Nick's Sprite comic

This is something I came up with during my spare time:




(NOTE: I didn't make the sprites in this comic)

Tell me what you all think.

Cool Knight sprites. And I am actually a big fan of custom backgrounds, just don't but all the black texture lines in and they'll look a lot better. AND don't repeat copy-pasted rocks, just draw them all. And a word of advice, do things in this order. 1- write your text. 2- draw bubble around text. 3-fill in sky with blue. That will help you a lot.

Ok, I'll do that for when I'm working on the next comic strip.

Thats a Darknut from TP.

Here's another comic strip.

Doin' good so far! Now I think you can start expanding. Try giving your characters some more personality, and maybe some close-ups or varied panel size. Anyway I enjoyed it, so hey, just keep it up.

super smash flash? looks mostly like that. anyway, good so far.

Heres another.

big monster appears! eats guy! link is thinking! what will happen next!?

Woop Nice comic I like the action packedness of it and the large monster.
by the way if you'd wouldn't mind a bit of criticisms, try makeing more speech bubbles like your last panels round is good where as squiggly is bad but not so much a big deal.
nice close ups and I wonder what will happen next?

It's the best I could come up with for the ground, thanks though.

No No the ground is fine I like the ground,it's the speech bubbles I am talking about.

However I would like to see what happens next in this series?

At the end of the first comic where the enemy says "that was Easy" you should have put the easy button from staples in there.