Elementas: Protectors of the Universe!

[Ketiou]

Ok so this is my first time on ZU so bare with me. ^.^
Just kidding.
Anyways this is my comic(That has nothing to do with Zelda)
Called...

Elementas:
Protectors of the Universe!
1 group of 4 friends discover a mysterious card game that just appeared from no where. Soon as they start playing they realise this is more then a game.
Afterwards they meet this shopkeeper who gives them four mystic and powerful cards called "Vortex cards"
Afterwards they realise that they are no longer in the world they once known, but an unknown land they are destined to protect.
Will they succeed?
Find out on Elementas: Protectors of the Universe!
Please read the first to make much more sense. (Even though the first 6 are kinda bad..)
Elementas Protectors of the Universe - DrunkDuck.com!
Here! Enjoy ^.^

[William]

err...it looks nice and fancy...but theres no plot and the sprite's arm is bigger than its head! WAZZUP WITH THAT? :3

[Ketiou]

Um Im not sure what your talking about. And yes it does have a plot and storyline its just building up more and it will all be explained later. Also if you read all of them then you would see that there is a big plot that is building. You'll see. ^.^
And thanks ^.^

[William]

._. for some reason, when i clicked it, it only showed the first four panels..but ehh

the thing seems kinda random...*BOOOOOM* omg! "hello i am a lady" wow, so why?

huhhuh

[Ketiou]

Really? Hmm thats strange. And yeah thats the....54 or 55th page so yeah it wouldnt make sense but actually if you want to know more about the storyline they this update tells all about it. ^.^ Go read it.
Oh and enjoy ^.^
Oh yeah right I know what your talking about XD yeah you have to seen the ones before it it was an epic battle and such so yeah ^.^

[Lurrrre!]

Not much was happening but thats how it all starts with Prology.
I liked it for the story is orginal and the speech box's just little less on the plot summery and more Kill blood Gore Face! I liked it it was well done 7.8!

[William]

very text heavy

[Ketiou]

Hey thanks. ^.^ Yeah im glad someone likes the plot base. Hah yeah i know just wanted to get a text run down so people could understand there was a plot to it and not just some action comic. Trust me there will be much more action! Just wait and see. Oh and look everyday cause some time I update everyday and you dont wanna miss an update. ^.^

[Ketiou]

New update! Alot of new updates actually since I posted this ^.^
Btw William. Is that you? William from Poonz Tavern? Rawr? >:3
Anyways enjoy! *BTW I have been using alot more photoshop *YAY* and moar blood. XP!!!*

Enjoy! ^.^

[GoldStud]

Woo Graphics Woo!
This is a good comic. I like the actiony swooshes. But- cheesy dialogue. I don't care about the spelling, that's not all that important, but the cheese is thick with curds in this dialogue. You said "I've only got 1 shot, so I'd better make this count" twice. Once would have been cheezy enough. The "Ha he's dead" (explosion cloud) "oh wait he's not there" reminded me of Dragon Ball Z. So did "Did you really think you could beat me?" (that line was okay)

Keep up the good graphics, and try to make your dialogue more beleivable.

I dubb thee - Medium
on the spicy scale of Goldstud.

With some work, you shalt become a Cajun or Chile!

[Ketiou]

Yeah woo graphics woo is right ^.^
Thanks.
And thank you. ^.^ I like the swooshes too.
The cheesy ness XD
Yeah actually the reason is..
"Because they are actually there senseis who are training them and they are fighting to see if they are worthy enough but they cant blow there cover so they have to pretend to be villians but they read a book about "How to be a generic villain" And now they are quoting that. Like the Did you really think you could beat me. Thats from the book XD
And yeah I will get the dialoge better.
Did you read all of the other missed updates?

[GoldStud]

No, I didn't. But I read them in spirit.

Actually loading times are bad wiff dialup.