MIX IT UP!

[Stupidmahn]

BAM! my new comic, this one i'm gonna try and keep for as long as i possibly can!
No, this is not a all sonic comic, yet there will be some furries. The first episode is more important than you think... bwahahahahahahahha

Episodes 1: CRASH!

[GoldStud]

Good Job, Stupid. Improvement is mondo beyondo!

Pros- Good speech bubbles; when you used them. They look really nice and are easy to read. Your background is really good! That wooded shack background is very professional looking, and I have to say, I want one! Also, your special effects were really good. I liked the explosion quite a bit, both times. The little one in the sky was really good, and I liked the BOOM as well!

Cons- what is wrong with that face in panel 4!? It could have been funny if he were just yelling, but it looked more like he was a schizophrenic psycho, the way his eyes were all wonky. Like he just got hit in the head, you know? And your text without bubbles looks bad. I suggest sticking with bubbles or finding some new way to write the other text, 'cause it lookes really unprofessional, especially when you put it right next to your really good speech bubbles and special effects.

8.2/10 it was really quite good, just fix those little htings and you'll be way good!

P.S. Is that ship from Phalanx, by any chance?

[Stupidmahn]

Errrr... truthfully, i don't know, lol

thanks tho : D
uum... teh face... its kinda an inside joke,lol, Smeezy might understand it

[GoldStud]

OH, I guess I missed the joke, then. I'm sure it was funny though. Anyway I'm pretty sure the ship's from Phalanx, that's a coolio game!

So, who are these Sonic-styled people anyway?

[Stupidmahn]

They're not main, don't worry
but furrys are the sonic styled people

[GoldStud]

Oh I see, interesting. So is the ship good or bad? I couldn't tell from the context.

[Stupidmahn]

I guess you'll just have to wait and find out : D

[GoldStud]

Yeah, okay, fine

Oh, and, are you accepting guest stars? Or is this to be a pure, un-influenced comic?

[Stupidmahn]

yes, guest stars welcome :3

[=Zack=]

Wait a sec..isn't purple over there the one who revived everybody in NeroeTH?

[GoldStud]

Originally Posted by Stupidman

yes, guest stars welcome :3

Coolio, I'll send you my sprites.

Oh and Smeeze, can you explain the face in Panel 4? Stupidman said you'd get that one. I missed it, apparently.

[Stupidmahn]

wwwweeeeeeelllllllllll
since it was late, i kind forgot to explain it
its a joke
with new words o:

[GoldStud]

Oh, I see now what you said. I don't know what Weeeelll means, but it sounds exciting. Anyway do some more.

[Stupidmahn]

Episode 2 is right here:

[William]

nice stupid very nice! I like the background in episode 2 very much like :3

Edit: i gots in the farore clan XD