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Re: Attack of the Eggmen
Yet it still serves a purpose, unlike the word "gourmet". The point was mainly to convey what happened. I don't think I could find a way to get all Eggmen attacking at once anyway.
And I have never heard you say that the other 999 times, so please don't act like I'm stupid.
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Re: Attack of the Eggmen
I'm not saying I've told you 1,000 times, I simply stated that I have said that phrase 1,000 times before. By saying this, I would hope you could infer that I meant many people make the mistake, and it should be corrected if you'd like your comic to be any better than the rest.
By no "bringing up to the fight" I meant that there was no purpose. The comic just started the fight without any reason why. If this is a comic in the middle of a series then it's acceptable, but since it is, to my understanding, the first comic.
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Re: Attack of the Eggmen
It's a good start, mikej, but...
That panels were too huge with mostly empty space and teeny sprites. Not a good mix. Also, word balloons, would do wonders! ^^
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