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Everlasting World
Yeah I'm back and better then ever of making good comics =D
----------------------------------------------------------------------- WARNING! some cursing are involved. The four Links defeated every evil who wants to destroy Hyrule or capture it. So who knows what to be expected in their adventures. The four links comes back with a blast! lolol :3 Issue 4- Toil and Trouble ![]() Issue 1- The Introduction Issue 2- The Old Man Was The One Telling The Introduction Issue 3- Double Double Issue 4- Toil and Trouble
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Re: Everlasting World
Good, graphically! It looks nice. I like the way that you did speech bubbles, and the background/sprite scaling was well done. good shrimp. Link yelling at an old man was a good start, at least, but I hope something more interesting than beating a geezer to within an inch of his life... actually, I could live with that. Go ahead.
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Re: Everlasting World
It's interesting, I'll give you that.
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Once again, I like that you have good font, speech bubbles and backgrounds. I liked the way you zoomed up on the old man blast fram #2, also. Good Shrimp! And it was a little funny. Short, but funny. Funnier than some newspaper comics, that's for sure.
It sorta looks like you're using paint shop pro. What program useth thou? Ooh and one thing that might help from now on, try and put the bubbles in order from left to right. Even if you have to re-arrange people's positions to do it. Like in panel one, all you would have to do was move blue's speech bubble up and to the left, and had a longer tail. THat's advice!@ |

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