Random Sprite Comics

I'm new here so I decided to post my own sprite comic!
Please rate and PLEASE help me make it better!
Rules apply here too.
Please submit your own comics too!

I can help you make it better, but you need A LOT of help. A lot.

The first thing you need to do is host your images on Imageshack or Photobucket. Do that, then I will start giving you an extensive list of things you need to change.

1. Try this-
Comic 1
Comic 2
Comic 3
Comic 4
Comic 5
Comic 6
Comic 7
Comic 8
2.Your comics-
try bghq.com for some backgrounds. That will help you out a lot. I'm impressed that you have speech bubbles already, though. Another thing that will help is if you get these-
Better Link Sprites
Better Zelda Sprites
Better Ganondorf Sprites

Okay. Aside from that, you get HUGE points for using Magus sprites (really huge) and I like your around-the-corner scene in #5. Keep it up with your speech bubbles (although I would suggest finding a font on www.blambot.com) and keep running with it! I really liked the comics.

Anyway, go to www.imageshack.us to upload your comics. Much better than a .zip file. But I helped ya out this time

its good!but it needs some work on the backgrounds and some better sprites

here's some advice Alextriforce

lets see now...
1. Put a little humorism in it, so people will be more interested in it.
2. Instead of using Paint, try using Photoshop or something.
3. Don't make your own backgrounds, the sprites won't fit in with those backgrounds, try looking for backgrounds online.

Here's my comic Legend of Zelda: Chronicles of Hyrule it's not perfect but it has humor, good backgrounds and I used Fireworks to do it.