Lurrrre!'s Epic

BEHOLD AND TREMBLE, MORTALS
TIS'
EPIC!
This is the part where you begin to cry out of jealousy. My comic has the power to move mountains, eat screaming children, and make even the most gluttonous introvert see the truth in himself! Beware, and read with caution, for your very foundations will have hot coffee spilled all over their rotting walls! Then they'll crumble.

EPIC (03 prology) Lurrrre!'s Curse!


Comic Morgue:
EPIC (0) The Lurrrre!, the Zvil and the Stud
Epic (02)The Mighty MOPS!
Epic(03)Lurrrre!'S Curse!
Cast:Lurrrre!= Lizardman, Hylian Zvil= Kefka,Power shot= Green Power ranger, GoldStud= Link, Blizzaga= Kalimar,Grass= Swetzer,as for the rest I don't know!

Comments and critisizmz will be met with a firm hand and cooling logic. Or maybe just an AK47. But make my day, post! Anyone can join this comic. If you can stand the heat, come in the kitchen! Pm me with sprites of yourself. I'll be sure to make you look ridiculous. . ....ly good!

HAHA!

The light of truth shines through the bloody gore of your comic! This analogy between different nintendo characters and the Shantytown really ring true... and funny! I liked the story section at the end, and the use of the golden brown scenes of violence. Your font at the end was easy to read as well as cool and I liked the 'this guy' arrow. Also I liked the title screen and am interested to see where I come into this comic. The speech bubbles were okay, the transparency thing is nice but it'd look better to be bubbly fluffy cloude of marshmally drop shadow fun! Like the one at the end, or the one where Foggel says 'um....' you know what I mean. Anyway it was funny and good and heartwarming (except the warm part) and I would likea to see moar.

8.7/10 By royal decree.

A POst Pie be praised, thanks it should work out great and theres more people than just you in it GoldStud so like I said if you want to join P.M me!

Haha, Lurrrre, this is great Awesome intro, can't wait to see how it continues.

I'll be PMing you shortly!

Originally Posted by Lurrrre!

This is the part where you begin to cry out of jealousy. My comic has the power to move mountains, eat screaming children, and make even the most gluttonous introvert see the truth in himself! Beware, and read with caution, for your very foundations will have hot coffee spilled all over their rotting walls! Then they'll crumble.

Holy crap, that's the best grammar I've ever seen you use! XD

In all seriousness, I thought the comic was somewhat hard to follow, but it's probably because I don't know exactly what the comic is referring to in the last six panels.

Also, the text could use some improvement. Everything else was pretty good though, and the killing the narrator joke was humorous. I can't wait to see where the next episodes take this comic.

Apparently I'm supposed to be in this at some point. I can't wait to see what I do. Let's all pray it lives up to my ego, otherwise Lurrre!'s in for some ****.

I wouldn't put living up to any ego past Lurrrre! This comic really reminds me of a political cartoon, since most of the humor is metaphorically making fun of people e.g. Hylian Z as Kefka.

Yeah i remember the days when we hated Hylian Zvil. And most of us still do.
I really like how you kinda brought some of the Hangout History into the comic Lurrrre! Nice job!
Although some of the font is a little hard to read, like the one in the first panel. (not the one that says "Epic!")
And it was hard to see the arrow.

BUT other than that, it was good. Can't wait to see where I am in there.

The text was a bit difficult to read in some areas (and I'd especially like to point out the lower text in the second panel), but I love what you have going here! I see plenty of references (with a hint of Monty Python and the Holy Grail ), and found the one to the Ontario saga especially funny.

Originally Posted by Blizzaga

and found the one to the Ontario saga especially funny.

Wow, I'm suprised you got that one. Impressed, actually.

Anyway Lurrrre! Since you jumped on the 'WHINETEXTHARDTOREADWHINE' bandwagon in my thread I must jump on it in yours! So, I say unto thee- The text was hard to read! GNAAA!

That was great !
Good look with you\'re next one.(if you make on)
*gives balloon*

Hey next episiode is up and I see every one got the Joke of Hylian Zvil
but enjoy and I hope I did good Power Shot!

Awesome, Lurrrre, although I gotta say, Hylian Zvil's font is incredibly hard to read. For example, Power Shot's is awesome and easy to read but Hylian's font, while totally cool looking, is a bit tough.

Otherwise, very epic! :O I liked the four panels with the "Beeew... Beeew... BEEW... SHOOOOF" :p Nice.

I suggest you put better text. I know it combines with the character but just leave it and make it look better or change it.

I don't understand... I can almost read 25% of the words, and from what I can put together it seems to be the same as every other web comic. this is not cool. this is not cool at all.

Originally Posted by Gannon001

I suggest you put better text. I know it combines with the character but just leave it and make it look better or change it.

Please specify which text you ninny if I don't know which ones hard to read then I can't fix it now can you goump!

Originally Posted by Kilmiz

I don't understand... I can almost read 25% of the words, and from what I can put together it seems to be the same as every other web comic. this is not cool. this is not cool at all.

I sugggest you go back to the third grade and learn how to read!

Originally Posted by Grass

Awesome, Lurrrre, although I gotta say, Hylian Zvil's font is incredibly hard to read. For example, Power Shot's is awesome and easy to read but Hylian's font, while totally cool looking, is a bit tough.

Otherwise, very epic! :O I liked the four panels with the "Beeew... Beeew... BEEW... SHOOOOF" :p Nice.

finally someone whos not retarded and can tell me what the problem is instead of" UMM..
I'm medokre I can't Read, Write, or spell and Inteligence hurts my brain".

Thanks Grass yeah HZ's font is quit hard to read so I'll fix it!

The text you need to fix is the one the guy that reminds me of Kefka. The guy that the text its in blue, purple, red, green and black. Hes the one that began to tell of the Hylian Legend.

All I can suggest is too use better taste in font. Too hard for me to read, and I didn't want to strain my eyes, so I didn't read it. I bet it was good though.

HAHAHAHA!!!! Augh... Lurrre! that was your best yet! Power shot as a power ranger? The bewww BEWW BEEWWW of Kefka was really cool loooking and the banning was awesome! I like the close ups a lot! And the jelly who goes meep! And awesome kefka even thou hes bad he's still really cool!

Heck the sprites almost matched each other.

Seriously the text other than panel 13, was really great. Like the 'BANished' the 'eek!' and the 'mop' were really good, I like the outline and the gradient colors in all the words really great this comic gets a

9.3/10 serious good job.

I'm sorry to say it, but your typography was extremely poor with this comic. It was way too hard to read those fonts. They are not meant to be used as speech balloon dialog. It was way too distracting, and I couldn't really get anything out of this issue because of it and couldn't really understand what was going on.