Installation 07

[Stupidmahn]

Well, since my archive kinda fell apart... badly...
I decided to make a new comic!
AND ITS HALO RELATED! WHOO! HALO!
It's about a spartan who was sent on a special mission, on a ship that was fleeing from Reach before it got glassed. This ship accidentally makes it to another Halo, and that's where the story begins...

Level 1

Episode 1: 686 Reconstructive Fire

[Agent Mothman]

Get your links straight and we'll talk.

AM~

[Stupidmahn]

Hmm? It worx for me. =s
well, here it is again
http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/9725/episode1hn1.png

[=Zack=]

Meh, it's O.K., though I'm still waiting for the plot line.

WARNING! SOMEWHAT OF HALO 3 SPOILERS! DO NOT VIEW IF YOU HAVEN'T FINISHED THE GAME!

Spoiler (Highlight to read):

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Y'know, like, was this before the original Halo? Or is this in the future when Master Cheif is reawakened (FWI there is a secret ending showing Master Cheif and Cortana surviving, so Cheif goes into
"hibernation", which is basicly sleeping in one of those pods from Halo 1, level 1. His last words were "Wake me When You Need Me".)?

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[Stupidmahn]

Um, this happens during First strike (book) and halo 2 and 3. =3
And it does have a story. On the second issy wich i need to upload T_T

[Agent Mothman]

Not bad, confusing, but not bad. I'm not a Halo fanboy, but this looks interesting.

Now for crit:
-The purple guy and the floating guy blend into the background, either use brighter backgrounds or put a pixel around him.
-First panel is a little blurry, I don't know what you did, but don't do it anymore.
-Too much blank space, if you're going to use this format, put a credit box or a logo in any blank space you have.
-What's with the letter-box bars around the panels? Are you going for a widescreen effect?

Not too much major; at least your sprites look good, your bubbles are solid (even though they're a bit big for the text), and your plot is decent.

AM~