[Spr] Metroid Heroes, The Inter-Galactic Saga

HERE IT COMES!!! My long awaited (by me) sprite comic has arrived!
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HERE IT COMES!!! My not-awaited-at-all sprite comic has arrived!

This is the first issue of what I hope will be a good sprite comic series. It begins in The Federation Galaxy two weeks after Samus was condemned as a terrorist for destroying planet SR-388 by crashing the BSL into it (A.K.A. the events of Metroid Fusion)...
Enjoy...



I hope everyone who read this enjoyed. I can't promise the next one will be up soon, (after all, my main priority on this site is my fanfic) but I'll do my best to have it up in less than a month starting tomorrow.

*GASP*

When I read that Samus was a Terrorist I laughed to myself. I have my own theory about the 'true' Galactic Federation. ;]
I'm really interested in this story <3 Please update it as often as possible X3

This comic is WAY too big. Over three megabytes for one huge PNG image. Cut down on the resolution and use better compression.

Also, put a white background behind the speech bubbles. It's hard to read the text sometimes.

Other than that and some other miscellaneous issues we can tackle later, it's okay. Interesting story.

Dr Fish is right, I can't even read it, even if I enlarge it

It was quite big, but pretty good. It really could have used a close-up. Anyway I thought it was good, like a 68/100. That's pretty good, the best comics run about 85- 92/100. Just add close-ups and find yourself a good comic font. Try Blambot Comic Fonts and Lettering, they're free and make a big difference.

Thanks I'll keep everyone's suggestions in mind. I'm sorry about it being so big, but look at it this way, My comic is still almost as epic as Lurrrre!'s Epic. It wasn't much of an epic he really shouldn't have called it that. I won't be posting another strip for a while though. I really have to focus on my Fanfic The Lost Chronicles/Saga of the Heroes (its name on Fanfiction.net) It's actually better there than it is here, so read it there and review it on this site.

Perhaps but I like were this is going? someone erashed my post again? oh I'd be like the fourth one so to make a long story sort do what GS said and I like your speech bubbles,7.2/10)