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Old 05-22-2008, 01:51 PM
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Attack of the Eggmen

Self explanatory. I'm not sure how good or bad this is at this point, I've only shown it to a few people.

You might want to enlarge all the images first, so that you don't have to deal with it later.






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Old 05-22-2008, 02:10 PM
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Re: Attack of the Eggmen

yeah....
thats pretty sweet
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Old 05-22-2008, 04:30 PM
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Re: Attack of the Eggmen

that comic sucked goombas...there was no up bringing to that fight...

and i've said this 1000 times, and i will say it again...censored panels have been done before. they are so lame now. cliche and stupid.
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Old 05-23-2008, 01:44 AM
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Re: Attack of the Eggmen

Yet it still serves a purpose, unlike the word "gourmet". The point was mainly to convey what happened. I don't think I could find a way to get all Eggmen attacking at once anyway.

And I have never heard you say that the other 999 times, so please don't act like I'm stupid.
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Old 05-23-2008, 04:38 PM
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Re: Attack of the Eggmen

I'm not saying I've told you 1,000 times, I simply stated that I have said that phrase 1,000 times before. By saying this, I would hope you could infer that I meant many people make the mistake, and it should be corrected if you'd like your comic to be any better than the rest.

By no "bringing up to the fight" I meant that there was no purpose. The comic just started the fight without any reason why. If this is a comic in the middle of a series then it's acceptable, but since it is, to my understanding, the first comic.
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Old 05-23-2008, 11:15 PM
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Re: Attack of the Eggmen

Well... .... it was a comic. Definetaly a comic.

And it had sprites, too... just, make the panels a little smaller and add some sound effects. Then you'll be ridin dirty.
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Old 06-06-2008, 04:13 PM
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Re: Attack of the Eggmen

It's a good start, mikej, but...

That panels were too huge with mostly empty space and teeny sprites. Not a good mix. Also, word balloons, would do wonders! ^^
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Old 06-07-2008, 09:39 PM
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Re: Attack of the Eggmen

Looks fine but could use some special effects like some missiles and blasts.
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