~*~ Naruto: the Final Battle ~*~

[=Zack=]

~*~ Naruto: the Final Battle ~*~
Remix!

Hello, and welcome to the Final Battle, Remix. This was an "old" thread of mine I'm reusing to post the remake of the Final Battle. I used Paint for most of it, along with Paint Shop Pro 4. Grab some popcorn and enjoy .

WARNING: if this [:moodswing] happens to you during your time reading this comic, I am going to laugh like a three year old Canadian baby :XD.

Saga 1: No One sees Things the Way I do, No one Will Try
Chapter I -- Kakashi's Demise, Sasuke's Vengence
-Part 1: Sasuke Recruited-
-Part 2: Sasuke Arrives!-

[=Zack=]

New part is up!

[Agent Mothman]

I may do a full review of this later on, but I have this to say right now . . .

1) Sprites are discolored and look strange. Not to mention that you didn't resize nearly correct. Keep sprites the same color unless recoloring, and only resize by 200%, 400%, etc.

2) Action is moving way to fast to be comprehended. In Naruto, the action moves at a steady pace that's understandable (well, when there aren't a million flashbacks to slow it down).

3) Blur on Kakashi was unneeded in second comic. If anything, it should've been a very small motion blur.

4) Speech bubbles and other effects are ok, but nothing amazing. Only major problem with the speech bubbles is the empty space.

I can't say anything about the plot, so I'll watch this one and probably give you a full review at about 10-15 comics.

AM~

[Keaton]

If you want the sprites to be zoomed in like that, you need to resize it equally. 200% is enough, but if you still want to go closer there's always 300%, 400%, etc. Like what Agent Mothman said. They also are discolored. It may be a result of the stretched sprite.

Also, it's hard to know what's going on. What's going on? It starts in the middle of a fight. There's no explanation of why Naruto and Gaara are fighting. How'd Kakashi know they were fighting at all?

[=Zack=]

Originally Posted by Keaton

If you want the sprites to be zoomed in like that, you need to resize it equally. 200% is enough, but if you still want to go closer there's always 300%, 400%, etc. Like what Agent Mothman said. They also are discolored. It may be a result of the stretched sprite.

Also, it's hard to know what's going on. What's going on? It starts in the middle of a fight. There's no explanation of why Naruto and Gaara are fighting. How'd Kakashi know they were fighting at all?

All will be explained later on. Heh, there are only two issues.

Originally Posted by Stoopidmahn

Weird resizing, don't make any sense, and the bluring is wrong

...Okay...

[Stupidmahn]

I mean that it just starts in the middle of a huge battle. You should at least start with some talking or something

[Link the Farmer]

Personally as being a mild Naruto fan I would not like this comic. Usually when someone makes a plot from a T.V. show or Video game they pick up in the middle of the seirse or at the end. Now I can't find where this takes place at all. So for a suggestion try to fit a plot before the battle sence then people can follow it more. And I know it is a pain when you just want to make the action in a comic, but you have to get the plot over with.

[=Zack=]

Originally Posted by Link the Farmer

Personally as being a mild Naruto fan I would not like this comic. Usually when someone makes a plot from a T.V. show or Video game they pick up in the middle of the seirse or at the end. Now I can't find where this takes place at all. So for a suggestion try to fit a plot before the battle sence then people can follow it more. And I know it is a pain when you just want to make the action in a comic, but you have to get the plot over with.

Um..who uses the actual plot from the story/game, hahaha?

Okay, if anybody else wants to rant about the plot get the hell off of my thread! There are only like, two issues!

[Flying Dutchman]

Originally Posted by Smeezette

Um..who uses the actual plot from the story/game, hahaha?

Okay, if anybody else wants to rant about the plot get the hell off of my thread! There are only like, two issues!

Smee's right. Look at how the story progresses.

For the rest, I agree with Agent. I would like to add the fact that Kakashi uses the Raikiri, the upgraded version of the Chidori (yes they are different) and they are both blue. Not yellow.

[The Fierce Oni]

He/She's using the cruddy Ninja Council 1 Sprites...
Here, have some high quality Ninja Council 4 one's I found:
Kakashi
Naruto
Kyuubi Naruto
Gaara
and just in case, Sasuke
CS2 Sasuke

I have tons more, if you want them. And I like how you jumped into the story.

[The Fierce Oni]

Ok, fine. Keep using crappy sprites. Just saying if you had better ones, ones you didn't have to resise horribly to make them the same size as gaara, people might like it better.

[Stupidmahn]

Just a hint, but resizing works best in stretch/skew. Use 200 for upsizing, and 50 for downsizing. but always use even numbers

[Mr. Tophat]

Ugh...SO MANY PROBLEMS!

First off is the title. You put the text in and then you colored it. No, no, no, and no. That ends up simply giving you crappy white spots. You color the box, THEN put the text in.

Second...the plot. What the heck....I don't get it. I guess you'll explain it in do time. But it is kind of...whack right now.

The dialouge is cheezy and doesn't seem real. "Stop....please, someone help" Doesn't seem very life-like or Naruto-like. Would've been better with "You can't beat me....I'm...Naruto....Uzam..." See the difference?

Some of the sprites are simply ugly from the resizing.

The placement of smoke in the second comic was....not nice-looking.

It seems you put over-special-effected it. If that's even a word. You put to much in.

Also, it seems you sorta rushed it. Not many panels explain movement, placement, etc. Take your time.

6/10....

[Mr. Tophat]

How are you going to automatically call it dead? Are you going to make another thread? That's what I call thread-wasting. You can simply post the remade and new ones here. Don't waist space.

[Stupidmahn]

That's way better. Just the resizing on the background still needs to be fixed, but otherwise, its awsome.

[=Zack=]

New part is up!

On a side note, I have gotton my name changed to The Missing Link. Deal with it.

[The Fierce Oni]

I like that name better than the old one! Kewl

Anyways, back on topic:
Well it's MUCH better now. It has a good begining, and is pretty good sprite wise. I say it's your best so far!
And I like the fast background, but shouldn't Naruto be jumping? They do that alot for speed in Naruto don't they?

[Mr. Tophat]

It's ok. Though you TOTALLY screwed up Naruto's personality. Naruto would never ask for Sasuke's help, Naruto would try to do it himself - and Sasuke would come later to save his ass.

Also, who the heck was Gaara killing?

[=Zack=]

Originally Posted by The Fierce Oni

I like that name better than the old one! Kewl

Anyways, back on topic:
Well it's MUCH better now. It has a good begining, and is pretty good sprite wise. I say it's your best so far!
And I like the fast background, but shouldn't Naruto be jumping? They do that alot for speed in Naruto don't they?

Yeah, I like the name better, too.

I personally think this is my best work, too. And about Naruto jumping, well, I just couldn't find a proper "jumping" sprite, so I used that one.