A Link in Time

[Urban Ninja]

lol well myself and Stoopidmahn have decided to make a sprite comic! as the title said its called A Link in Time. the first comic is on page 2 but ill have most recent comics here.

first one here!

[Rantick]

Post the thread up AFTER you have made the first comic please. It wastes peoples time. And if you dont at least give us some info on what its about and the characters and stuff.

[Stupidmahn]

Yes, it would be smart to at least post a quick intro comic or something
Talk about the plot or something, or else this thread will get locked quickly

[Urban Ninja]

well i still need your sprite 'for i can even make an intro telling about the characters and stuff

[Rantick]

You dont need a sprite to tell us the bio of the comic.

[Stupidmahn]

Ok, you wanted it, you got it. I spent many hours editing this sheet, so you better not make fun of it. I added a bunch of stuff, and his name is Neroe. Ok? So far this has only been seen on Smackjeeves, but now, I'm ready to reveal him to ZU! He's a ninja (naruto type)

http://img518.imageshack.us/img518/3...llsheetwz6.png

[Urban Ninja]

Okie dokie Neroe, i saw him on SJ..

[Agent Mothman]

Originally Posted by Stoopidmahn

Ok, you wanted it, you got it. I spent many hours editing this sheet, so you better not make fun of it. I added a bunch of stuff, and his name is Neroe. Ok? So far this has only been seen on Smackjeeves, but now, I'm ready to reveal him to ZU! He's a ninja (naruto type)

http://img518.imageshack.us/img518/3...llsheetwz6.png

Well that doesn't seem godmoddish at all.

I'll be watching this.

AM~

[Stupidmahn]

Originally Posted by Agent Mothman

Well that doesn't seem godmoddish at all.

I'll be watching this.

AM~

He isn't. T,T

Heres the basic rules of Neroe, Me_Link,

He can only go super/Darkspine once every 10 comics, and for a maximum of 2 comics.

The dark ninja isn't even him, it's his enemy, so ignore that.

Formal sprites are only for weddings/funerals and such.

JUTSU RULES:
Summoning Jutsus take up 50% of chalkra, and others take up 30%.
He gains 10% Chalkra each episode. Thus making it so he can't just use ultimate moves over and over. Teleporting (like punch teleporting) takes up 5% chalkra. He can only telport-hit 3 times in a row before he has to take a quick 20 second break.

Theres the rules of Neroe, thus rendering him not goddly.

[Rantick]

woah, those sprites are pretty good... but some of the heads havnt been edited yet.

[Stupidmahn]

Originally Posted by Rantick

woah, those sprites are pretty good... but some of the heads havnt been edited yet.

Yeah, it's because I got lazy about half way through, and though that the quills wouldn't stay up if he was turning around or punching really fast, so i kept them down.

And thanx for the complement about my sprites! I really like Darkspine Neroe.

[Rantick]

But, you seem to have a different outline to the shadow sprites. It makes it a bit odd...

[Stupidmahn]

Yeah, I know, but after 3 hours of editing, i just got that bored...

[Urban Ninja]

ok so who should do the first comic?

[Stupidmahn]

u shuld, i'm going away this weekend. plus, i already got 80 other comics, so you go.

[Urban Ninja]

hmm ok ill work on the oppening tonight and start making it tommorrow morning.(This is only my first sprite comic here and the others i have made were horrible because i was using paint so now i got a better program. so i hope i dont stink >.<)

[Stupidmahn]

Wait, but i use paint! Just lostsa practice is needed!

[Agent Mothman]

Originally Posted by me_link

hmm ok ill work on the oppening tonight and start making it tommorrow morning.(This is only my first sprite comic here and the others i have made were horrible because i was using paint so now i got a better program. so i hope i dont stink >.<)

PHOTOSHOP DOES NOT MAKE YOUR COMIC BETTER! IF YOU CAN'T HANDLE PAINT THEN YOUR COMIC WILL ULTIMATELY SUCK IN PHOTOSHOP/PHOTOFILTRE/PAINTSHOP. MOST SPRITERS RARELY USE PHOTOSHOP OUTSIDE OF SPEECH BUBBLES AND EFFECTS.



Srsly, I don't use it for anything but speech bubbles and effects. I do all the basic spritework in Paint. Including making the sprites.

AM~

[Stupidmahn]

Upload it on imageshack... You so stole my backgrounds and characters from the ninja's way. >

[Urban Ninja]

Heck ya i did! any way i think this will work!

[Rantick]

well, its good I guess. But dont make a background for the pannels, it makes the comic look complex, and like your trying to distract us from the comic. As AM said, use Paint for comics. I use paint mainly, using PS only for slight effects and KAPOWS and text. Only seriously good comic-makers use PS for comics, like the guy who makes 8-bit theatre, who's name I cant remember. Also, give a link to the comic instead of posting it as an image, it makes it hell for dial-up users. Heck, its making it quite bad for me, And I have a realy good connection.

[Urban Ninja]

ok...i put a mini "click to be big" image on first page...and stoopid your turn!

[Agent Mothman]

Originally Posted by Rantick

well, its good I guess. But dont make a background for the pannels, it makes the comic look complex, and like your trying to distract us from the comic. As AM said, use Paint for comics. I use paint mainly, using PS only for slight effects and KAPOWS and text. Only seriously good comic-makers use PS for comics, like the guy who makes 8-bit theatre, who's name I cant remember. Also, give a link to the comic instead of posting it as an image, it makes it hell for dial-up users. Heck, its making it quite bad for me, And I have a realy good connection.

1: Brian Clevinger is his name.
2: I think even David Anez (BnG) used Paint outside of effects.

As for the comic, it looks nice, but it's waaaay too big, and the dialogue is choppy. Plus you have the forbidden 'White Space' at the bottom (the place where authors make really long credits and try to fit in one or two final jokes).

Fix a few more errors (I don't have time to tell you right now, but I'm sure someone will) and you should be fine. Nice first attempt.

AM~

[Urban Ninja]

i thought i was supposed to have that place to give cred to the sprite makers?

[Stupidmahn]

Meh? Oh yeah. I went camping. you can make the next comic though, i'll make the one after that... I'm tired...