The Ninja's Way

[Stupidmahn]

The Ninja's Way
A Stoopidmahn Production

Hello. This is my newest comic, The Ninja's Way. This time, I will be staying with this comic for as long as I can, so please try to help me accomplish that by posting. I need any help with posting as I can. Thanks.

Story: Ok, so basically, it's about two competing Ninja Teams. There's the good guys, who are lead by Sokoue, and the bad guys led by Achose. Sokoue is the main character. At the beginning, he went into exile for failing the kingdom in "The Great Accident". Cenryo comes in to confort his best friend. Ok, here ya go!


Story 1: Introductions

Episode 1: Exiled...
Episode 2: The first of the evil
Episode 3: Cenryo VS Tarshon
Episode 4: Sokue VS Posha
Episode 5: The search for Cenryo
Episode 6: SPAZ!!!
Episode 7: Wuanay's Failure
Episode 8: Wuanay fights back!
Episode 9: Enter Neesha

Newest Issue: Wuanay Fights back!

[The Fierce Oni]

1: TOO MUCH BLANK SPACE
2: The dude with the hair has blue around it in panel 1 on comic 2. (don't know if it's on purpose or not)
3: Personally Stoopid, get a new EASY to read font. I found myself actually having to get up close to the screen once or twice.
4: If you insist on having borders on the panels, paste them over the background, THEN add characters and speech bubbles. So you don't see the background sticking out.

Let me put this a nice way... Don't advertise in the hangout, or I'll crush you with my ball & chain!

Other than that, this ones actually ok. Just keep doing those closeups and get a new font. Please! I like the names of the people. And the fact that it's ninja related.

[Flying Dutchman]

Pirates are better than ninja's. =P

Anyway, TFO's right, but he forgot one thing. I'll say it before Blizzaga does:

Grammar! You + Are = You're, not your. Your is for when it's about a possesion or something... Like...

"I gave you your book back."
"You're my enemy!"

And, yay, storyline! Do continue. :D

[Stupidmahn]

Ok, thanks for the advise. So, what font should i use then? Please help me find one. Oh, and I already started episode 3, so episode 4 will be the one with all the changes. Also, the blue is there on purpose. =D But anyways, how do you like my fighting style? XD

[Λύσις]

Put the panels closer (a lot closer) together please. There shouldn't be an inch of nothing between each one. Try 1 to 5 pixels, if any. Actually, if you're going to have those thick black borders around each panel, just put the panels right up next to each other. It'll look a lot better.

And yeah, they're right about the font. It's not easy to read. Maybe you could find a comic font or something online.

[Stupidmahn]

Okay, sorry. The new stuff will actually start in episode 6.... I couldn't find a good font, so I decided to try and make STONE HINGE more readable. How does it look in episode 4?

Episode 3: Cenryo VS Tarshon


Episode 4: Sokue VS Posha

[Stupidmahn]

Hey! Youre different now... Your Windwakerrules... lol. stil hard to say... lol... you shoulda been windy... lol...

anyways, the ninja are under.... Namco-tales of-tales of (the second one).

Oh, and if you reallly really really really want to, somebody can make a brother comic to mine.. hehehehhee

[Agent Mothman]

1) Panel borders do not need to be that thick.
2) Text touches sides of speech bubbles at times, too much empty space.
3) Color coded is not needed if you have tails, but that's personal.
4) Still too much stuff under the comic.
5) Fourth wall should not be broken in a serious comic.

That's all I can come up with now.

AM~

[Carge]

1 thing only:
SPEECH BUBBLE TAILS!
anyways, good stuff... but it seems more fighting than any comical stuff

[Agent Mothman]

Originally Posted by Carge

1 thing only:
SPEECH BUBBLE TAILS!
anyways, good stuff... but it seems more fighting than any comical stuff

And?

I almost forgot:

6) Panels aren't aligned properly. They're jagged.

AM~

[Stupidmahn]

They aren't supposed to be alligned. A carge, shut it. =D Its because I forgot one episode of tails.

[Agent Mothman]

I understand what you're going for, but even then, the panels that are in a line should be straight.

AM~

[Stupidmahn]

Originally Posted by Agent Mothman

1) Panel borders do not need to be that thick.
2) Text touches sides of speech bubbles at times, too much empty space.
3) Color coded is not needed if you have tails, but that's personal.
4) Still too much stuff under the comic.
5) Fourth wall should not be broken in a serious comic.

That's all I can come up with now.

AM~

1) I'll make them smaller in episode 7
2) Sorry, I couldn't fix that in the next comic. I'll try harder in the comic after these two (the next one is already made)... Maybe I could make the text smaller
3)I like the color coded... heheheheh
4) Well, there's only one way to get rid of white space, when theres an empty box that has to be there... lol
5) yeah, i know. I was just too lazy to fix the beam to make it smaller... =D

Episode 5: The search for Cenryo

[Agent Mothman]

Originally Posted by Stoopidmahn

1) I'll make them smaller in episode 7

K

2) Sorry, I couldn't fix that in the next comic. I'll try harder in the comic after these two (the next one is already made)... Maybe I could make the text smaller

Type out the text first on a blank document and then make the bubble around it.

3)I like the color coded... heheheheh

That's fine by me. I'm just pointing out that with the tail pointing to the person, it's not needed. To each his own, I'm not gonna pry.

4) Well, there's only one way to get rid of white space, when theres an empty box that has to be there... lol

The only box you need is the credit box, which you can stretch out to be smaller vertically. The joke and 'To Be Continued . . .' box are unneeded.

5) yeah, i know. I was just too lazy to fix the beam to make it smaller...

BAD! Don't be lazy with sprite comics. If you want to be the best, you gotta work. And I meant more of the 'blasted into the next panel' line. It's OK to have a panel be twice as big but still have separation. PA does it all the time.

Also, try not to have text outside of a bubble. It's hard to read. If you have Photofiltre, Photoshop, Paintshop, etc., then you can add a pixel of color around the text to separate it from the background.

AM~

[Mr. Tophat]

Pirates are better than ninja's. =P

THIS HAS GIVEN ME AN IDEA!

Hey Stoopid, can I make a parody of yours? The Pirate's Way! And can I use some of the same backgrounds you used? Eh?

[Stupidmahn]

Yeah, sure. They can be Brother Comics!!! Ok? PLEASE?! LOL

By the way, I made this comic to vent my anger =D

Its non-canon


BTW: I have the coolest sig ever

[Mr. Tophat]

Actually your sig goes WAY past the limits. Oh well. Yea, I'll make it soon enough. Busy with ten-thounsand things at the moment: Real life stuff, Lost stories, TMUCE, a Zelda project I am helping with. Tonz of stuff. So I'll make it when I can.

[Stupidmahn]

Ok, new episode as soon as i can get on my other computer in my bros room, but he's sleeping... T_T

Anyways, its just a random beating comic up there... nothing more... he he he

[Stupidmahn]

Episode 6: SPAZ!


New epi

[Mr. Tophat]

MC Chris killed him with his DnD character.....what are you talking about? Your logic makes nosense.

The reason why Bunchie is hopping infront of the planet is because he is hopping towards Heaven.

[Stupidmahn]

Actually, the official website for the bunchies says that its a race of bunchies... lol... BUNCHIES CAN"T DIE! Theres millions of them... lol...

New episode tonight

[Mr. Tophat]

^ They made that up after MC Chris posted that picture . Bunchie is dead.

[Stupidmahn]

OK.. well... from now on, bunchie lives.... FOREVER!

I guess if he's gonna be the mascot, he has to come back from the dead... lol

Hehehe... I should make him the main bad guy... hehehehhehe

[Mr. Tophat]

No...have him a stupid retard. Because for my "The Pirate's Way", whenever I am going to make it, will have him in it....but I am not going to say how.