Old 01-18-2008, 06:47 PM   #1
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The Final Sunset

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The dark figures are plotting on reveving a dark being that once threated the world to "Eternal Servitud" to darkness. The being was named Darshokanos. He turned all of the prosperers of light into dark servers of the dark. One day, in a dawn, four heroes came from a distant land to visit this land. They encountered themselves with many challenges and puzzles. They with all the cpurage, power and wisdom they had, they managed to control the power of the "Rising ZinuX". It was an ancient man that destroyed an evil omen of monsters. Hes soul and spirit stayed in the undead while hes body and mind left him. They used the power to stop Darshokanos and seal him in the Real of Sunsets, where all evil is sealed by the "items". These items were the "Solarik Artefacts". These "artefacts", opens the seal and leads the evil to rule over the world of light. Centuries have passed. A new generation of heroes have been born, one that are decendants of the ZinuX Saviors. They must prevent the evil forces from reviving the evil Darshokanos.

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Old 01-19-2008, 11:34 PM   #2
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Woo... lot's of 'proper nouns' !

I have to say that the last frame was very good. The box and everything really worked. And I like your speech bubbles, and I'd use the font/size from the last frame for the whole comic, it looked good.
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Old 01-20-2008, 09:08 AM   #3
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Woo... lot's of 'proper nouns' !

I have to say that the last frame was very good. The box and everything really worked. And I like your speech bubbles, and I'd use the font/size from the last frame for the whole comic, it looked good.
Thank you! Im looking forward to update this comic but I haven't got any inspiration... maybe in the evening I will!
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Old 02-09-2008, 01:46 AM   #4
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I agree with GoldStud. That last frame is terrific.
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Old 02-23-2008, 09:35 PM   #5
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not bad at all though could have more frame s but Holy cow the last one looked really good and the plot is good though we don't know whats going on yet!
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Old 02-24-2008, 07:36 PM   #6
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Hey, its been a while. Gonna get an episode 1 soon?
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Old 02-25-2008, 04:15 AM   #7
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great work!
keep it up
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