Zelda and The Four Links

***under construction***

No need to double post.

Anyway, this idea has been done to death. Seriously. Not to mention that the text is annoying to read, so get yourself an easier font. Then work on your spelling. Then make a clearer layout. Arrows make it look dreadful. Just do it like this:

panel panel
one - two

panel panel
three four


That way, it's not confusing and much easier to read. Of course, you can make three or four panels on each row as well.

Oh, and you know, if you're trying to have a funny comic... Try to actually be funny?

I really didn't get the joke.

I like your close-ups, and speech bubbles! Green font= bad. Try something darker on that white background. Anyway, it's not as bad as FD said, but use smaller panels, keep the close-ups, and changea yo font!

Not too bad though font is horrible, change font please.
Aside from that your close ups are good and speech bubbles yum. its not as horrible as FD makes it out to be just smaller panels would make it look nicer.
but whats the joke I don't get it?