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Well I fixed the cow thing



No i'm not from America but I want to know what made you think that

Panel four has overlapping text...but the only text is three dots

Yeah, that's better. The text is still a little odd, but not a major problem to the comic. Just something to think about for future strips, if you want to use the advice. It's ultimately your decision, though.

One suggestion I have... It looks like you're making the bubbles first and then typing the text into them, causing awkward spacing all over the place. Make the text and put the bubble around it.

Originally Posted by UZ!

One suggestion I have... It looks like you're making the bubbles first and then typing the text into them, causing awkward spacing all over the place. Make the text and put the bubble around it.

Is that possible in Paint? I don't see how. But yes, you should still get an idea of how much space your text will take before you make the speech bubble/box/whatever. Trying to cram text or putting a little text in a big speech bubble is ugly.

And look who's posting in the Shanty again!

Well actually I am typing the text and then making the box.

Edit:New comic

Interesting plot...
But Link doesn't seem to be that motivated, eh?

Poop for everyone posting at the same time.

Dr. Fish: I was gonna say, you have to to make the text centered.

I had a whole tutorial about text boxes, but you seem to have it fixed, so... scrap it, haha.

The "I smell pie" probably could've been on one line.

Also, it probably would be better if you added all of the punctuation you need for the lines (periods and question marks and such). You do it sometimes, but not all of the time.

Overall, of course, the comic is good. I like the cow's eyes in the last panel.

Yayzers I finished the next comic

BOOM



No the harvest Moon characters will not appear again they were one time only...Because crossovers ARE APPARENTLY BAD

1. Crossovers aren't bad (see my comic - the main characters are all different).
2. I think you meant "fork" not "dead end".
3. Still need punctuation.
4. I don't understand what happened in the last three panels. I know he got the pie, but why's the bottle tipped over, and why is Link so far away from where the pie was when he nabs the pie?

The reason for that was I was a bit rushed So it came out bad Anyway FIXED


http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/2191/bamgp9.png

Yes, that is much better. Never feel the need to rush yourself in order to make something good.

New Comic

YAY


Oh and Why doesn't Anyone post What are my comics so bad they leave you guys speachless

They're funny. But the last one is a bit random. One of your links is broken, on the count of a </br> tag. I'm too bothered to type in the whole url in the address bar, and so will most people. But I thought overall, it was random. But kinda funny. The randomness was done well sometimes, but in others was kinda dumb. Like that last comic. Too random...

Alright I have a few things to say

Linkmaster: No crossovers are not bad, But if I made one It would be VERY cliche

William: It might be because of my young age, But I don't get what's random about the last comic...Was it the octorock, Because that's very Important to the plot
Or was it the fact that Mr. Cockers was In final Destination, because that will be revealed In the next comic
Or is it that Mr. cockers can talk

I think it's the fact that you went straight from Link stealing pie to a chicken in an Octorok's house. It would make more sense if you put a "Meanwhile, Mr. Cockers did (something something) and now..." and then go into the comic. I mean, we have no idea how he ended up there.

Also, don't go based on replies - go on views. People may want to post "Great job! Make more!" but they can't because they need more content than that. Otherwise, don't worry about it - just keep posting your comics. If nobody else will respond, you at least have one replier (that would be me - I try to read everyone's work). You're doing a very good job for a new-esque spriter.

Thanks for the advice Linkmaster so on that note I've been having a strange feeling all day...something you mortals wouldn't understand
it's the feeling of a... NEW COMIC



EDIT:Nother new one





If anyone could post a review for this comic as it is I would like that very much
Suggestions for the name of this comic are greatly appreciated
Can anyone tell me how to put a link INTO a word/Image like many of you do

These comics are funny, I can't wait to see more! Oh, and you should call this comic series "The Misadventures of LoZ's Green-clad Hero" or something like that.

The first one helped the plot - nicely tied in!

The second one was quite funny, mostly because I'm reminded of a Family Guy episode where Peter decides to marry a pie, but then eats it.

To create a picture link:
[ url=put the url to your comic here ][ img ]image url[ /img ][ /url ]

To create a word link:
[ url=put the url to your comic here ]WORDS[ /url ]

Actually it'll be awhile before the next comic because I can't get to the computer whith my sprites For awhile now

EDIT: Never mind the storm stopped




Random person: Why were the last three comics so short
Me: because I have a slight cold
Godzilla: Why'd it take so long
Me: because I couldn't get to the computer whith my sprites(It's gonna take awhile for the next one too...Sorry

I don't like them.
Honest truth.

I don't know what it is I just don't like them.