[Spr] The Legend of Ganon

Hello thar. This isn't the first time I've made a sprite comic series, I once made one long ago, along the lines of 'A Link with a Cast', it was... meh. It ended because I didn't upload more comics when they were due. That could also be the reason for why this comic might stop in the future... if it starts.

The Legend of Ganon (yes, you guessed right, another Zelda comic. Shocker.) will pretty much focus on Ganon, after breaking out of the Sacred Realm, but I'll leave you with an issue before he gets trapped, named: The Prologue That Should Not Have Been.

This was entered in the Sprite Comic Contest earlier this year. Needless to say, it didn't win. :/

Oh and don't worry, this will be the only comic that features Zero recoloured Link.

Archive: (It may not be that big)
Issue 1 - The Prologue That Should Not Have Been. A.K.A The New Order
Issue 2


I hope you enjoyed! Just to tell you, I may not be frequent with my comics, one could be made in a few days, or in 2 weeks. GCSE's are coming up next year, and working on comics would not be the best approach to getting good grades.

Next one!

MUCH improvement. Good script, and great use of effects. Keep it up for sure.

Tips
- Change fonts? You can experiment with that, but the current font seems somewhat...bland.
- Text was still a bit too crowded for comfort on the "After so many years..." panel, especially near the bottom.
- You might try to crack down on the amount of text a bit. I guess the point is that Ganon rants, but it still doesn't make it more readable. As the saying goes, "Brevity is the soul of wit", or better yet as Homer Simpson put it, "Brevity is...wit."

I'm glad you changed the sprites in the second one. They look a lot better.

Part of me wonders why Ganondorf's speech bubbles in those last panels is all "sparky". Save that for when there's something shocking instead of just a regular speech box.

I'm interested to see where this goes.

Wooo ow!! I liked it a lot! Ya done good quartz!

You made my sprites look cool, I'm glad you used my new Ganondorf and Link sprites. They really are good! And you had a great background and everything! And the shattery dimension thing was good too!

I gotta say that this was a good comic. I liked the mullet joke and the whole thing was nice to read. I'm also interested to see where this is going! If you continue to improve this fast, WOOO!