The Legend of Fantasy

[TriforceOfDeath]

Well, I was going to make a Smash Brothers themed Comic and made about 5 issues and was going to start on December 3rd but, needless to say... it didn't happen.
So here is a totally new version, The Legend of Fantasy, Enjoy.
So here is the roster, Not the final roster though... Just a few who appear near the start... so don't fret if X isn't there... they May still turn up, as this isn't anything compared to my plans... Its going to be a deep crossover, Like the SSE, only Longer and containing more humour... Hopefully. Be warned, not all Smashers may show up... but non smashers will... so fans of certain characters who didn't make brawl, they may be here.


Episode one - the text is iffy, Its going to be a one off, Don't worry.

Read down left side then down right side.


Feel free to Suggest or request a character, even some fictional(fictional) characters could appear at some point.

Thank you to: GoldStud, Qwerty1080, Mario5555218, Shadow the Echidna, Victor TH, Drshnaps, Albino Kong, thats all... I think.

[William]

the text is too hard to read bro D:

[TriforceOfDeath]

Originally Posted by icehockeygoalie

the text is too hard to read bro D:

Dubbed with a new text, i had to really rush the original, hence the white through the words

[Kilmiz]

I zoomed it to read it... what's the point?

[Lurrrre!]

I'm sorry this is dumb theres no point which is the biggest problem and no speech bubbles and whats the plot?
those sprites are hidouse, just work on the plot and bubbles of speech and it should turn out okay1.9/10

[Flying Dutchman]

People read comics left to right.

1 2
3 4
5 6

Your order is:

1 4
2 5
3 6

Which is confusing.

Also, where are the Wolfen's? They're getting attacked by Star Wolf but from off the panel? That's sort of lame. That and it's sort of really frantic. Try and 'mark' the Arwings (like changing the blue to a different color (Fox being yellow, Peppy being red, Slippy being green and Falco being blue according to Star Fox 64)) so that we know who is who.

[Lady Fay]

cool!
good look with you're comic^,^

[GoldStud]

Hah! I've got to give your credit for realism- your StarFox dialogue was a cheesey as the real game. It matched perfectly. HAH!

Well, the fighting really didn't make sense. You couldn't tell if they were moving or who was where (even though you said Slippy to ma left). I recommend close-ups and speech bubbles instead of the little radio deal.

But, your roster! At the top! Way awesome! The Link background and the Bowser background are really great, where'd you get those? And, kudos for using the Kirby Superstar kirby. That one's the cooliest!

Anyway follow what the others said as well, about the reading left to right problem. But I like your roster of great coolness!

[TriforceOfDeath]

Originally Posted by Kilmiz

I zoomed it to read it... what's the point?

It's an intro, still getting the whole prologue out the way... It'l be chapters... CH1. is the prologue, each CH will have x amount of sheets

Originally Posted by Lurrrre!

I'm sorry this is dumb theres no point which is the biggest problem and no speech bubbles and whats the plot?
those sprites are hidouse, just work on the plot and bubbles of speech and it should turn out okay1.9/10

Calm down, I was trying to replicate the starfox dialogue... for all else look above.

Originally Posted by Flying Dutchman

People read comics left to right.

1 2
3 4
5 6

Your order is:

1 4
2 5
3 6

Which is confusing.

Also, where are the Wolfen's? They're getting attacked by Star Wolf but from off the panel? That's sort of lame. That and it's sort of really frantic. Try and 'mark' the Arwings (like changing the blue to a different color (Fox being yellow, Peppy being red, Slippy being green and Falco being blue according to Star Fox 64)) so that we know who is who.

Understand... its the 1 2... way from now on

Originally Posted by GoldStud

Hah! I've got to give your credit for realism- your StarFox dialogue was a cheesey as the real game. It matched perfectly. HAH!

Well, the fighting really didn't make sense. You couldn't tell if they were moving or who was where (even though you said Slippy to ma left). I recommend close-ups and speech bubbles instead of the little radio deal.

But, your roster! At the top! Way awesome! The Link background and the Bowser background are really great, where'd you get those? And, kudos for using the Kirby Superstar kirby. That one's the cooliest!

Anyway follow what the others said as well, about the reading left to right problem. But I like your roster of great coolness!

Thanks... I got the background from BGHQ... the radio will only be Airwing chat...
STILL ON THE PROLOGUE

[GoldStud]

It's pretty! I like the graphics and the Mario Jump. Nice speech bubbles as well. Still not sure why Toad is delivering a message from Princess to Mario about... Hyrule. This could be interesting or not, I'm not sure where its going but it is cool!

[TriforceOfDeath]

Stupid intro's still... right thats it, i'm just starting the actual story next comic... Should Link talk? It's hard without him talking but its traditional you know?

[=Zack=]

I thought Kirby didn't traditionaly talk, either.

[TriforceOfDeath]

Originally Posted by Smeezette

I thought Kirby didn't traditionaly talk, either.

You are correct... They are gonna be silent... but violent... at least for now anyway.

[Nittles]

Nice! The animated panel moves a little too fast though.