the sandbag chronicles.

[Mr. Tophat]

Well....my last attempt at spriting....here goes nothing....the sandbag chronicles. is a series of multiple series. There will be several different series that revolve around the sandbag. Read them. Enjoy them. the sandbag.

the sandbag. episode 1: sandbag on the count of 5....1....2...3....TOO LATE!

the sandbag emissary.

the sandbag emissary ep. 1: If I was a Mexican...

Oh and credit to SR and all mighty Goldstud for this one.

[Mini-Link]

No offense, but please...please tell me you have better ideas than that for htis story.

[Lurrrre!]

I loved it MTH the intro and the sand bag, though you didn't put "What" in one sentance that needed it bui what ever its good and Snake smashing though the panel hitting the other one was really funny! oh and good speech bubbles 7.8/10 nice job!
Oh and hey were did you get that back groud platform its cool!

[Mr. Tophat]

Originally Posted by Mini-Link

No offense, but please...please tell me you have better ideas than that for htis story.

Ummm...yes I actually do. If you read it said there would be MULTIPLE series in the chronicles. I am working on The Subspace Emissary which will go through the ENTIRE brawl adventure storyline. Ep. 1 of that is almost done. The comic you see above is simply the 'random' series.

I loved it MTH the intro and the sand bag, though you didn't put "What" in one sentance that needed it bui what ever its good and Snake smashing though the panel hitting the other one was really funny! oh and good speech bubbles 7.8/10 nice job!
Oh and hey were did you get that back groud platform its cool!

"The hell is that thing" Not everyone says "What the hell".

I meant it to just say "The hell". It's the same as saying "What up?" instead of "What is up?"

I got it from the sandbag sprite sheet.

[Ganon001]

Originally Posted by Mini-Link

No offense, but please...please tell me you have better ideas than that for htis story.

This story focuses on the "comedy" theme. Theres no actually plot. Unless you have an idea that a simple sandbag can save the world from a crazy Tron-like idiot that controls Master Hand that he orders Ganondorf and he commands the Ancient Minister.

[Lurrrre!]

My mistake!
So it's probible in the spriters resource, thanks!

[Mini-Link]

Originally Posted by Mr. Tophat

Ummm...yes I actually do. If you read it said there would be MULTIPLE series in the chronicles.

Ok, I'm just saying because I tried to start a comic thread and didn't plan it out and where it would go (stupid me) and it flopped.

[GoldStud]

Hahaha! He broke through the panel!

I disagree with mini-link, I think a literal Smash Brothers Comic is a great idea. Really. It was done very well. The backgrounds were all really good and it was funny and original, especially original. I liked that you took the time to use speech bubbles. This was relaly good, I'll say 8.2 out of ten.

[Lantean]

Top Hat, this comic was _FTW_! :XD

When you mentioned the Sandbag Chronicles a while back, I just had a feeling that this is what you were talking about.

Great idea! ^_^

[Stupidmahn]

its pretty good,
i love the part where the sandbag zooms in XD
the white gets a little annoying, but im over it :3
and YOU> HAVE. TO. HAVE> TOON LINK IN IT D:

[Mini-Link]

I mean story as in each individual comic. I didn't mean the whole series had to be one story.
Sorry, for the misunderstanding, I liked it and all with the creativity, that's unique, but something about didn't seem funny to me.

[Mr. Tophat]

its pretty good,
i love the part where the sandbag zooms in XD
the white gets a little annoying, but im over it :3
and YOU> HAVE. TO. HAVE> TOON LINK IN IT D:

The warmup area in Brawl is complete white...so the white fits.

Toon Link will be in the adventure series "the sandbag emissary" (The adventure story in Brawl is called "The Subspace emissary")

Yea...I'm done with the first ep. of sandbag emissary...but it's on my laptop...and it's at my friends house...so it'll be out by tonight.

[Mr. Tophat]

"Double posting is for nubs"....I have a nub on my foot....it might be a tumor. :O

Anyways...the sandbag emissary ep. 1 is up. Check it out in first post.

[Lantean]

Pink=Bad


How many times do I have to say colored text is unnecessary in speech bubbles? Especially a color that's hard to read against white? glare:

[Mr. Tophat]

Originally Posted by Blizzaga

Pink=Bad


How many times do I have to say colored text is unnecessary in speech bubbles? Especially a color that's hard to read against white? glare:

Hey...atleast I didn't use yellow. And the simple "use black" method seemed to not give enough flavor in the comic. It made it bland and made me throw up a little.

But if you want black. I'll give you black in the next comic.

But besides that, did you like it? And what else do I need to change?

I'm looking for any advice to advance my comic.

[Stupidmahn]

lol
i laughed at the sandbag being the ancient minister
:3
but that might cause some problems for you if
you beat SSE o:

[Mr. Tophat]

Originally Posted by Stupidmahn

lol
i laughed at the sandbag being the ancient minister
:3
but that might cause some problems for you if
you beat SSE o:

Just trust me...I already went through the game.

I have everything planned out. Just give it time. ^.-

[Lurrrre!]

Awesome I loved it Pit being nasty the whole smash bros consept works, and the bomb some custom sprite work I see though you should use a better kirby and Zeldas font I can read it just make it alittle bigger next time. 8.2 Nice work!

[GoldStud]

It's really good, I liked it! I especially liked Zelda and the fact that you used speech bubbles and did a decent job of it. But........

... SOUND EFFECTS!

This comic really needs some sound effects. With as much action as you have... it's like watching TV on mute. Boring.

Go to Blambot.com and download some good sound effect fonts.

[Ganon001]

That Ancent Minister sprite is kinda like a rip-off of Sand Bag. Either this is a random comic or is just a plain old facinating but lack of sprites comic.

[Mr. Tophat]

Originally Posted by Ganon001

That Ancent Minister sprite is kinda like a rip-off of Sand Bag. Either this is a random comic or is just a plain old facinating but lack of sprites comic.

Umm...dude...

It's supposed to be sandbag. It's the whole joke.

Gosh noone gets jokes anymore.

And also, play SubSpace Emissary before you talk about it being random. It follows the storyline, except my own version. So please do not belittle my work.

And with the sound effects, I shall get some.

[Ganon001]

Originally Posted by Mr. Tophat

Umm...dude...

It's supposed to be sandbag. It's the whole joke.

Gosh noone gets jokes anymore.

And also, play SubSpace Emissary before you talk about it being random. It follows the storyline, except my own version. So please do not belittle my work.

And with the sound effects, I shall get some.

Ya know, I got the joke but it seems like that sandbag needs some uber attacks, since at "Ganondorf Takes Over" scene, it shows that Ancient Minister is begining to burn and reveals R.O.B.

Also, if I have never played SSE, how do I know that to reach Tabuu you need to defeat all of the characters in some sub-space form and the previous bosses like Porky. Also, the three last unlockable characters in SSE are Sonic, Wolf and Jigglypuff. Then is revealed that Master Hand was being controlled by Tabuu.

[Lantean]

Well, see, I'd rather it be more random 'cause it reminds me too much of the parodies in the writing section. But hey, it's not my comic.

[=Zack=]

Originally Posted by Ganon001

Ya know, I got the joke but it seems like that sandbag needs some uber attacks, since at "Ganondorf Takes Over" scene, it shows that Ancient Minister is begining to burn and reveals R.O.B.

Also, if I have never played SSE, how do I know that to reach Tabuu you need to defeat all of the characters in some sub-space form and the previous bosses like Porky. Also, the three last unlockable characters in SSE are Sonic, Wolf and Jigglypuff. Then is revealed that Master Hand was being controlled by Tabuu.

Wow wow wow, stop with the flaming.
And next time, use spoiler tags.