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Well, time for this old foggy to give sprite comic's a test drive!

Issues:
Issue #1: Yeti approaches
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Description: Just to work out the kinks, Matt is in a pickle as he's stranded on a strange Mountain, and to make matters worse a Mysterious Yeti attacks!
Issue #2: Failure to Fight?
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Description: The Yeti, and Matt both get annoyed when their fight goes haywire!
Also new four panel template!
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Story:
Just two years after the events of Mother 3, the evil pigmaks are trying to regain power, and all the islands are a mess. All this changes however when a Yeti, a Monkey, and a man team up.
Disclaimer
This will not spoil major Story pieces in Mother 3, all that may be spoiled will be Names, Enemies, and some locations.. Not major things!

/Disclaimer
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Characters:

Matt:

Personality: Crazy, and intuitive..

Yeti Man:

Personality: Not very bright, Curious, and powerful

Slappy:

Personality: Adventurous, sarcastic.. bright.
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So I'll be getting you a strip made super-fast!
-Dodongo

Alright..adequate start, though you may want to decrease the panel size, there just doesn't seem to be enough going on in there. And you may want to use plain white text boxes. well that's my two cents feel free to use or not use my advice

Originally Posted by Mukora

Alright..adequate start, though you may want to decrease the panel size, there just doesn't seem to be enough going on in there. And you may want to use plain white text boxes. well that's my two cents feel free to use or not use my advice

Ya, funny story I actually found a four panel template I can use. So Woo-Hoo! Also, I'm going to definitely switch to all white speech bubbles..