Ahruon's newest comic !!

Hello !
You might have thought that my comic carrier was over....
Well not yet !
I made yesterday... the problem is that I use Paint
So it might be not too good
Here it is.

Please critique my work (I know it looks kind of blurry)
I'll keep making it.

It's a bit jumpy, such as that the scene change is very rapid. Also, the text box positioning is lacking, I often found myself reading the wrong one first. (Mostly panels 6 & 8)

Otherwise, it looks pretty good so far. I'd like it if you changed the text box background color, but it has potential. Carry on. =]

It's not very funny...or maybe I just don't get it
but yeah what Will said it's hard to understand who's saying who first
the txt background isn't that bad

Thanks ^^
I'm working in the background color right now,and the text problem is going to be fix.
By the way, is there another way I can save it and make it look not so blurry ?
Because I save it in PGN