[Poetry] Tlozbj's Corner

Ok everyone this are my lyrics for Zl and SOT

Zelda lullaby:

Go to sleep
Hear this lullaby
Let it rid the tears in your eyes
Go to sleep
It's time for you to dream until the dawn of a new day shines in our world
The sun will shine,the darkness disappear and the kingdom safe again
When you hear this lullaby let it cleanse the dark in your dreams
When you wake up the sun will shine again in our beautiful land.

Song of time:

Time is an illusion
We think it can be controlled,but we are wrong
Ganon's intrusion has blinded us from the true that lies in this song
Past,present,future change
When the hero takes the sword is placed in the stone time is his to own
When the sword place back in the stone time will flow again and the road between times close again.

What do you guys/gals think?

The first one was good.

I noticed some spell errors that change what you are saying in the second one; I know what you meant to type but you should be careful of things like this. Also, I was very confused with the Song of Time lyrics considering the Song of Time is a song that does control songs, and are you talking about the Master Sword? Your use of he is inferring that Ganon is the one who is the one removing the Master Sword, not Link. Ganon cannot wield the Master Sword.

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yeah notice it gonna change it right now.That controls songs or that controls time

Both are excellent, tlozbj, especially considering that you're starting off on the back foot. I agree with Ruki on the subject of spelling, though. I can go over it for you if you'd like.

Originally Posted by Mister Blak

Both are excellent, tlozbj, especially considering that you're starting off on the back foot. I agree with Ruki on the subject of spelling, though. I can go over it for you if you'd like.

Sure send me the errors by PM to correct them.



If I hear enough petitions i will put more of my songs here.

I like them. Very nice.

I have lyrics for:
Epona's song
Saria song
Oath to order
Ballad of the wind fish
Ghirahim theme
Song of healing

I can post them if you guys/gals want.

Impressive.

Thanks JasmineWrath

Here is my updated list of lyrics withought the ones i put here:
epona's song
song of storms
song of healing
sun song
oath to order
ballad of the wind fish

If any of you want me to post any of them just ask.

Nocturne of Shadows sounds interesting.

nocturne of shadows:
This song will take you to darkness,
to pain and you will feel the pain of death,
and sorrow if you become lost in darkness,
you will never come back.

There you go Jasmine's wrath hope you like it.

I love that one. You're wonderful with poetry.

Thanks but Gamzee is alot better.

Both of you are pretty good. Soon I should post some of my fanfiction.

okay hope to see it soon.

He was a great webmaster in this page
He guided eveyone along the path of light
He protect and guided the land alone for years
He make this page the best along his companions
He united the kingdoms of the land
Now he retires to enjoy his work
His memory as a webmaster will always be with us

A song honoring the time Cody was webmaster.Hope you guy/gals like it. To understand it sing it in your mind with a tune like the song of time.

Awwww. Bye Cody! We'll miss you!

Saria song:
In the Kokiri forest we all:
Jump
Dance
Run
Play
and
Sing
Every one in the kokiri forest do this everyday come play with us
Use this melody if to the forest you want to go

A gift a maked for my ZU BFF HylianHeroine

For those who want to clense their soul do it with this serenade of water:

Your soul has been corrupted by darkness
You must purified to continue with your quest
Cleanse your soul with this serenade.

Hope you like. Leave your comments,thoughts and petions.