02-28-2008, 11:30 PM
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Neko mimi mode
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The Dark Valley (Sprite comic)
My...attempt at a comic with a good plot. This is what i got...and I can't make the first comic strip until i am off restriction of the computer. Sorries. If you want to join in its fine with me.
~CharacterS- Shi - A dark cat that can change color to its mood Sirna - A girl with pink hair that is really cautious ~ Plot: The plot of this comic is how Sirna's mother runs away from home, and Shi attempts to help Sirna on her jorney to find her mother. They have to fight various enemies on the way to Citivus, the dark valley her mother ran to. ~ Comic strips: I miss her - sorry if this one was confusing, i got rushed. -More Coming when i am NOT grounded...^_^;;
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02-28-2008, 11:51 PM
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I wish my lawn were emo so it'd Ctrl+X itself.
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Hey there!
This comic is has a nice and original plot, unlike most sprite comics. Though, adding speech bubbles/boxes makes it better ^_^. And I really like the sprites! Very nice for a beginner. And try not to rush things. Take your time  .
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02-29-2008, 12:26 AM
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yes you should add speech bubbles but that wasn't great or good it wasn't confuseing it was plan drab boring and over all dumb but it was readable even though the font was boring!
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02-29-2008, 05:01 PM
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Don't be so mean about it!! It was my first try for a comic with a good plot, and i was RUSHED! I can FIX it still but you are NOT encouraging me at ALL!
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02-29-2008, 08:06 PM
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Hylian Knight
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Sorry I mean't no harm I should of refrazed it'
mostly it's not bad but speech bubbles would be nice and its just Boring like I'm trying not to be rude I'm being truthful if you work on a plot and some action it might spice it up if you know what I mean!
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02-29-2008, 08:28 PM
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Ok, i will as soon as possible (The next one is coming soon...in 2 weeks  )
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02-29-2008, 08:39 PM
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I wish my lawn were emo so it'd Ctrl+X itself.
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Oh, come now Lurrrre!, not every comic needs some super ninja popping out of nowhere to liven things up.
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02-29-2008, 08:53 PM
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Thank you 
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02-29-2008, 09:34 PM
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Your right it doesn't but it needs something?
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03-01-2008, 02:37 PM
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LISTEN! Can you STOP with the annoying criticism!? I am GOING to fix it!!!!!!!!!!!!! :moodswing
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03-01-2008, 06:49 PM
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=/ i agree with lurrre! all the way...the joke was...dumb. ._.
"i was RUSHED" then you should have waited a while, and did it over when you weren't rushed. THEN post it on ZU.  o_O "stop with the annoying criticism" well, tough. you're gonna get that here
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03-01-2008, 10:20 PM
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but who cares now, nobody. Might as well just cancel this comic.
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03-02-2008, 02:13 AM
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Confusion is my middle name.
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That was so lame.
Heh.
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