OoC: That's plenty, for now. At least you didn't cut off in the middle and not reach the point I did. Onward to posting!
BiC: "Wh-who's there?" Reizin nervously called, startled.
Gah! What am I losing my nerve for? This is what I WANTED to happen, right? "Show yourself!" The teenager commanded, regaining control. However, the darkness became as silent as before. Pacing around, looking side to side frantically, Reizin tried to trace the voice. Frustrated, the youth poured some of his Od into his armor, forcing it to activate. A grin reached his face when it flared brightly, lighting most of the factory like a beacon.
Red eyes.The first thought to reach his brain.
Those eyes are so creepy! He thought,
but at least I seem to have found my disturbance. All right creature, prepare for battle! His eyes took in the rest of the figure now, from his long black hair to the black combat boots on his feet.
He's so... pale... but, he still kind of looks human. "Ah, uh, uhm..."
The figure drew a sword, taking a step towards the twin-blader. "WAIT! Stay back!" Reizin yelled, taking a step backward. The dark one continued to advance, and Reizin took each of his steps forwards as an excuse for retreat.
CLANG!
The sound of Reizin's armor colliding with the metal wheel of a conveyor belt meant only one thing to the boy, he couldn't back up anymore. The mysterious pale man had no such hinderance, however, and continued to advance, no closing the distance between the two fighters. Nervously, Reizin stuttered and gaped, fear apparent in his eyes as the the figure came closer. When the distance was only a few feet, the man with crimson eyes raised his sword...
... What am I doing?
Reizin straightened, his hands reflexively flying to his swords. He drew both at once, releasing his normal combat Od into the weapons and increasing the flow to his armor to that of combat level. The twin swords blazed into action, flaming brightly, and the armor, previously giving off a strong glow, now flared with bright red fire.
Should I have said something like "Flame on!"?