiri, it burst into tears and shoved Link out of the hut.
"Take this, and go away!" The Kokiri threw a Deku Leaf at him.
"What has happened?" surely i've only been gone for three days. Link looked down at him self;
"EEEEEEAAAAAAA!" Link cried. Link was an Adult. He flipped onto a lower leaf, then leaped to the next on a higher stem. Using the Deku leaf he wafted air onto a hut; blowing away the cobwebs blocking the entrance way. He rushed into the hut; but no-one was there. He tried the hut to his left; no-one was there. Link became frustrated, he needed some answers.
"Hey!" shouted a familier voice "Over here! You, who are you?!"
Link leaped to the floor, landing in a roll. It was Navi!...

End Of Part 1.
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Old 04-13-2005, 06:43 PM
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Re: Your Zelda game!

You know I hadn't had a chance to read this before now, but I like it. That has to be the most original explanation I have ever seen for the change in the kokiri. Go you.
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Old 04-13-2005, 06:56 PM
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That is a good story keep it up I would like to see part 2.
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Old 04-13-2005, 07:23 PM
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Re: Your Zelda game!

Thats a pretty good story, I wonder whats going on. It seems like a mm kindof thung. Good job.

I'll probably post a story of mine in here later if I dont find an official fan fic thread.
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Old 04-15-2005, 10:33 AM
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Wow! I'm flattered heres part 2:

Part 2: First Dungeon.

"Link! Something strange is happenning." Cried Navi, boinging up and down franticly. "Where have you been? You went into the Lost Woods and haven't come out for ages! You have to help! The atmosphere is getting... damp. Something strange is happening to us, we seem to be suffocating. Hasn't it happened to you? My glow is dimming, I'm scared! Sorry, I've got to stop panicing. Lets go to the New Deku Tree, he seems to be growing abnormally fast! He's bigger than the old Deku Tree!"

Link rushed off followed by Navi, "This Way! This WAY!" Shouted Navi. She Whizzed down a thin tunnel. Link desperatly followed her but was stopped by a Deku Baba, who drilled up from the soft earth. Even the Deku Babas were Different, instead of puffing purple smoke at Link they drooled purple saliva. They looked weak, so Link just doged past them. As he stumbled out of the tunnel he was greeted with a massive tree, towering up to the sky. But it looked withred and ill.
"Great Deku Tree!" Navi's voice echoed against the leaves blocking the sunlight. "Link is here! He can Save us!... right?"
"Link! We..have prayed...to the gods, for... your... arrival!" croaked the Deku Tree with great difficulty. "I...don't think...I... can go on...m...uch... longer."
"Is there anything we can do?" Pleaded Navi.
"No."
"No?! There must be!
"M-y... t-i-m-e... i...s...up. Our...time is up."
"What! This can't be right! Is this change natural? Was this meant to happen?"
"..."
"Deku Tree!"
"..."
"DEKU TREE?!"
"G-o-o-d-b-y-e...Navi...Link..."
"GREAT DEKU TREE!! NOOOOOO!!"

The Deku Tree creaked open its mouth, slightly.
"I'm not going to let this happen! Lets go inside!" Screeched Navi.
"EEEEAAAA!" Screamed Link, shaking is head.
But Link had no choice, so he rushed inside... unarmed.

"Hey! Link! You know that Deku Leaf you have? You can use it to float across gaps, its a new invention from the 'know it all Brothers'. I don't know how you got it but theres no time to catch up. Lets float across the gap!" Navi said, carlming herself down.
"Hmph." Said Link, taking a deep breath and nodding confidently.
Link tiptoed to the edge and leaned down. It was a bottomles pit, he couldn't see any signs of a floor. Link was a bit unsure about if the Deku Leaf would work, but he trusted Navi. He stepped back then dashed off of the edge. He wafted his Deku Leaf up into the air like a parashoot, he felt gusts of wind from the bottomless pit keeping Link up. He landed safely at the other side with a roll.
"Stop! You! Who are you?!" A familiar voice echoed through the large room. The person jumped in from a crack in the Deku Tree. It was Mido!
"Link! What are you doing here? You Fake!" he shouted with anger.
"You are a Hylian not a Kokiri! I knew it all along! Get out of here you non-Kokiri! We don't want your kind around here!"
"Stop it Mido! Your blocking our way!" Cried Navi, in rage.
"Shut up! You flying Rat! I'm not blocking your way! I'm saving the Deku Tree! I know what your trying to do Link! Your trying to Kill the Deku Tree again!"
"He is not! "Screeched Navi.
"Get out of my sight!" Mido shouted, he shoved Link of the edge, into the bottomless pit.
"Link!!!... You idiot Mido!" Navi zoomed down the pit after him. Mido tried to throw his Sword at Navi, but she dogged and it fell down the pit.

"iiiteee!" Link slammed down onto the floor, followed by Navi.
"Looks like the pit wasn't bottomless after all." Said Navi.
"Watch out!" Midos sword darted, point first into the ground.
"The Kokiri Sword! Finnaly you've got a weapon Link!" Shouted Navi.
Link pulled it out of the damp ground, with a big smile on his face.
"Lets get going Link! Somethings bothering the Great Deku Tree, and it must be down here, in the roots!" Said Navi impatiently.
Link nodded, and ran off. A Deku Baba popped up right next to Link, screeching at him.
"EEEYAAA!" Link sliced of its slimy tounge then slashed up its stem.
"Oh yes! You've still got it Link!" Shouted Navi. Link rolled his eyes. Suddenly dirt clouds blasted up from the ground and hundreds of Deku Babas blasted up.
"AAAAAAA!" Screamed Link. The Deku Babas drooled all over him; waggling there heads around, and around. Link jumped up and slammed his sword down on a group of Deku Babas. He spun his sword around knocking them into each other.
"Hyaa! shhaaaa! EEEAAAAA!" Screamed Link. The Deku Babas were tumbling into each other, there were loud screeching noises and clouds of dust. Purple Dust, the Deku Babas seemed to have dissolved into clouds of Dust.
"It seems the Monsters are changing too, we seem to be evolving at an abnormally fast pace." Said Navi. A Deku Shield was left lying on the floor, Link quickly picked it up and strapped it to his back.
"Yes now you've got you shield! You should be equipped enough for the moment." shouted Navi happily. Link ran across the large room and slashed away at some spiky vines blocking the way. He entered a room with holes everywhere, there was a giant moth like creature hovering in the air. Link jumped up and stabbed it in the eye, green blood sprayed out of it and it fainted onto the floor. Link had to elliminate all the creatures inside the Deku Tree, he knew that is why he had become ill. The giant moth sprayed a gigantic amount of moth balls onto the floor. Link knew that they were its eggs, he couldn't let them hatch. He noticed that in all of the holes on the floor, there was a switch deep in them. The moth balls would be a prime object to put on them. Link tried to pick them up, but it made his hands bleed. So he snapped out his Deku Leaf and wafted it on the moth balls, blowing it onto the switches. The Moth balls were violently vibrating, they could hatch any moment. Suddenly a barred door struck open, Link dashed to it and opened it just as the eggs hatched. He heard the barred doors slam behind him. The room Link was in was incredibly dark, he couldn't see a thing. Link slowly stepped forward, he found he was walking in a shallow pool of water. Suddenly, galleons of water splashed up into his face and the room illuminated into a purple glow. He saw a giant eye piercing through him. It was Ghoma, reborn! This time he had hundreds of legs and there were vines coming out of its head, and sticking onto the roof. Link drew his sword as he flipped over a vine that thrashed at him. Ghoma started to cough violently, he wheezed up a boomerang! It seemed way more high-tech than before. Link snatched it up from the floor and lobbed it at the vines, it spinned at an incredible pace, and one by one knocked the vines of the roof. The beast seemed to open up, with water spraying up like an upside down waterfall. Its eye sat there watching him with a scared look in it. Link ran forward and struck it with immense power, the whole monster flapped up and burst into a fountain of water. The room became dark again, and fell abnormally silent. A shinning circle of light appeared, and he heard someone spluttering within it. It was Mido! His face was green and his legs were short and round. The water was suffocating him, even though only his legs were in it. Link and Navi went over to him,
"Get me out of here!" Cried Mido. The ring of light shined deeply and Link, Navi and Mido warped out of the Deku Tree. They landed in front of him, he didn't look ill but he looked concerned.
"Deku Tree! We have destroyed the monster at your roots! We've saved you!" Shouted Navi.
"It was a waste of time." Said the Deku Tree. "Yes, I am cured. But I would have become better naturally. Ghoma is a germ that will forever live inside us Deku trees. No matter how many times you kill it, it will always come back, worse than ever. It is best to leave it alone, sometimes it will bother me. Other times it will be leave me alone. Now, my Ghoma will only come back worse than ever. Right now it may have spread its eggs, across the land. In thousands and thousands of years they will hatch, and bother other creatures. You have made a foolish mistake."
"We apologize Deku Tree. We meant no harm, we thought you was going to die!" Cried Navi.
"I fogive you. I will probably live for years and years, but I dread the day that Ghoma returns..." said the Deku tree Sadly.
Mido stepped forward, he was coughing and weezing. "Deku Tree! Something is happening to me! I'm small and green!" He said.
"I am sorry young Mido, there is nothing I can do about that. Something is happening in Hyrule that will change our lives forever. And I am counting on Link and Navi to get to the bottom of it." Replied the Deku Tree.
"We will! Deku Tree!" Said Navi enthusiasticly.
"And Mido," Continued the Deku Tree. "Tell everyone that the Lost Woods is forbidden, no-one can go in there. Recently it has become infested with monsters. The lost Woods will now be called the Forbidden Forest."
"Yes Sir!" Said Mido, and he dashed of.
"Finnaly, that sword and shield you have Link, is way too small for you. I have your Hylian Shield and a sword big enough for you." Droned the Deku Tree. He shook his branches and a sword and the Hylian shield came flying down. Link caught the sword by the handle, it wasn't nearly as good as the Master Sword. The Hylian Shield looked a bit tattered and rusted, but it would do.
"Thanks a lot Deku Tree!" Shouted Navi
"Your welcome, I made the sword my self... I can move my branches with skill!" Replied the Deku Tree. "Now, hurry! Go into Hyrule Field, your Destiny will lead you to the next destination."
Link and Navi rushed off.

Whew! End of part 2
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Old 04-15-2005, 12:44 PM
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So much cheesy goodness. Was good, just watch your sentence structure and stuff and it will be better. Like the dialogue was just too precious
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"G-o-o-d-b-y-e...Navi...Link..."
"GREAT DEKU TREE!! NOOOOOO!!"
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Old 04-16-2005, 07:50 AM
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Re: Your Zelda game!

Right, here is...

Part 3: Who's That?!

Link and Navi darted out of Kokiri Forest, they noticed the air was definatly thickening up. They ran across the rickety bridge and entered Hyrule Field. Even the grass of the field was damp and Link was getting worried.
"Whats that!?" Said Navi. Link notived some wet drips on the ground. Like someone with wet feet had ran across the grass.
"Lets follow those footprints!" Gasped Navi. Link followed the Footprints, after a few meters of walking, the footprints stopped. Link slowly lifted his head up.
"WHOS THAT?! YOU?" Shouted Navi. A dark figure of Link was standing right in front of them.
"SHEEEAHHH!" Cried the dark figure, it swung his sword at Link.
"Dark Link! Its Dark Link! From the Water Temple!" Shouted Navi. Link drew his sword ready to fight him, but Dark Link rushed of leaving wet footprints.
"Lets chase him Link!" Cried Navi. They chased Dark Link franticly. He seemed to be heading towards Lake Hylia. But Dark Link was too fast! Link whipped out his Ocarina and played Epona's Song. Epona galloped along towards Link with the Wind in her hair. Link clambered upon her and galloped after Dark Link. Epona leaped over the fence and continued towards Lake Hylia. She rushed down towards the Lake kicking up dirt as she went. Dark Link leaped up into the sky flipping towards the water.
"EEEEAAAAAA!" Link threw his boomerang at him, but he knoked it straight back, hitting Link and blasting him off his horse.
"Damm, we Lost him!" Navi Cursed.
"Ugh." Link forced himself up from the floor.
"C'mon Link!" Said Navi impatiently. "The Deku Tree said that your destiny will lead you to the next place, and Dark Link has led you to Lake Hylia! Lets go see the Zoras."
Link dived into the lake and swam into a hole leading into Zoras Fountain. He swam to the surface, and nearly fainted from the heat! The atmosphere was damp and incredibly thick. The heat was unbearable, Link scrambled out of the water and crawled onto an island. There were Zoras lying on the island groaning.
"Help...us" Croaked one Zora.
"The... heat... its, its... killing us!" Said another Zora.
"Lets go see King Zora." Said Navi, "We'll get some answers from him!"
Link jumped at the ladder leading up to the cliff, desperatly trying to NOT touch the scolding hot water.
He scrambled up the cliffs and came face to face to King Zora himself.
"King Zora!" Shouted Navi. "What is happening here? Link is here so he should be able to help. Right?"
"Link you arrival is present, the Gods granted my wish!" Said King Zora, wafting himself via a giant fish. "Only a few weeks a go, the ice melted and turned into a boiling death trap! I don't know whats happening, but us Zoras can't stand this heat! Ever since Lord Jabbu Jabbu was destroyed by the evil King, things are just going from bad to worse!"
"There changing due to the atmosphere too." Muttered Navi to Link.
"Link, the Hero Of Time! You must help us." Cried the King Zora nearly fainting from the heat.
"Lets check out the lake round the back." Said Navi.

Link stumbled up to the King.
"I allow you to pass into Lord Jabbu Jabbus sacred spot." Said the King in a mighty voice.
"Thank you, your highness" replied Navi.
She and Navi rushed past King Zora into Jabbu Jabbu's 'sacred spot'.
"Link! Look at this!" Cried Navi. A stone podium was stuck firmly into the ground, replacing Jabbu Jabbu's spot.
"Look! There some words carved into it!" Shouted Navi. Link peered at the old stone, it read:

When the 'Fish People' go through there transformation.
It is the time for the creature to appear.
Ye who wields the Sacred Sword must awaken Valoo who will be the Zoras new guardian.

Jabbu Jabbu the guardian of water, swim' and the Zora's.
Valoo the guardian of fire, flight and the Rito's.


"Valoo? Rito's? Guardian of fire and flight? What does it all MEAN." Said Navi, Confused.
Suddenly, King Zora came plodding up behind them.
"So, you've spotted the stone that has appeared." He said "I, like you, do not understand it. But thats not important, what's important is what Link must do."
"Annndddd... whats that?" Said Navi, desperatly wanting him to continue.
"Well, obviously it is Link who 'wields the sacred sword'. Therefore he must awaken Valoo, quickley. It seems we are an in-dangered species, but only because we will turn into another form soon." Replied King Zora.
"Yes, we guessed that." Said Navi.
"But, Valoo must help us do that, that is why Link must awaken him. He will be our new 'Jabbu Jabbu'" Said King Zora with an impatient look.
"Noooowwwww I understand. You; the Zoras. Are going to change into the Rito's" Said Navi relieved.
"Yes, you are rather slow Navi"
"Hey!"
"Now, enough chit-chat. I suggest going to the ice cavern, although I'd call it the fire cavern now!" King Zora chuckled annoingly, then put his cerious face on again. "Now, go! Us Zora's feel like were dying!"
Link and Navi dived into the water, the temperature seemed just about right. They swam across the lake and dragged themselves out of the water to the entrance of Ice Cavern...
Link's foot made a crunching noise as he set foot on some, hard, thick snow. He continued forward and noticed that the snow was getting thinner as he went. It seemed to be melting, and it wasn't cold at all it was getting really warm.
"AAAWWWWWOOO!" A howl came from under the snow and a white wolfos popped up. It swiped at him fiercely as Link drew his sword. The wolfos flipped up and over Link and scratched at his legs. But Link did a backflip dodging it, landing behind it and then stabbing it in the back. "OOOWWW" Cried the White Wolfos, it dissolved into dust leaving a chest behind it. Link stepped forward and kicked it open, he peered inside to find... a blue ruppee! Link's face fell. He took it and tropped it in his Ruppee bag. He continued through the thin icy tunnel.
"It's another one of them stone podiums" Said Navi. The stone podium lay there stuck in the snow against the dead end. Again, there were carvings on it. It read:

Ye who holds mystical sound.
That is the guardian of time.
Must now hold the sacred Conduction.
That is the guardian of wind.


When there is a meeting,
it is followed by a parting.


There was an Ocarina shaped hole in the top of the podium.
"You know what you have to do." said Navi in a stern voice.
Link nodded and placed the Ocarina Of Time into the stone. A blast of light filled up the tunnel blinding Link and Navi.
"EEEAAAAA!" Screamed Link. The light dimmed down and Link heard something drop out of the bottom of the stone. A small white baton was hidden in the snow, Link slowly picked it up and examined it. Suddenly, the stone podium swung round to reveal more carvings in it. It read:

Now the Wind Waker is in the right hand's.
I't is the key to open the future path.
The key hole lies below.


Carved below the sacred stone was a melody, the Wind Waker started to humm magicly. Like power was brewing within it. Link waved it about following the melody, a deep powerful tune was conducted from nowhere. Link and Navi felt gust's of wind swoop up from the ground, the breeze seemed soft and harmless then it got more powerfull snapping the wall in front of them in two. It opened a path that seemed rocky and hot.
"Wow!" Shouted Navi. "That baton is powerful! Let's go!"
Link pattered into the rock tunnel and entered a gigantic chasm, with red hot lava at the bottom. Suddenly the roof above them broke and King Zora fell down from it, luckily his fat arse made a soft landing.
"I've forgot to give you something" He said. "This is a new invention from the know-it-all brothers in Kokiri Forest. We have improved on it, it is used to fly across gap's. I't has become the latest fashion among us Zora's. As we seemed to have become very fond of height's, as were going of water."
"Thank you." Replied Navi. "But, what is it?"
"I'ts a Grapple Hook. You see that pointy rock hanging from the roof? Loop it across that and swing acoss the chasm." Said King Zora
"Are you joking!?" Cried Navi.
King Zora ignored her, "I'm sure you have the gut's to do it Link." He said smiling at him.
Navi boinged up and down angrily.
"Well," Continued King Zora "I've dropped into here and I don't seem to be able to get out of here... so... I'll have to swing across with you."
"YOU'RE NOT SERIOUS!? YOU'LL SNAP THE ROPE!" Screamed Navi.
"Shut up! Flying Rat!" Shouted King Zora.
"WHY DOES EVERYONE CALL ME THAT!!"
"You've been called it two times, Navi"
"HOW DID YOU KNOW THAT!?"
"Mido's spread what happened and now it's an official nickname." Said King Zora chuckling
"WHAT!?"
Link stood there impatiently, as the argument went on he whipped out the grapple hook and chucked it at the pointy rock. The Grapple Hook wrapped around it tightly, it looked very secure. Taking a deep breath, he stepped to the edge of the cliff.
"EEEAAA!" He leaped of hanging tightly to the rope. King Zora and Navi swung there head's around.
"Wait for me!" Cried King Zora.
Link landed safely on the other side, a gigantic cobweb was in front of him. Link pulled out his sword and slashed a little hole in the web so he could walk through it.
"Wait, Link! Pass us the rope!" Shouted King Zora
"Correction," Said Navi. "I think you meant; 'pass ME the rope!'" Navi gracefully floated across the chasm and giggled at King Zora.
"WTF!? You can't do this! PASS ME THE ROPE!!" Screamed King Zora panaking.
"Correction," Continued Navi. "I think you meant; "Pass the rope to me, a FAT BLOB who will snap it!"
"Why you... stupid... stupid... THING! YOUR JUST SO... RAT LIKE. PASS ME THE ROPE OR I WILL BE STUCK IN HERE FOREVER!" Cried King Zora bouncing up and down. But Navi and Link had already gone.
"Stupid... elf! and his stupid pet rat!" He mumbled to himself. King Zora looked around helplessly, he waddled over to the edge and looked down into the chasm.
"Theres nothing else I can do... yes, its my destiny... to jump. Surely my 'erm, destiny will save me somehow! Yes, yes... it must do. I must jump!" Taking a deep breath he took a step back and threw himself of the ledge! He fell down into the chasm, wind was rushing up from within it. It all went black, he was falling deep into the chasm. He could make out a red dot, he was falling towards it. The red dot was a hole, with lava at the bottom. I't got bigger and bigger untill he could feel the heat burning on his face.
"King Zora!?" he could hear Navi shouting. Then a gigantic mouth opened in front of him and he fell in it!
"Link!" Said Navi. "We have to carlm Valoo down! Remeber, we can't kill it we just have to get it out of this horrid cavern!"
Valoo was shaking it's head around, it put on a disgusted face and coughed King Zora out.
He landed on top of Navi, his fat arse made a soft landing as usual.
"(Splutter) (splutter) Link!" Said King Zora rolling around, "The wind should carlm it down and make it open it's wing's up. (Cough) (cough) You must do something!"
Valoo blasted out a tube of flame at Link and drilled its teeth into the ground as Link dodged it. It's teeth seemed to be stuck on the ground, it's head was low enough to jump on. Link flipped up there, "Come on!" He shouted. King Zora waddled up onto the head followed by Navi. Link whipped out the Wind Waker and waved it about, magic filled the room and powerfull wind came rushing in from the floor. It blew Valoo's head out of the ground and lifted up it's wing's. It roared violently making it's head shake about, Link, navi and King Zora hung on desperatly to it's scales. Valoo flew up out of the room, it flew to the top of the chasm and smashed open the cavern roof soaring into the sky.
"Yes! We awakened it!" Said Navi "The Zora's are saved!"
Valoo landed safely at Jabbu Jabbu's spot. Link, Navi and King Zora hopped off.
"So, this is our new guardian." Said King Zora "Not too shabby."
"Well, I guess our work is done here." Said Navi, "We'll be off"
Link and Navi ran off.
"Wait!" Said King Zora "Valoo wants to say something!"
Link turned around.
"Go to the Temple of Time." It said "Speak to the Gods, they will help you. And take this."
It coughed out a blue orb. "Show this to the Gods."
"Thank you." Said Navi. "We'll go straight away."

End of Part 3.
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Old 04-26-2005, 11:10 AM
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Part 4 Dark Links true identity

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This part in the strory contains strong violence and gore.

Link and Navi swam up to the surface of Lake Hylia. They ran onto the grass.
"Right, let's go to the temple of time" Said Navi.
"EEEAAA!" Avoice shrieked behind them, it was Dark Link.
Link drew his sword ready to fight, but Dark Link flew a way on to a island.
He taunted Link, sitting atop a tall tree. Link dived into the water and rapidly swam over to the island, all the while avoiding incoming fish bashing into his face. He pulled himself up to the island gasping for air. Dark Link jumped down from the tree and thrust his shadowy sword at Links eye. Link backed away and drew his sword for the second time, he slashed at his feet and swiped at his hat but Dark Link seemed to quick for him. The two swords struck violently as thunder struck and thick icy rain were pulled down only towards Link. Dark Link was mirroring everything Link was doing for a frustrating hour. Suddenly, Dark Link screeched into the sky, suddenly the moon glowed red and seemed to let out a gravity that pulled everything towards it. The tall trees root peeled from the ground and it flew up towards the moon. While Link stared up at the moon in awe Dark Link kicked him into Lake Hylia. Link quickly came up and felt himself raising, the water was going up to the moon, getting deeper and deeper as it went. Link sunk underwater and dropped down to the bed slowly. He was losing his breath, he didn't seem to have the strengh to swim up. He galanced up to the waters surface and saw the moon threw it. It was glowing a bloody red making his eyes sting with an unknown evil. Links face twisted with pain and his eyes were bulging out of his face. He heard strange distant whispers,
"This is the end, of the hero. That saved the two parrarel worlds. But there is a third,(that is hinting on the new Zelda game) and it is your journey to get there! But not as you, its the end for you! HA HA HA HA HA!"
The moon finnaly stopped glowing and his deformed face flopped back to normal. The water was extreemely high now he could see Hyrule Field underneath the waves below him. He couldn't keep himself up anymore, and he sunk slowly underwater. Link was losing his breath fast, he knew he was going to die but there was nothing he could do about it. Suddenly he felt the wind drive right through him. It circled around him like a tornado and... and... all went white. Links screams echoed creepily though the never ending whiteness. Then- a blue glowing light turned the white to a blue, and Link saw the Ocarina Of Time floating before him. A deep, sacred voice boomed through the un-excisting walls. It said:
"Link, I am contacting you through the Ocarina Of Time. It is I- Rauru. The sage of time. The Ocarina Of Time will aid you one last time, you are not meant to die here. I and The Ocarina Of Time will work together to fix the intended flow of time."

The Whiteness faded away, and Link was left lying on the sea bed- not breathing- but still living. Everything went hazy and he started to float up to the surface- the water started to drain. Time was rewinding itself! He was going Back In time! He stared in disbelief as he saw thew last few minutes of his life unwind itself. The water went back to its normal level.
Dark Link came back and time stopped rewinding itself in the middle of the fight between Link and Dark Link. He started to scream as before but this time Link sliced his sword at his mouth, busting up his purple lips and making him cough up blood. Link continued to attack him and Dark Link fell to the floor, with the Links sword drilled into his chest. Suddenly, Dark Link flew up into the air blocking out the moonlight. He did that scream again. Link realised it was a familiar one. Dark Link started shaking violently, and once he had shooken the fastest possible- he burst into a shower of light. Link became blinded for a moment and when the light faded away, the Skull Kid was left floating there- giving him a peircing stare.
"The Skull Kd!" Cried Navi. He flew up towards the moon leaving these words- whispering in Links ear.
"The Majoras Mask holds more evil than you know. And it is that, that will be the death of you! Mwa ha ha ha!"

Link stumbled to the floor, the darkness of the night sky swallowing him- haunting him.


End of Part 4
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Why haven't you posted this in the Fanfiction section of the site? Anyway, it seems quite good.
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I have done another story!
What d' ya think?
I'm a 'writting story addict! (Its at the bottom of my post)





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Why haven't you posted this in the Fanfiction section of the site? Anyway, it seems quite good.
I didn't know there was one.



Part 5: The Tower Of the Gods

"Link! Link!" Shouted Navi "Link wake up!"

Link sat up and rubbed his eyes.
"You just fell unconciosus!" Continued Navi "C' mon! We have to go."
Link nodded his head and jumped to his feet. Navi zipped of and Link followed closely behind.
"Were going to the Temple Of Time - where Valoo told us to go!" Shouted Navi back at Link.

Once at Hyrule Market, a strange man stopped them in there tracks.
"Stop! You! Forest Boy!" He cried "I have something for you, this."
The man handed him a green orb. "I am the Great Deku Trees messanger - Rito. He gave me this to hand to you. I don't know why he wants you to have it, but he said you will be happy to see it!"
"Why thank you!" Said Navi
"Well, I best be going now, my work here is done." With that the messanger dashed off at an amazing speed.
"Link!" Navi said to Link "You know Valloo said to show this blue orb to the gods. Well, we probably have to show the green orb to the Gods too! Lets go!"
They scampered up to the Temple Of Time and entered the sacred doors. The Door of Time was open in front of them. But how? When he had gone back in time after banishing Ganon to the evil realm he hadn't opened the Door of Time again. He slowly walked through the doors. Only a few steps into the sacred room, the Master Sword glowed a blue light and struck itself out of the pedestal. It swung over to Link and he quickly caught it in his grasp. Then, the orbs flew out of Links tunic and swirled around in the air. They burst into a blast of light and the whole room boomed with a heavenly voice.

"Link, the chosen one! Your final test has come!" the voice boomed into his ears almost lifting him off the floor. "We are the gods. We rest in the Tower Of the Gods. That tower lies magnificently above Hyrule, now it is invisible to the naked eye. We have bad news.
Ganon, the evil king... has... broken out of the evil realm. He is looking for Zelda and you, he wants your triforce power so he can rule the world!"

"What!?" Cried Navi "Link! Show them the orbs!" He held the orbs high into the sky.
"The orbs. I see you have them, they are only hope. All we can say is... keep them safe."
The roaring voices of the Gods faded away and Link and Navi were left in complete silence.

End of Part 5
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That Time Wars - Episode 4 is... strange. The Zelda story seems to be getting better though! Keep writting!
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Keep it up! Your storytelling skills are ace!
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Wow great story can't wait to see what happens next.
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Old 06-26-2005, 10:18 AM
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Thank you for all the comments! The storys nearly done now and I hope you enjoy Part 6.


Part 6: ????

Link heard footsteps walk into the large room he was standing him. He swerved around to see who it was. A plump man wearing a red cloak and a crown walked in with a stern look on his face.

"I, am the King Of Hyrule." He said solemly. "My world - Hyrule - is dying. There is only one thing I can do now. Give me the orbs!"

Link stepped back curiously.
"Give him the orbs Link!" Whispered Navi into Links ear.
Taking a deep breath, he threw the orbs into the kings clutches.
"Thank you" Said the King. He raised his arms into the air "Sorry, Link. Sorry, Zelda. Sorry... everyone. But, this is my last choice."

He threw the orbs into the air, they swirled around faster and faster.
"Halt!" A fammiliar voice came from behind them. Link slowly turned the other way "No, It can't be him." he thought. There, standing in front of them was... Ganon. His long cape ripped with blood on it, and a sneer on his green face. Laughing at them like they were poor, pathetic bugs stranded under someones boot.
"You have gone to far, Hero of Time" He mimmicked the title.
Link drew his sword angrily. The orbs were still spinning rapidly, getting faster and faster every second. The orbs started to spin slower, untill they stopped altogether - and fell to the floor.
"Ha ha ha! Stop playing with those toys and fight me!" Ganons evil voice echoed through the room. Damaging the sacred walls.
"You can do it Link!" Shouted Navi "Kill the freak once and for all!" Navi flew up and down in anger.
"Shut up you annoying little bug!" Shouted Ganon.
"Oh no! Your not stopping me this time! This time I'm helping Link!"
"Ha... ha... ha." Muttered out Ganondorf. He raised his long black sword and struck it down on top of Navi. She couldn't dodge, and she fell to the floor in two pieces. Dead.
Link started shaking with anger. A tear trickled down his cheek. The King of Hyrule just stood behind him, still, waiting for something.
"Well come on Link! Attack me! Don't just stand there!" Link was shaking, gripping his Master Sword so tight his hands were going red.
"Come on! Attack! Attack!" Continued Ganondorf
"EEEEEEEEYAAAAAAAA!" Link cried! He struck Ganon with the Master Sword so hard, Ganon flew into the walls. Link pointed the Master Sword down towards Ganons eye. But before he could strike. The orbs burst open and water spilt from within them, a rumbling shook the whole temple. While Link was looking around confused, Ganon knocked him away. He floated over to Link lying on the floor.
"Bye, Hero of Time." Ganondorf cackled. The Black sword struck down into Link.
"Nooooooo!" Cried the King. "What have you done Ganon! Hes dead!"

The roof blasted open and water engulfed Ganon, the King, and the remains of Link and Navi. Hyrule became flooded, Death mountain was pulled from the earth and floated up to the surface of the water. Kokiri forest and the lost woods floated up to the surface. Everything else, was destroyed.
Hyrule drowened, and over time became forgotten.

Part 7 Warning: This part contains SPOILERS.

What became of the Hero of Time? He was saved by the wind. The wind had picked up his soul and traveled the sky for years on end.

10000 years into the future, Hyrulians had made a new way of life atop the sea. Living on islands scattered across the water they called, the Great Sea. A certain boy was born on a small island - Outset Island. The Hero of Times soul, having been carryed by the winds for thousands of years was blown into the destined child. The child whom, would grow to be The Hero of Winds and smite Ganon as the Hero of Time had done so many times before.

But, what about the ledgendary princess - Zelda? She was drowned, but soul was saved by the wind as Link was. A young pirate girl was gifted with the one and only Zeldas soul.

The King Of Hyrule, who lived forever. Kept the Wind Waker safe, waiting to give it to the next reincarnation of, Link. The one and only Hero.

The End

And that is that! Please post your thoughts.
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Wow great ending didnt see link and navi dying. Shocking
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Old 06-26-2005, 10:33 AM
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I love the interlaced storyline! Very good! But i find one thing wrong. What of Ganon? How did he survive?
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Old 06-26-2005, 11:00 AM
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Ganon probably got washed up on an island (because Ganons so powerful water can't kill him!) and then built the forsaken fortress there. Then went looking for Link and Zelda. That answer your question Necco?

Question: What does interlaced mean?

And, seen as though this is my thread where I post all the english things I do. Heres I poem I did for a poem contest I entered. Which is a writting contest (creator unable to think of a cool name)


In the depth of a blood filled war.
Was a dragon bigger than anyones ever saw.
It breathed its fiery wrath upon everyone.
But a hero came, made from the sun.
Grasping a sword that can smite evil.
The dragon turned oh so feeble
when its eyes landed on the swords point - towering and steeple.
The warrior cut up the horrible beast
and celebrated with an almighty feast
And so, the heroes adventure came to an end.
And he dissapeared round the bend.

But before he could go,
It started to snow.
Meaning he had to go to the snow mountain.
There he drank from the magical fountain.
Which sent him up to the sun.
There his body was improved to a better one.
And he became the greatest warrior whoever lived.
But when snow came, he would be miffed.
As snow makes him lose his powers.
He would become a bunch of weak flowers.
And he would have to travel to the sun again.
So he could get, his sacred name.

He then heard a dragon was attacking.
He had to give the beast a sacking.
So he set off with almighty speed.
From the sun, as flames was in the need.
He would smite that dragon - full of evil.
Make him oh so feeble.

In the depth of a blood filled war.
Was a dragon bigger than anyones ever saw.
It breathed its fiery wrath upon everyone.
But a hero came, made from the sun.
Grasping a sword that can smite evil.
The dragon turned oh so feeble
when its eyes landed on the swords point - towering and steeple.
The warrior cut up the horrible beast
and celebrated with an almighty feast
And so, the heroes adventure came to an end.
And he dissapeared round the bend.
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Old 06-26-2005, 11:06 AM
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Ganon probably got washed up on an island (because Ganons so powerful water can't kill him!) and then built the forsaken fortress there. Then went looking for Link and Zelda. That answer your question Necco?

Question: What does interlaced mean?

Yes pretty much. But the forsaken fortress was probably the Gerudo Pirate fortress >.> but thats another story for another day.

Now, interlaced means combining! So, when you have the reference between the two Zelda games with how the sea rose, then yea thats what it was!
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Old 06-26-2005, 11:23 AM
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Do you think I should add that bit to Part 7?
What do you think of my poem?

And, remember if you have Zelda game you made up with its story line and place in timeline etc.
You can post it here!
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