Old 11-01-2007, 01:24 PM   #1
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College Life

For a school project I'm making a sprite comic, so I'd thought I'd share it here. This one is titled "Spoke Too Soon".



How do you like it? Is anything wrong? I'm going to do 2-3 more for sure, but after that this will be over. The other comics will be about Social Life, Responsibilities, and How to Survive It (College).
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Old 11-07-2007, 07:59 PM   #2
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Okay, lets gett cracking.
First, click on the tutorials section here.
After reading that, your sprites are very static and pillow shaded. The proportions are off, and the character's bodys face forward, but the head is off to the side.
The background is esentially TWO-TONED. Change that, by making it more unique.
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Old 11-08-2007, 03:31 PM   #3
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Thanks for the advice, I'll keep it in mind if I do another comic. But they were due today, so I didn't have time to implement your suggestions. As it is it should be okay for the class, it's just part of a presentation.

Here are the last of them. This mini-series addressing college life is now over.

Clubs & Organizations


Responsibilities


Surviving
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