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Old 03-05-2008, 10:53 AM
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Noob hunters - A maple comic

Im done with 4 issues as it is now..Please comment


The story is:

Steve, the founder of the noob hunters has gone out on a mission for the sole purpose of sending back noobs to Maple island whilst looking for more members that can join his clan of Noob hunters.

That's pretty much it.

Note:There aren't supposed to be any backrounds really because im not very good with backrounds...

Issues:
1
2
3
4

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Old 03-05-2008, 11:17 AM
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Re: Noob hunters - A maple comic

LOL! Tthat was funny!
"Supah Saiyan! I'll show you my powers!"
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Good job! Keep 'em comin'! ^_^
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Old 03-05-2008, 11:20 AM
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LOL! Tthat was funny!
"Supah Saiyan! I'll show you my powers!"
*Slice! Winner!*
Good job! Keep 'em comin'! ^_^
Yah. I will.
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Old 03-05-2008, 11:29 AM
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Re: Noob hunters - A maple comic

Haha, nice. Noob hunter? That sounds fun.
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Old 03-05-2008, 12:08 PM
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Re: Noob hunters - A maple comic

Steve should hunt the creator of the comic.

It is his job to hunt noobs, after all.
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Old 03-05-2008, 12:15 PM
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Re: Noob hunters - A maple comic

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Steve should hunt the creator of the comic.

It is his job to hunt noobs, after all.
Wut?...Im not a NooB....But i don't really care if people call me NooB. I can prove them wrong.
Also im not really sure you know a lot about me. Or was that supposed to be a joke, Because if it was I don't get the point of it.
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Old 03-05-2008, 01:07 PM
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Re: Noob hunters - A maple comic

nice... keep working on it.
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Old 03-05-2008, 02:03 PM
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Steve should hunt the creator of the comic.

It is his job to hunt noobs, after all.
I agree. This comic is the perfect example that something can look good, but stink at the same time.

No offense.
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Old 03-05-2008, 08:26 PM
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Re: Noob hunters - A maple comic

Yeah, it does look good, and I like the speech bubbles.

Just try and have some more entertainment value, humor, action or something.
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Old 03-05-2008, 11:59 PM
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Re: Noob hunters - A maple comic

It does look good but its like bland and no speech bubbles?
I think it needs a little more everything!
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Old 03-06-2008, 07:14 AM
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Re: Noob hunters - A maple comic

Thanks for the constructive criticism.. But this comic im actually aiming for a more "Serious" plot rather than "Comical". Just so ya know. And im not doing theese because i want comments on them. Im doing it because i enjoy them. So feel free to spam me with comments like: "F*** u!'dis comic sux!" and so on. There's no stopping me.Haha.....
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Old 03-06-2008, 04:55 PM
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Re: Noob hunters - A maple comic

adding just a dash of humor would be nice D:

n00b hunters sounds like it could be a really funny comic...

but i dunno...you kinda let me down

Edit : "Wut?...Im not a NooB....But i don't really care if people call me NooB. I can prove them wrong.
Also im not really sure you know a lot about me. Or was that supposed to be a joke, Because if it was I don't get the point of it."

he was dissing ur comic
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Old 03-07-2008, 10:13 AM
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adding just a dash of humor would be nice D:

n00b hunters sounds like it could be a really funny comic...

but i dunno...you kinda let me down

Edit : "Wut?...Im not a NooB....But i don't really care if people call me NooB. I can prove them wrong.
Also im not really sure you know a lot about me. Or was that supposed to be a joke, Because if it was I don't get the point of it."

he was dissing ur comic
I see that...Noobs arent funny all the time...Some NooBs arent even NooBs...
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Old 03-07-2008, 10:49 AM
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Re: Noob hunters - A maple comic

First of all, its noobs, not NooBs, thats just dum.
second of all, as has been said, you should be hunting yourself then.
You need backgrounds,
and (i may be mistaken) aren't those the maple bubbles?
Really, and your character doesnt look to high lvl herself yah know.
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Old 03-07-2008, 11:01 AM
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Re: Noob hunters - A maple comic

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First of all, its noobs, not NooBs, thats just dum.
Don't be stupid, mahn, it's "N00b" or "n00b." If you're going to correct someone, do it right.
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Old 03-07-2008, 12:35 PM
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First of all, its noobs, not NooBs, thats just dum.
second of all, as has been said, you should be hunting yourself then.
You need backgrounds,
and (i may be mistaken) aren't those the maple bubbles?
Really, and your character doesnt look to high lvl herself yah know.
1.That's not my character
2.Yes thoose are maple bubbles
3.I cant find any maple backrounds.
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Old 03-07-2008, 12:38 PM
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3.I cant find any maple backrounds.
When in doubt, improvise.
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Old 03-07-2008, 12:45 PM
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When in doubt, improvise.
I can't improvise because im a N00b
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Old 03-07-2008, 12:47 PM
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Ah. Good point?

Then try not being a n00b.
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Old 03-07-2008, 12:51 PM
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Ah. Good point?

Then try not being a n00b.
Nah. Im satisfied with the comic as it is so i won't bother adding nothing or anything. Besides im doing this comic for myself and putting it here on this site is just to show you something i made. Call me N00b or whatever you want. I don't give a **** about it.
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