Can someone look over this french assignment...

I know this is my second time asking for someone to look over my french assignment, I'm just not sure of myself. Accents do not matter, just spelling and proper wording. I am at a Grade 9 level french in an english school, my class just started time traveling and we learnt things such as better than/worse than and futre tense. I will also use the word J'apporte alot...

Iras-je medieval ere parce que j'aime magie, epees, et mange avec mains. J'apporte desodorisont et dentifrice (extra blachissant) parce que ils ont moin hgiene. J'apporte pistolet parce que je tue betes rapidement c'est dangereux. J'apporte lanceyr de fusee et je me vends, je deviens riche. J'apporte medicine parce que ils ont moin methodes de retablissement. J'apporte mon appariel-photo pour photographies et memoires. Je rapporterai Holy Grail parce que decoration.

Thats a question?--> (Irais-je) Je vais (I will go) dans l'ère medievale parce que j'aime la magie, les épées et manger avec mes (les) mains. J'apporte désodorisant et dentifrice (extra blanchissant) car ils ont moin d'hygiène. J'apporte mon pistolet parce que je veut tuer les animaux rapidement ils sont dangereux. J'apporte lanceur de fusée et je le vends puis je deviens riche. J'apporte des médicaments parce que ils ont moin de méthodes de retablissement. J'apporte mon appareil-photo pour avoir des photographies et quelques memoires. Je rapporterais le Saint Graal parce que c'est une bonne décoration.

I corrected it quickly migh have left a few mistakes but nothing too serious... I think others will correct me quickly enough if i did

thank you so much, it's alright, what you did is more than enough. I owe you big time, if you ever need anything I am in your debt *bows deeply*

nah man it was my pleasure, just glad I could help.

i only noticed a little mistake : it would be j'apporte un désodorisant et un dentifrice parce qu'ils ont moins d'hygiène.

and it would be : car (or parce que) ils sont dangereux.

If anybody has the time can they teach me how to make that into future tense, I know I said I learned it but my mind is blanking on me....

Theres loads of ways to find out that on the internet, and posting on Zelda Universe is certainly NOT the best way to find it.

It depends, which future tense example: je vais faire
je ferais
The first one is "future proche" and the second one is "furure simple". I can help you with both.

I need help with future simple please.

Je vais y aller à l'ère médiévale parce que j'aime la magie, les épées et manger avec mes mains. J'amen le désodorisant et le dentifrice car ils ont moins d'hygiène. J’amen mon pistolet parce que je veut tuer les animaux rapidement, ils sont dangereux. J'apporte un lanceur de fusée et je le vends puis je deviens riche. J'apporte des médicaments parce que ils ont moins de méthodes de rétablissement. J'apporte mon appareil photo pour avoir des photographes et quelques mémoires. Je rapporterais le Saint Graal parce que c'est une bonne décoration.

Alright, I haven't quite memorized future simple, You should go to a local bookstore and purchase a "Bescherelle" set. It comes with a Grammar volume, a Verb Conjugation volume and a Spelling Volume. This will be efficient when doing french. I will get back to you on the future simple, my sister is borrowing my Bescherelle for a french assignment.

when you use I, the verb ending is rai and is pronounced ay (like day, way) for example, the verb apporter is j'apporterai, vendre is venderai, etc.

with tu, the ending is ras and is pronouned aw (like raw, saw etc) --> apporter is tu apporteras, vendre is vendras, etc

with il, it's the same thing than with tu but you cut the s. and it's the same pronounciation.

with nous, the ending is rons. i dont know what example to give you for the pronounciation though :confused: if i'm correct, english doesn't have any words with that pronounciation. it's kinda like "lion" but you don't pronounce the n and you "try" to make the sound with your nose. that's the best explanation i can come up with hehe. so apporter is nous apporterons, vendre is nous vendrons, etc.

with vous, it ends with rez and it's pronouced exactly like the fist one, ai. apporter is vous apporterez and vendre is vous vendrez

the last one, ils, ends with ront and is pronounced like ons (with nous) so apporter is ils apporteront and vendre is ils vendront.


I hope it helped. future simple is by far one of the most easy verb tense to learn. as soon as you know the present, you just have to add the ending and arrange the sentence to make it have sens and it'll be okay