Noob hunters - A maple comic

[jokergirl]

Im done with 4 issues as it is now..Please comment


The story is:

Steve, the founder of the noob hunters has gone out on a mission for the sole purpose of sending back noobs to Maple island whilst looking for more members that can join his clan of Noob hunters.

That's pretty much it.

Note:There aren't supposed to be any backrounds really because im not very good with backrounds...

Issues:
1
2
3
4

Please comment.

[Radkin_Blade]

LOL! Tthat was funny!
"Supah Saiyan! I'll show you my powers!"
*Slice! Winner!*
Good job! Keep 'em comin'! ^_^

[jokergirl]

Originally Posted by Radkin_Blade

LOL! Tthat was funny!
"Supah Saiyan! I'll show you my powers!"
*Slice! Winner!*
Good job! Keep 'em comin'! ^_^

Yah. I will.

[shieklord]

Haha, nice. Noob hunter? That sounds fun.

[Flying Dutchman]

Steve should hunt the creator of the comic.

It is his job to hunt noobs, after all.

[jokergirl]

Originally Posted by Flying Dutchman

Steve should hunt the creator of the comic.

It is his job to hunt noobs, after all.

Wut?...Im not a NooB....But i don't really care if people call me NooB. I can prove them wrong.
Also im not really sure you know a lot about me. Or was that supposed to be a joke, Because if it was I don't get the point of it.

[Kilmiz]

nice... keep working on it.

[Lantean]

Originally Posted by FD

Steve should hunt the creator of the comic.

It is his job to hunt noobs, after all.

I agree. This comic is the perfect example that something can look good, but stink at the same time.

No offense.

[GoldStud]

Yeah, it does look good, and I like the speech bubbles.

Just try and have some more entertainment value, humor, action or something.

[Lurrrre!]

It does look good but its like bland and no speech bubbles?
I think it needs a little more everything!

[jokergirl]

Thanks for the constructive criticism.. But this comic im actually aiming for a more "Serious" plot rather than "Comical". Just so ya know. And im not doing theese because i want comments on them. Im doing it because i enjoy them. So feel free to spam me with comments like: "F*** u!'dis comic sux!" and so on. There's no stopping me.Haha.....

[William]

adding just a dash of humor would be nice D:

n00b hunters sounds like it could be a really funny comic...

but i dunno...you kinda let me down

Edit : "Wut?...Im not a NooB....But i don't really care if people call me NooB. I can prove them wrong.
Also im not really sure you know a lot about me. Or was that supposed to be a joke, Because if it was I don't get the point of it."

he was dissing ur comic

[jokergirl]

Originally Posted by icehockeygoalie

adding just a dash of humor would be nice D:

n00b hunters sounds like it could be a really funny comic...

but i dunno...you kinda let me down

Edit : "Wut?...Im not a NooB....But i don't really care if people call me NooB. I can prove them wrong.
Also im not really sure you know a lot about me. Or was that supposed to be a joke, Because if it was I don't get the point of it."

he was dissing ur comic

I see that...Noobs arent funny all the time...Some NooBs arent even NooBs...

[Stupidmahn]

First of all, its noobs, not NooBs, thats just dum.
second of all, as has been said, you should be hunting yourself then.
You need backgrounds,
and (i may be mistaken) aren't those the maple bubbles?
Really, and your character doesnt look to high lvl herself yah know.

[Lantean]

Originally Posted by Stupidmahn

First of all, its noobs, not NooBs, thats just dum.

Don't be stupid, mahn, it's "N00b" or "n00b." If you're going to correct someone, do it right.

[jokergirl]

Originally Posted by Stupidmahn

First of all, its noobs, not NooBs, thats just dum.
second of all, as has been said, you should be hunting yourself then.
You need backgrounds,
and (i may be mistaken) aren't those the maple bubbles?
Really, and your character doesnt look to high lvl herself yah know.

1.That's not my character
2.Yes thoose are maple bubbles
3.I cant find any maple backrounds.

[Lantean]

Originally Posted by jokergirl

3.I cant find any maple backrounds.

When in doubt, improvise.

[jokergirl]

Originally Posted by Blizzaga

When in doubt, improvise.

I can't improvise because im a N00b

[Lantean]

Ah. Good point?

Then try not being a n00b.

[jokergirl]

Originally Posted by Blizzaga

Ah. Good point?

Then try not being a n00b.

Nah. Im satisfied with the comic as it is so i won't bother adding nothing or anything. Besides im doing this comic for myself and putting it here on this site is just to show you something i made. Call me N00b or whatever you want. I don't give a **** about it.

[shieklord]

/\But you can practice, look at some of the nice comics, the ones that are very well done.
Borrow some ideas from them. Such as how the talk bubbles look, what people use when something dramatic is happening.

There are sites that have free simple backgrounds that are just a nice shade of blue, or green, or any color that fits the comic. Don't make the background too bold, or it makes the people hard to see.

Practice, thats what helps the most good job.

[jokergirl]

Originally Posted by shieklord

/\But you can practice, look at some of the nice comics, the ones that are very well done.
Borrow some ideas from them. Such as how the talk bubbles look, what people use when something dramatic is happening.

There are sites that have free simple backgrounds that are just a nice shade of blue, or green, or any color that fits the comic. Don't make the background too bold, or it makes the people hard to see.

Practice, thats what helps the most good job.

But...You can read my speech bubbles so i dont see why there's a problem?You can read them perfectly unless there's a problem with your brain or something(No offense but all the comics i've read the bubbles are pretty much aligned like that)

[Stupidmahn]

well,
i guess he just didnt like the speech bubbles? o:
but yeah, just improviz (spelt wrong lol)
and if your doing this for yourself, why are you uploading it here?
that obviously means its not only for yourself.

[efo]

its pretty good i enjoyed reading it a good start and hopefully you will get better as you go along.

[William]

yeah, what stupid said =/

[shieklord]

Actually, you shouldn't act like everyone is out to make you look bad. I like your comics, why else would I be trying to give you advice?

And as for the talk bubbles, I didn't say anything bad about them. What I did say was that if you look at other comics you can get cool ideas about how to make them look in the future.

I hope I did not offend your delicate sensibilities.