I am having lots of troble with this one and its due when we come back from winter break, which is a while but still.
Any way, I have to write a storie, and I hate writing I never do it, so there I am not very good at making stuff up. It can be about any thing. It has to be at least 200 Paragraphs, and each paragraph has to have at least 5 compleat sentinces, or = to (for example, if paragraph 63 onley has 3 sentinces but paragraph 188 has 7 sentinces it will be ok.... dose that make sence???????? )
and i dont have very much so far
here is what i have so far::::::::::
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"Dylan wake up, brackefest is almost ready and wake your brother up also" said mom. "O.K." dylan screamed back in a moaning voice. Hi, my names Dylan as you have already herd from my loude mom, hehehehe. Oh and my moms name is Kim, or should I say our mom. My brother that she told me to wake up, happings to be my twin brother Cole. We are both 12 years old! Were both in the 6th "Boys hurry up and get down here, brackefest is gitting cold!" said Kim. "O.K, I am gitting Cole up now" Dylan screamed back. Now where was I, oh yes, we are both in the 6th grade! But before mom has some sort of fit, I have to wake Cole up, this should be fun!
Dylan started to walk out of his and Coles bedroom. The man that Cole was talking about, was once are step farther. He would beat mom, and toch us, and make us toch him a lot. He was a bad man. "Its about time you got down here. Now wheres your brother?" said Kim. "He is gitting dressed then he will be down here" said Dylan as he dug into his nice and juicy ham and chease omelet! Just as the bus was stoping in front of our house Cole came running down. And Kim started screaming "hurry go before she leaves." I got one more drink of my milk and me and Cole ran out to the bus. We took a seat behind the bus driver. Our bus has a long trip, we are the first ones off, and the last ones off, and it takes like a hour to come from our house-to-school or from school-to-home. So me and Cole usley sleep, till we get there! I started to dose off, and then I got woke up to Cole's gralling stumic, I asked "are you hungry?" he replyed back "yea...a litte bit." "Well thats your fault... your to hard to wake up in the mornings!" said Dylan in a playfull voice. "yea I know it" Cole said.
I must have dosed off, cus the next thing I rember is the bus driver screaming that its time to go. When I opened my eyes Cole had fell asleep on my sholder. He woke up though around the same time that I had woke. So then we got off of the bus, and started to go to class. As we walked into the hall-way, a big bullie from the 8th grade came behind and pushed both of us to the ground. I hit my knees, and it felt like they were bleding. "You stupid little brats...you should watch where you are going" said the bullie. Then he took Cole's backpack unziped it and dumped all of the stuff out, then he got mine and done the same thing. Then the bell rang for us to go to 1st period, and the group that had gathered around us laphing, scatered off to class and then we was the last ones in the hallway. I got up and my knees felt like they were broke, but I just carried on, and got my backpack, and started to gather the binders, folders, and papers. Cole did the same!
When we got to 1st period Miss. Martin met us in the hall-way, and started screaming at us for being late and said "I am writing both of you up and I am not letting you watch the movie! And I am going to talk to your other teachers and make sure they dont let you watch threr movies ether" Today is the last day before winter break, so most of our classes, if not all of them, are watching movies. I just looked back at her and said "Yes Mam" Cole said the same onley he added Miss. Martin to it.
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and i am now at a stoping point where i cant think of a freken thing....any way if you have any ideas please tell me.
Or if you think my storie sucks, please give me ideas for a new storie
