My sprite comic

Hello everyone i am making a sprite comics! It is called Zelda vs Pokemon. I have 2 episodes done so far and i am making more.
Ignore the other Forum posts that i posted about this.I kind messed up on them so...yeah.

Vol.1
Vol.2
Vol.3
Bonus: The phone call
My first sprite comic ever: Mario and Bowser
Vol.4

You have a private account.

I dont think i do for Photobucket... if you were looking at my other post where it lead you to Myspace, then yes. But my photobucket page is public.

Why is "Pokemon" underlined? It looks like a spelling and grammar mark....

The sprite is too short, and needs a lot more work.

Originally Posted by Austin

Why is "Pokemon" underlined? it looks like a spelling and grammar mark....

The sprite is too short, and needs a lot more work.

Oops! Sorry these are like my 4 and 5th sprite comics ive ever made... Im trying to get better at it. Its so fun.

looks good so far, keep it up.

Woop Frist might I ask you use a lager font for the comic, spelling and grammar errors nothing to big. aside from that you have a great start to your comics keep makeing them for they intrest me with the link and choice of story?

Ehhhhhhhhhhhhh........ Kid, you gotta work on your jokes. The point of a comic is to make people laugh (unless it's a superhero or adult/graphic novel comic).

Originally Posted by TheNaviNazi

Ehhhhhhhhhhhhh........ Kid, you gotta work on your jokes. The point of a comic is to make people laugh (unless it's a superhero or adult/graphic novel comic).

This, sadly.

The point of a comic is to be funny: to make people laugh. If you're making sprite comics just to crossover two games you particularly liked, hold off until you can make it consistently funny.

I kinda like it, but you gotta work on the jokes like the others said, make it worthwhile to read.

#2 was awesome! I only got it because I knew what the comic was about, but I really laughed at that. It sorta raised my expectations for the other ones.

Well. There are a lot of issues with your comics here. You're on the right track, however, and I'm sure that with experience, these issues will mostly iron themselves out. I'll just point out a couple things:

The first is to totally redo your title graphic. You know, the very jagged circle with the "Zelda vs. Pokemon" in it. Find a better font, set it in something more square, and always set it at the TOP of the comic; that's where the titles belong.

The second is to use the same font for all of the speech text. You seem to use different fonts for different characters, which I'm not too fond of (I actually tried it in a comic of mine once, and it didn't really work out). Using different colors of speech text for different characters is one thing, but you should keep it all the same font.

One last thing: some of the text in the last comic is a bit difficult to read; you need to make it a bit bigger.