PHSYCO COMIC OF THE PLOT!

Mortals Preapare For
The end of the Beging of somthing

The earth will shake, mountains will crumble, and trees will weep as well as eat people out of hunger and sadness


Welcome to the psyco comic about the plot of the game of GS and Mine. this comic is 100% custom so I hope you enjoy this as much I as I did makeing it.
Waring you may die of Laughter.


I only have Three rules in this thread.
1. You must post if I see you looked at it and didn't post I'll hunt you down and beat you like a fish!
2.This entire comic is big and took time so no one sentence posts please, expand on your opinnon and tell me parts you liked or didn't
3. Enjoy Bronze comic el #1
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I loved it. "I can't believe it's not butter" was the funniest moment for sure.

Here's a few tips:

-Make sure there's a border around the comic. As in, some of the panels cut right into the side of the image, and you want to make sure there's some black space there to cushion things.
-Your panel alignment is a little crazy, but I didn't read anything out of order, so I suppose it works.
-Change your font! Impact is good for some special effects, but switch to a good comic font for the bulk of the text.

That's all I have for now, but I mostly really liked it. There's was mostly action this time, and not much plot, so I can't wait for the next one.

Thank you for your imput fish I'll work on that next comic, OH and the plot will unraveil in the next one for sure so we get to the now time and not goump da La Fats DReam of the Past!

Well, I'm no critic, but I'll give my two cents in.
The boadrer and text seem a bit of a mess to me. Like Fish said, make it have more accurate boarders and the text a bt less...distracting.
Humor and delivery goods is neat-o.

+20 points Well, I disagree. I thought the text boxes were really really good. I loved the shell going back and creaming them all! That was waay funny. And I loved the little black mage leader guy. And mount goolock! I really like the hills and happy dream backgrounds! And the cure for cancer part was funny. "I'm Speechless."

-1 point- I thought the 8-bit bronze looked kinda bad (just look at panel 28) I think you should have left him but that's just a smidgion in a great comic!!!

The Black Mage is Blizzaga's character, right
I thought it was actiony and funny and downright silly
although the "get him" "I mean seize him" was a bit repetitive
Yay for mute Bronze

Thaks I'll make the next one better and get the plot rolling I hope!

You've already had my input (as well as the many laughs) in person. But 1-UP for epicness anyways!

Originally Posted by mukura

although the "get him" "I mean seize him" was a bit repetitive

I believe that was the point. It, like a rubber chicken, is obviously a running gag.

Lurrrre! Why? Why did you have to make this comic so awesome?
I love every part of this comic, just hilarious!
I've already seen that joke with the cure for cancer in your preview, but I laughed again.
I also liked the little numbers appearing with every slain enemy.
Your mix of action and humor always amazes me, can't wait to see more psycho stuff!

Well, in the 5th and 6th panel there are some "black holes" in the text boxes and sometimes, the outlines of the sprites look a (little!) bit odd but I didn't notice it before you enlarged them and I wouldn't call that a fatal error, you hardly notice it.

If I should start to give real notes (what would mean that I just randomly spill out a bunch of numbers), you would get a totally random 8,8/10.

Thank you and I'm glad you liked it, I should have a newone out in a while or I could just give a small all hallows eve preview of the plot same game but differn't game because its a game inside a game!

Halloween special! Soup worthy! Chicken dogs on rice praise the comic with all there woes.

well folks I have a comic in the contest so don't expect one of these two soon.
How ever on this thread I will post the lost episiode of links KaBlaHHH! issue#1

Time I breath some life back into this thread.
Okay one it's no longer in 8 bit, two this is probably has nothing to do
with the plot at all.
three also I've been spriteing like crazy and some of the enemys who aren't in the game yet are in the comic.
Enjoy:

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Woohoo, villain-goodness!
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Or is it hero-evilness?
Anyway, I love it. That penguin-thing is cute.
And the guy in the quicksand is especially awesome. ;3
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Wha, he is dead! D:
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Yay! ^___^

Yeah I'm glad you liked it WEEEEEE!
Sorry do too my lazy habbits I slow make comics but I'll have one up shortly!

"BUT DEAR SIR"!

^XP Ok, I added 'dear'.

I love it. It's not that kind of 'block/pixel museum' kind of sprite.

The only thing is that I've heard that catus water dehydrates you.

Umm...i'm sorry. But I'm going to have to fail this.

It simply failed to entertain me/make me laugh. Plus, being a grammar nazi, your blatant incorrect use of the English language annoyed me.

Lol
Pink lizardd
I like it =D
Continue :<
nao boy

I believe you have made me want to play "Bronze and Silver" even more now, regardless of whether this is in it or not...Bring on the pink lizards!!

Lol that last one was awesome.
You need to make moar.
NAO!
Oh and when is the next demo coming out?