[Spr] Title Pending

The font's not too bad. You do, however, suddenly switch font between the first and second panels, which is a tad confusing. It would also help to make the text a little bigger, as well. Or you simply enlarge the entire image. People running at high resolutions (like myself) have to squint to read small comics.

Zero Swords

And Dr. Fish, that font thing was an accident

Vaatis is either retarded or blind lol.

That was good mukora I like the wizz robe beaten by the chicken the best.
no sword probably means Mike lost it somewheres in the past!

OI I like your font a lot! And your text boxes are very clean and well rounded. I thougholy enjoyed the close ups, too, they are a necessity and you put them in the right spots! "twas good.

Ta-Dah!

I'm never going to try to stack dead enemies on top of each other again T_T

Da-Da-DUNN!

Yay for short comics!

Ha HA I liked these last to alot mostly the beat up dark guard and wizzrobes Man I can't find that style of wizzrobe any place well not a sheet of him at least and the sword hideing until Vaati left was funny too.

I all ways thought the sword was bigger and heavier than it looked but in all zelda games you pull it out like its nothing. so mukora you get 9.5/10 for both yeah!

It's Actually a Good Moisturizer

Yay.

Chaaaarge!

Heh, Violence.

Pfft, I Like Coffee Better

Man, this place is Deeeaaa-eeeaaad, alright, I do tend to update more frequently now-a-days, but, you'd think with it being summer vacation and all people would have more time on your hands, 'cause I know, like, half of you don't have jobs. And, I just read through all of my comics, for the sixteenth time, and apparently, I used to write like a two year old, tell me, is my writing any better now
Wow, this post is long, for me

Your writing is better. I've told you this. In fact, the only reason why I may not post in here is that I've already told you all I have to say, namely that:

-The header looks amateurish. This was ignorable back when the rest of the comic was rather amateurish, but now I think you can up the ante. Lose the gradient, for example. Make the header smaller, but the title text bigger. Do something more interesting with the character sprites. This sort of thing steps more into the realm of graphic design than sprite comics, but I think it's the only thing holding your comics back from looking really professional, if you can even apply that term to sprite comics.

-Try to make the comic bigger overall. I'm thinking like a 125-150% increase in overall comic size. Hell, if you just resize them to 150% bigger after your finished with them, it would help in readability to those with higher resolutions like myself.

-DON'T LET TEXT TOUCH THE EDGES OF THE CALLOUT! It happens in your latest comic in the fourth panel. All you have to do to fix it is adjust the box a TAD more.

-Your comic is brilliant, one of the best I've seen on this site, and your dedication is par none. You've no doubt improved since your first episode here, and I am ALWAYS looking forward to seeing more from you.

How's this?

This sort of thing steps more into the realm of graphic design than sprite comics, but I think it's the only thing holding your comics back from looking really professional, if you can even apply that term to sprite comics.

See, I can't edit the sprites that well, so Mr. Cockers is the only one you'll likely see in a custom pose.

MUCH BETTER! Takes up less space, and the font matches the comic.

I like your close-ups. A lot. As well as aghanims green on black text. And the look on the birds' faces!

Man, this place is Deeeaaa-eeeaaad,

you could try the demo in the GSnL thread... and at least this place would be the living dead!

Originally Posted by Mukora

Actually it'll be awhile before the next comic because I can't get to the computer whith my sprites For awhile now

EDIT: Never mind the storm stopped




Random person: Why were the last three comics so short
Me: because I have a slight cold
Godzilla: Why'd it take so long
Me: because I couldn't get to the computer whith my sprites(It's gonna take awhile for the next one too...Sorry

i dont get can you explain it??

Ninja Link: I don't even particuarly like the joke in that one, but, Link brain exploded, due to crossover-ness.

I generally love thecharacater expressions and emotions, and I absolutely love the new header! You're taking a very good direction there.

I got the idea for Mr. Cockers expression from Paper Mario. *sighs* its lonely being the only comic here, what ever happened to Dustfinger? Link the Zora?

CAUTION THE FOURTH WAL HAS BEEN BREACHED. PLEASE PROCEED TO THE FIRST SECOND OR THIRD WALLS TO EXIT FICTION WORLD

Yeah, this is where I've been all week, and I will have a real comic later this week.