[Power Shot] Arin's Training

In a misty grassland, there were two shadows moving forward. The warrior Arin as one shodow, his brother Knight the other.

"He's here" Arin said, "Haven is around here somewhere."

Arin had Neo Space powers. He used the powerful Neo Space elements Earth, Metal, Fire, Lightning, Water, Ice, and Air. He can also use Neo Space to warp from place to place at the price of using up almost all his magic.

Arin looked around. A shadow came speeding from behind Knight. Knight quickly dodged. The shadow missed him and went for a swipe with his 6 inch claws from under a dark blue cloak at Arin. He dodged and summoned some frozen water from the ground to freeze him. The shadow brought his other arm out and smacked the ice blast back at Arin, freezing him.

Knight did the first thing that came to mind. He pointed his metal arm at the shadow, casting the spell Bio-Thundorga. An electric shockwave emited from his arm blowing the cloak away. With his best attack, Roneice-Blun, his body expoded in flames lighting up the area and defrosting Arin.

The shadow person disappeared. In the light, in his long-sleeve, blue jacket and long black baggy pants, stood Haven. All he did was stick his hand out and Knight and Arin were flown back, putting Knight's flame out.

"Knight, grab my hand" Arin yelled out. He reached for Arin and grabbed his hand.

"I don't know how we're going to beat him. I'm all worn out, Arin" Knight yelled.

"I know. That's why we're leaving".

As Haven went in to kill them both, Arin warped themselves. During the warp, Arin and Knight got seperated.

Arin fell from the sky into another grassy area. "Man I'm exosted" he said as he collapsed.

After about two days he finally woke up. "I've got to find Knight" He put out his hand and opened a wripple. He stepped in thinking it would bring him right to Knight, but something strange happened. He was still in Neo-Space looking at multiple dimentions all looking the same. Confusingly he said "mabye I'll get lucky" and walked in one.

When he walked up, he landed right in front of a person in a black cloak.

"Aaaahhhhhh. Who are you," a deep voice asked. "No, wait." The person put his hand on Arin's head. "I see. I can read your mind. Looks like you'd be perfect for The Dome. Why don't you join? It will help you master your abilities."

"Ah, Knight can wait. This sounds interesting," Arin said walking up to a strange desk that just seemed to appear out of nowhere. He signed his name on a piece of paper, then the paper wrote back, "Chronos, your teacher, will get you soon".

"Oh," the cloaked man said, "My name is Whelch."

Arin sat in a chair and started to wait, noticing the strange man had disappeared.

What the...?

My only teacher-character is Chronos, and there would not be advertisements like that anywhere. Redo the last part of that, right away.

Okay. Sorry about that. With Knight's teacher, I could pick from any of Aex's characters. I should stop assuming things.

What part of "there would be no advertizement like that" did you somehow not see? No billboard. Fix it now.

I fixed it. Sorry.

Somewhat better.

Assignment Time!

Having reached the strange and powerful Dome, Arin is ambushed by a Domerii, the private ghost servant of the Dark Eye, also known as Chronos. The ghost will inform you that it is too late today for training, but offers to show Arin to his new room. Accept and follow the ghost.

Describe your new room, as it is designed for your character's specific needs. 1,200 word minimum.

Wait, do I have to describe the room in 1,200 or less words or have the whole paragraph in 1,200 or less words?

The entire post should be no shorter than 1,200 words.

Oh, no shorter, that's a lot easier. Must have misunderstood. I'll get to work on it.