[Poetry] Tlozbj's Corner

For those forgotten childhood memories the minuet of forest:
You have forgotten,your childhood
This time you return to the forest
And help your friend.

To go into the light the prelude of light:
The triforce is safe here come back
To leave the sacred sword and go back
In time so Ganondorf can be destroy

For burning friendships the Bolero of fire:
You have save the volcano and the gorons
You have begun a great friendship
Whit them to the volcano return this song you most use

Please comment. If you want any lyrics for a zelda song just ask and i will make it.

Songs to power the master sword

Wind god's aria:

Oh Wind god
With this aria i call upon you
For your prayer receive and power the master sword
For the kingdom to be saved

Earth god's lyrics:
Oh earth god
With these lyrics i call upon you
For your prayer recieve and power the master sword
For the kingdom to be saved

My newest lyrics leave your comments below.

Elegy of emptyness:

We will separate your body and soul
We will separate your body and soul
With your soul a statue we will make
For you to suffer your lost till the end of time.

Alright, I have taken a look at most of these, and I like them! The majority if them are well-written and even beautiful. Free-verse poetry is not much to my personal liking in general, but a couple of these, "Zelda's Lullaby" and "Serenade of Water" specifically, stand out as being fitting, beautiful lyrics that are very much to my liking!

One question, though: are these meant to be sung to the tunes of their respective namesakes? I have had a hard time matching most of them up with their tunes, so I am just curious as to whether that was even your intention.

As others have said, there are many spelling (and a couple grammatical) errors scattered throughout, I believe, all of your lyrics. For example, in "Earth God's Lyric," you say "With this lyrics I call upon you." This would be correct as either "...this lyric..." or "these lyrics." And the final lines of both "Wind God's Aria" and "Earth God's Lyric" would be correct as either "For this kingdom to be saved" or "For this kingdom to be safe." If it helps, just put your lyrics through a spell-checker such as Microsoft Word.

Otherwise, good work so far!

Thanks. They are suppose to be by the tune of their namesake. Sometimes you may repeat some words 2 or 3 times or extend some sylables to make sense.

Song of storm MM version:
Brother hear my cry represented in the rain
My anger represent in the thunder
That comes with the rain
If you this song your will be cleanse of the dark in your heart and soul

Epona's song:

Epona
Epona
Little horse of mine
You're a precious gift sent down from the divine
You're future is as bright as day
You will help the hero saved the land
Epona
Epona
Little horse of mine
Main of white, eyes of blue, heart of gold and silver soul
Epona
Epona
You’re a precious gift sent down from the divine

My first lyrics that do not merge with the tune because i don't think theirs one and they are
Demise theme:

The triforce i shall claim and the worls ruled
With my sword mountains will crumble
If a hero tries to defeat me he will fail
The legend of the conqueror demon will stike fear
A eternal legend of fear and destruction

It goes with a rock tune. If their a demise theme someone send me a link to make a new one based on the original tune.

Dude, you should make a video of you singing along to the songs with the lyrics

I'm bad at singing. But if anyone want to make videos of it they can tell. if they give me the credits for the lyrics it's okay. Also i don't have anything to tape me.

If you have a webcam and windows movie maker it shouldn't be too hard. Definitely look into it

I'll try to do it. Which one would you like to see?

Originally Posted by tlozbj

Saria song:
In the Kokiri forest we all:
Jump
Dance
Run
Play
and
Sing
Every one in the kokiri forest do this everyday come play with us
Use this melody if to the forest you want to go

A gift a maked for my ZU BFF HylianHeroine

Awww, thank you! I like it!

Yaaay. HH like it.

I like your work, and the only area that's lacking something is the grammatical/spelling area
But good job nonetheless

Originally Posted by Supercoil64

If you have a webcam and windows movie maker it shouldn't be too hard. Definitely look into it

My webcam make bad sound quality recordings. Also i don't like singing i tried it but it didn't work.

Oath to order:

When there is trouble in the land
Sing this song atop the tower that tells time
When we hear this song will come to help.

Song of healing :
Please forgive me for what I have done
Let my soul be purified from thee dark
That rests inside of me
Let mysoul pass throught the light of the sacred realm.

May I contribute one here? I don't see the point in creating a new thread for it.

As for the Song of Healing, the lyrics are well written but I don't think they fit the tune too well.

You should ask that to a mod.

Originally Posted by Redthir

May I contribute one here? I don't see the point in creating a new thread for it.

As for the Song of Healing, the lyrics are well written but I don't think they fit the tune too well.

This is Tlozbj's thread. If you would like to post your own writing, feel free to make your own thread. :] If you would only like to post a short piece that you feel doesn't need a thread, you can post it in the Writers' Pad!

Love the name change. Wish I could write fanfic. LOL. I am at a loss to write stories when plots have been developed. Great songs TLOZBJ! If you want, I can look into doing the lyrical videos. Just without me singing, thought. XD