Venger vs. Gulbo

note: this is the new version of my character, the Venger. The old one was denied. Sprax is no longer my character, his name is Todd now*

It was a rainy night early in April. At the inner town of Virgo City, the legendary Venger awaited his opponet. Thunder crackling in the sky, a dark mist hovered over the city. It was an old city, from around 100 AD.
Almost everything new was built out of wood, older buildings were brick.
"He said he'd meet me here at twelve. It is already one o' clock!" Todd yelled aloud. Todd, also known as The Venger, was only fifteen. However, he is half elf half human, making him smarter than your teachers. Well maybe not smarter, but he knew how to fight.
"Ahh, calm down you stupid boy." Todd heard his sword, the vengence, say. Only Todd could here it.
Suddenly, a black figure appeared in the street. "See, I told you stupid. You always get so mad. Calm down sometimes, seriously." The sword muttered.
"About time." Todd said standing up grabbing his sword. He unsheathed it from the red and black sheath it was resting in. It made a slicing nose so pure you would swear a God just took out his sword.
"Damn boy! You think you can beat me. Go home! I thought you were older. Dean told me you were a legend!" The mysterious black figure spit out.
"Your pathetic, judging an enemy before you know him." Todd said calmly. The black figure took this offensivly.
"You bloody child. Now you are dead!" The figure yelled taking out a two hand sword that was tied to his back. The figure was tall, six foot eight. He was bulky too. He was a man you would not want to mess with. When he got close enough to see, Todd saw a big scar acrosse his face. He wore a dark green cloak and a headband. His sword was massive. It could rip through a house wall easily.
The man ran all the way to Todd yelling. He then took a slice down to Todd. His sword slammed into the ground splashing up mud.
"Where did the runt go!?" The man mumbled. Just then he felt a tap behind him.
"Right here chubby." A voice said. The man turned around to see a boy smiling. It was The Vengence.
"You...are... an elf." The man said.
"Half elf actually. And you are Gulbo." Todd said with a smile one his face.
"You smile, you know your dead right!" Gulbo said angrly. He swung his blade at Todd from the left. Todd jumped over the sword and landed in the same spot.
"No buddy, you are." Todd swung the vengence with full force, chopping Gulbos' head clean off his shoulders. Blood spurted out of his neck. The body fell to its knees. The huge sword clunked to the ground. Then the body fell down, blood being washed out with rain. Gulbos' head landed next to his body. The expression was half shock and half amazement. A puddle of blood circled the corpse. The Vengence walked away. His sword glowed for a second, and then dimmed out. It had collected Gulbos', the bully of Virgo City, soul.

doubtabley hatn kokos straightness isnt one of your fine points is it?

what are you talking about?