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the sandbag chronicles.
![]() Well....my last attempt at spriting....here goes nothing....the sandbag chronicles. is a series of multiple series. There will be several different series that revolve around the sandbag. Read them. Enjoy them. ![]() ![]() Oh and credit to SR and all mighty Goldstud for this one.
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No offense, but please...please tell me you have better ideas than that for htis story.
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I loved it MTH the intro and the sand bag, though you didn't put "What" in one sentance that needed it bui what ever its good and Snake smashing though the panel hitting the other one was really funny! oh and good speech bubbles 7.8/10 nice job!
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I meant it to just say "The hell". It's the same as saying "What up?" instead of "What is up?" I got it from the sandbag sprite sheet.
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This story focuses on the "comedy" theme. Theres no actually plot. Unless you have an idea that a simple sandbag can save the world from a crazy Tron-like idiot that controls Master Hand that he orders Ganondorf and he commands the Ancient Minister.
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Ok, I'm just saying because I tried to start a comic thread and didn't plan it out and where it would go (stupid me) and it flopped.
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Hahaha! He broke through the panel!
I disagree with mini-link, I think a literal Smash Brothers Comic is a great idea. Really. It was done very well. The backgrounds were all really good and it was funny and original, especially original. I liked that you took the time to use speech bubbles. This was relaly good, I'll say 8.2 out of ten. |

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Top Hat, this comic was _FTW_! :XD
When you mentioned the Sandbag Chronicles a while back, I just had a feeling that this is what you were talking about. Great idea! ^_^
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I mean story as in each individual comic. I didn't mean the whole series had to be one story.
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Toon Link will be in the adventure series "the sandbag emissary" (The adventure story in Brawl is called "The Subspace emissary") Yea...I'm done with the first ep. of sandbag emissary...but it's on my laptop...and it's at my friends house...so it'll be out by tonight.
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How many times do I have to say colored text is unnecessary in speech bubbles? Especially a color that's hard to read against white? glare:
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But if you want black. I'll give you black in the next comic. But besides that, did you like it? And what else do I need to change? I'm looking for any advice to advance my comic.
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I have everything planned out. Just give it time. ^.-
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Awesome I loved it Pit being nasty the whole smash bros consept works, and the bomb some custom sprite work I see though you should use a better kirby and Zeldas font I can read it just make it alittle bigger next time. 8.2 Nice work!
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It's really good, I liked it! I especially liked Zelda and the fact that you used speech bubbles and did a decent job of it. But........
... SOUND EFFECTS! This comic really needs some sound effects. With as much action as you have... it's like watching TV on mute. Boring. Go to Blambot.com and download some good sound effect fonts. |

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