Lost in Darkness; A Kingdom Hearts Comic

LOST IN DARKNESS
A Kingdom Hearts Comic

The Keyblade. A weapon of mass power, light, and heart. A weilder of this weapon, SORA, had amazing adventures with his freinds, DONALD and GOOFY. In his search for his other freinds, RIKU and KAIRI, SORA traveled other worlds and encountered the evil HEARTLESS and the dreaded NOBODIES. In the end, he and his freinds were re-united, and were left back on their homeworld, DESTINY ISLANDS. But, there is a greater story beyond the known. An evil being took control of SORA, and is using him to destroy worlds. RIKU and the great KING MICKEY go off on a journey to find, and save SORA, from the man who took control of SORA, whom calls himself the BETRAYER.


PROLOUGE
Cover
Page One
Page Two
Page Three
Page Four

Chapter One: Challenge of One Thousand Forms





*Station of Calling by Windlord from the Spriters Resource

...Interesting, all though those grey words are really confusing, also, are you from the pokemon world, you capitalized every name in your post, Why the heck?

Very interesting.
but I'd try and refain from words that don't fit in to the sentance it'self, ther distracting. also sence the plot has not yet begain to unfold I can't really say much for it 4.6 I'd like to see more of this once it blows out into a adventure.
I like your speical eventhough it was just two frames!

Well, That was a pointless little page. I was trying to recreate the thing that happens in the KH games, that say things with little fady words. I only capitalized the names to make them clear. I'm sorry if this confuses you, but that is the general point of the page. The next pages of the prolouge will be alot more clear, and will explain a lot more to those who havn't played Kingdom Hearts.

Originally Posted by Pakman

Well, That was a pointless little page. I was trying to recreate the thing that happens in the KH games, that say things with little fady words. I only capitalized the names to make them clear. I'm sorry if this confuses you, but that is the general point of the page. The next pages of the prolouge will be alot more clear, and will explain a lot more to those who havn't played Kingdom Hearts.

I noticed that.

There isn't a whole lot to judge now, just some text and a mirrored image. What is there looks very good, I must admit, but I'm looking forward to the more meaty parts of the comic. Do continue.

Wow, graphically good. I liked your title page that said "Prologue", the font choice and simplicity was very striking. I liked the title page, except the Sora picture looked stretched. I'd like to wait until the comic starts rolling, and I can see what the sprites and backgrounds you have look like. Remember to use close-ups and good speech bubbles!

And remember: Just because something is unclear doesn't mean that it is deep or profound. A lot of people use paradoxes and vague concepts to try to make their comic seem serious and dramatic. All the stuff about this 'Darkness' (WOO) has no meaning, as well as the floating words 'truth' and 'destruction'. It's like you're trying to represent someone's subconcious mind on paper, only to find out the mind you've picked turns out to be a block of cheese.

Okay, thanks for the advice GoldStud. I am putting up the next page now. I will post more tommarow!

UPDATE: New page. Short, but prepares for next few pages of the prolouge. Enjoy, and comment if you care!

Good comic.
The graphics and speech bubbles are nice to look at.
The plot is a bit hard to critique now, I'll wait for more.

I'm guessing this isn't a humor comic huh?

You are Correct, Mukora. This is NOT a comedy comic. Sorry to dissapoint, if done. ANYWAY, The final page of the short prolouge is up. I will be starting the first chapter soon.

Oh no, I'm not dissapointed, I'm actually surprised to see a non-comedy comic here.
on a side-note, I looked up Kingdom Hearts, so it's like a mixture of disney and some obscure RPG?

Yeah violance thats what makes a good comic serious. just if you want it to be that way avoid putting jokes in that are meaningless in or it throughs the comic off completely.
Woo nice comic I liked the last one and its bloody gore you get7.5 I like where this is going and nice speech bubbles!

A heartless with a thousand forms? Sounds interesting.
Can't wait to see the plot develope...

Originally Posted by Lurrrre!

Yeah violance thats what makes a good comic serious. just if you want it to be that way avoid putting jokes in that are meaningless in or it throughs the comic off completely.
Woo nice comic I liked the last one and its bloody gore you get7.5 I like where this is going and nice speech bubbles!

I see no gore. Those marks on the ground are thrashed wood.

looks cool Im keeping my eye on this.