Digimon: Adventure 03

[Stupidmahn]

Hey, this is my new comic. This one i'll actually do.. Lol. Anyways, this comic takes place two years after MaloMyotismon was defeated (Watch Digimon season 2 finale). This is before everyone in the world got a digmon partner though. Anyways, its about a bunch of kids who meet up with they're partner digimon, and end up getting transported to the Digital world. Enjoy

Prolouge

Yamato's Prologue

Lily's prologue: COMING SOON!

Tahn's Prologue: COMING SOON!

Season 1:

Episode 1: Journey to the digiworld
Episode 2: More Digidestin?
Episode 3: Tai and Davis, previous Digidestin
Episode 4: Sunmon and moonmon?
Episode 6: Yamato's jeeeeelous!
Episode 7: Return to the digiworld
Episode 8: trapped with nowhere to go
Episode 9: First Digivolve, meet Champion level
Episode 10: Lunamon, and Coronamon
Episode 11: Your fat...

Sory about the huge typo. But Gray is supposed to be named Yamato, and Yamato is supposed to be named Tahn

[Rantick]

Well its a little... boring. No action apart from walking. Though you probably dont have actions with sprites like that.

By action I dont mean fighting, I mean like when Gray saw Gigimon, he could have had a shocked sprite or something.

[alexome12]

I found it a little short and the cliffhanger isn't very good.
Yet I appreciate the quality of panels, effort and the suspension you get at the begginning...

[Hettman]

Originally Posted by Rantick

Well its a little... boring. No action apart from walking. Though you probably dont have actions with sprites like that.

By action I dont mean fighting, I mean like when Gray saw Gigimon, he could have had a shocked sprite or something.

Whats with action always has to be entertaining?:confused:
Not all comics need to be filled with action, I didn't find it that boring, though it did seem it was short and rushed!

Stoopidmahn: Sory about the huge typo. But Gray is supposed to be named Yamato, and Yamato is supposed to be named Tahn

Relax man! Don't worry about one grammatical error, its just the fist strip of your comic!

[Rantick]

Did you even read my post? I dont mean fighting and stuff.

[GoldStud]

YES!

Wow! This is... good! The speech bubbles are GREAT. Really. You have no idea how much of a asset that is to your comic. Really. I'm trying not to sound to excited because this is really good. The prologue thing with the pixelly font was really good too! Make the end one a little smaller. But it was awesome!

Your panels= Incredilicious. The gray background and the deep red borders is a great idea and looks great! Most people don't make that kind of effort but it really makes your comic look clean and organized.

Great background work, and the spriting is all very clean and well placed. You did a good job of centering your characters right to give a good flow to the comic (your borders helped) and... that close up! It was well done and you put it in the perfect spot. Good good job.

I'll be the first to say I don't like digimon, but all the same I didn't find this boring at all. You set all your characters up well and the cliffhanger was fine. You left off in a good spot for a prolouge especially (I can imagine the other two prologues will end the same way) and it really hung well.

I don't know how you did it, but this comic is great. Really. 9/10 at least. Oh, and I didn't even notice the typo, but it did bug some people. Just remember its not too late to fix it.

This is good stuff. Really. Especially for Paint.

[Carge]

Quite nice, and i've noticed you're using sprites from Megaman games...

How do i know?

The scientists are very recognisable, and the boy?

A random kid in the game which you only put on the hat to change the sprites...

Ok, so, that was my sprite review...

Seems to have a good start... but a little boring...

[Rantick]

its the Megaman EXE games.

[Carge]

Yeah, most probably 5 or 6 or maybe an older one

[Stupidmahn]

Heh, thanks! The second one will be better. I'm almost done! =D

[Lurrrre!]

Yeah woop!
I thought it was a little boreing but not that much, man it looks awesome the speech bubbles, borders ,background all of it good and the cliff hanger is okay but it just make's you want to read more and will there be action or no?

But good none the less 7/10 its actually a better grade than it looks so keep it up Stoopidman!!

[Stupidmahn]

Well of course theres gonna be more action! Lol. What do you take me for, a noob? Lol... Its just the prologue, which don't usually have much action... That's how most comics start! =D

[TileWorm]

Excellent prolouge. You set it up very well.

I'm assuming you use paint, (if you did that in photoshop you need some help) so I feel its safe to say that you did a great job. Graphically, that's as good as you can get with MS Paint. Your spritework is clean and you scaled your close-up well. I disagree that it was boring. It did everything a first comic should. I'd say a well earned 9/10. If you want a 10/10, make me laugh, cry, or go "Yeah! That was awesome!" with some action, humor or drama in your next comic. All it needs is some emotion besides suspense. Or some more suspense.

[Stupidmahn]

Bushy bushy... Heya's Prologuey 2: Lilly!

[Carge]

Hey, that's much better!
I wonder why it is different...

Hey, that's ACDC from megaman battle network!
Still with the pink squirrel...

[Flying Dutchman]

Uhhh... Some tips, lolk?

- There's blue in the panel around the background.. That's pretty much a no-go. Just make the panel smaller, or enlarge sprites and bg (with percentages, obviously). I'd suggest enlargement, it puts the focus on the sprites more. But it's your choice, really.

- There's black around the effects? Eh? How did THAT get there? Remove it.

- I know I'm not supposed to be saying this, but sound effects. Yeah.

- I like the Digilog thing in the beginning, but the DigiTransmission is... Well.. FIND OUT ON THE NEXT EXCITING EPISODE OF DRAGON BALL Z. You can compare it to that, and I don't like personally.

[Rantick]

there is black around them cuz they are meant to be set to screen in PS. You can find them in SFX in the MFZ.

And maybe because this is 2 years before Yamatos prolouge and so it was a different fashion back then

[Stupidmahn]

Actually, it's at the same time as Yamato's Prologue... lol... The prologue's are all at the same time... kk? =D

[GoldStud]

Yay! Goodness! Basically the same as last time, but still good. I still don't like digimon but way to go