Stoopid and the war against chickens

[Stupidmahn]

Linkey

Ok, this is my new comic. It can be found above^^

The story is this: Chickens have taken over the world. Stoopid is just an average kid who lives in a city, and isn't very smart... So one day, he's walking home from school, and a chicken stops him. That's where the story begins..

BTW, theres a war against chickens going on right now.

[Hyrule]

I thought cows were taking over the world? I guess not... Well, I'm waiting for the next one. Looks good so far.

[Agent Mothman]

Right now all I have to say is this:

-Ash recolor = bad
-Chickens?
-Speech bubbles need a pixel around them, less empty space, and text not exiting the perimiters.
-Spelling/grammar is horrible. You don't need to use spell check, but at least proofread your comic. And don't type so fast you don't see your mistakes.

Improve on this and I'll review it in seven to twelve comics.

AM~

[Stupidmahn]

YOu don't like my ash recolor... =( Me sad now... That's my character sprite, and I'm too lazy to change it... =(

Yes, Chickens. It's the war against chickens... It's funny... HAHHAHHA!!!



Meh, too lazy to do a pixel.. but I will... I guess

Yeah, I'll type slower.... lol

[Agent Mothman]

Originally Posted by Stoopidmahn

YOu don't like my ash recolor... =( Me sad now... That's my character sprite, and I'm too lazy to change it... =(

Seriously, snoop around the Middle Ground for a while (mgcomics.com) and look at some of the characters. They'll show you just what you can do with Sonic sprites. And, quite frankly, put any recolor to shame.

[Flying Dutchman]

Originally Posted by Agent Mothman

And, quite frankly, put any recolor to shame.

Not really hard.

The chickens are... Weird.. But this is in a Sonic world where a BLUE HEDGEHOG is the fastest thing alive, there are flying foxes with two tails and all the Echidna's are dead, except for one, who protects a giant emerald almost twice his size. I'd say you don't have to take the chicken thing so seriously.

[lavvy]

well, i think its good, if a little random

Not really hard.

yes it is

[Agent Mothman]

Originally Posted by Flying Dutchman

Not really hard.

The chickens are... Weird.. But this is in a Sonic world where a BLUE HEDGEHOG is the fastest thing alive, there are flying foxes with two tails and all the Echidna's are dead, except for one, who protects a giant emerald almost twice his size. I'd say you don't have to take the chicken thing so seriously.

True on both accounts. But those people have insanely good sprites.

Originally Posted by lavmiester

yes it is

Not really.

AM~

[Mr. Tophat]

Chickens....well... What you should do is make this comic as PROFESSIONAL as possible. That will give it an essence of cleverness. Look up some ideas for future crap and go into detail with future shizmittens. That will give it an essence of thought. And what you should do is every other comic it switchs to the other side. One comic is with Stoopid, the next is with the chickens. Get my drift?

[Stupidmahn]

OH, don't worry, it's gonna be like that. There's team stoopid (which will be a bunch or pretty much simple edits) and Team chicken (mostly just recolored chickens). But I'm putting this comic on hold until I get back from my break, and have so actually good sprites./

[Agent Mothman]

Stoopid, I just realized that you have a bunch of comics, which means a bunch of topics. You should ask a mod to combine them all and name the thread 'Stoopid Comix' or something.

AM~

[Stupidmahn]

Don't worry. I have a huge thing planned for when I get my 1000th post... hehehehe. You'll all see... And you'll all miss me...

[Mr. Tophat]

Originally Posted by Stoopidmahn

Don't worry. I have a huge thing planned for when I get my 1000th post... hehehehe. You'll all see... And you'll all miss me...

Sounds like someone is going to unleash a random amount of comics on his 1,000th post and then leave the forums. Hmmm?

But seriously, start acting on one comic instead of hundreds.

[Dog Dog 123]

http://i52.photobucket.com/albums/g1...c-badspots.png

Let's play a game of spot the random floating pixels that make things look bad and take only a few seconds to fix. Number spotted: 15

Try taking time to make it at least look like some effort was put into it. Spell better and don't let pixels go floating off into nowhere land.

And chickens? Lovely idea. I'll start watching this one. *stares*

[Stupidmahn]

Hmm? Those pixels weren't there when I saved it... that's really weird... i'll try and fix that up.

[GoldStud]

Hey.

The speech bubbles = good. Really good. But, please, could you get a better font? If you have a serious styled comic with a stupid idea (chickens) its funny. But a stupid styled comic with a stupid idea (chickens) is stupid. Your kindergarten font is like that. You should get a serious font. The Chicken King was on the right track, make the chickens organized, I dunno. It's just not believable, and... ugh. I don't know. Nice backgrounds.