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Re: Hero of Clowns
Well, the last panel was a little too expected, you want to surprise the reader, a cut to skull kid, or, if you don't care about a bit of crossover-ness, Wario, would have been funnier and less expected. And wouldn't a shortened Kokiri be pronounced as coke? Since Kokiri has a hard O, A joke about crack would have been a bit funnier, Navi's line about meth would have fit in more, and wiener jokes can be seen as immature (although drug jokes can be as well). Overall not your best one, but it was still a bit funny, and you were gone for four months, so...
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Re: Hero of Clowns
Ha HA HA, you have a point that sheild was way to expensive and and it broke at the slightest unhappy glance like the Giants Knife.
I liked your joke about Cristal meth good humor and really great speech bubbles, So your going to do the whole game from start to finish? you'll need a tone more sprites my friend and I'd be happy to help. I wan't to see more of this series so keep it up! ![]() |

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