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Old 07-03-2012, 01:51 PM
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Just a little poem I wrote. About a little child that wants to bring light to her bedroom, but she can't see it from her window, as it faces the north.


The suns glow won't touch the north
and so the gloom comes forth
and my room will never see the light
no matter how bright.

So grab a jar, and a cap
and the sun is what I shall trap
and when it greys
it fades away, leaving my soul alone.

So plant a seed, and take the lead
grow a flower of the sun
but it will take very long,
and our work has just begun

The flowers they, will fade away
and wilt inside my hand
and nothing I do will make them live
and nothing I can give

But out the door, they wait for me
my only little friends
The fireflies, their happy cries
light up the night
And in they fly, and never die, into my little jar
'cuz when they're here in my room
the light is never far...

I really don't like putting my work out on the internet, because I'm afraid someone will copy it. But, I've got the personal copyright so, Copyrighted 2012
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Old 07-03-2012, 01:54 PM
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It's great HH. You should write more. You can make a fanfic with this you know
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Old 07-03-2012, 02:01 PM
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Thank you. Wrote that one night when I couldn't write my book.
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Old 07-03-2012, 02:03 PM
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Re: The Authoress' Corner

Why don't you make a book bassed in your poem
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Old 07-03-2012, 02:06 PM
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I may. I've got some magazines accepting submissions in my area, so I may make it into a short story.
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Old 07-03-2012, 02:10 PM
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Really? Cool i hope that if you send it they published it
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Old 07-03-2012, 03:05 PM
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This one is about a mother sending her children out into the world.

Do you ever wish to fly across the raging seas?
And would you take a leap of faith to glide around with ease?

So into the sky, my children, you fly tonight
And spread your wings and hearts with might
Soar into the sky
And always fly towards the trees of life

The nests you can make
Just don't let them break
And watch over each other with care.
And just remember, when you need me
I will always be there

My children, I can't stay ever present with you
But my love is constantly there too
And though you're old, and married, and bold
Just treat this earth right
So soar off into this enormous world tonight.

Hope you enjoyed.
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Old 07-03-2012, 03:09 PM
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Nice this express how a mother feels when their children growup
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Old 07-05-2012, 03:54 AM
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Wow!!! I've managed to find more beautiful poetry! People here at ZU are incredibly talented!!
Does it take you a long time to write your poems, or does it just come to you naturally? They really are very well written I must say! I particularly love your poem about the mother and her children; It's got a very warm, gentle and positive feeling to it.
I hope that you are able to upload more soon!
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Old 07-05-2012, 02:28 PM
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Thank you very much. It takes an hour or so, but the Mother and Child poem came pretty quick. I will post more, so thank you so very much for your comments!
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Old 07-05-2012, 02:36 PM
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Thank you very much. It takes an hour or so, but the Mother and Child poem came pretty quick. I will post more, so thank you so very much for your comments!
You are welcome! I was simply speaking the truth!!
Very impressive! I honestly thought that it would take a lot longer, but I guess if you're passionate, talented and feeling inspired, then it must come quite quickly.
Great! I'll look forward to reading more soon!!!
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Old 07-05-2012, 08:35 PM
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I found this one a bit gloomy, but here you are.

On top one Hill



EDIT: Yea, I'm sorry. I removed this one because I'm submitting it to a few magazines today. Keep you all posted.
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Old 07-05-2012, 08:40 PM
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Re: The Authoress' Corner

Great and so gloomy HH. This could do a pair with shatter heart
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Old 07-05-2012, 08:48 PM
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I had a dream once about a school for orphaned children, but they could never got to the hill behind the school. One of the children did, and it was a gravesite for the founder's wife. Lovely dream, actually. One of my working books, now.
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Old 07-06-2012, 01:42 PM
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What happen after that?
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Old 07-06-2012, 01:49 PM
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Well, that was all I remembered. Something about a library too.
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Old 07-06-2012, 01:51 PM
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Maybe it was a premonition. Tjhat you are going to buold the school and when you die you eished to get buried there
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Old 07-06-2012, 01:52 PM
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Wow! Another gorgeous poem! I'm amazed at how incredibly well you manage to create different atmospheres through your work. Very well done!
When I read your poem, I was able to picture everything that you described clearly in my mind. Not all poems succeed in doing that.
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Old 07-06-2012, 07:17 PM
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Wow this is a true piece of talent and im very impressed of it..you have gotten one more fan. and Nami-san check out my poetry and tell me what you think of it.
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Old 07-07-2012, 04:15 PM
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Would you like me to post two more I wrote?
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