06-02-2007, 09:54 AM
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I wish my lawn were emo so it'd Ctrl+X itself.
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~*~ The Onigami / Legend of Zelda ~*~
Mods, please lock. I have a new thread.
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06-02-2007, 10:06 AM
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Hmm, no I do not like this comic; for too many reasons
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06-02-2007, 10:29 AM
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I wish my lawn were emo so it'd Ctrl+X itself.
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Could you name some major reasons so I can improve?
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06-02-2007, 01:27 PM
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Certainly.
The whole comic has been resized horribly. Sorry to say, and no offense intended, it looks like a piece of crap. Mixing ALttP backgrounds with those type of sprites is a bad idea. The characters appear too big to even enter a door. Although you have grammar and sound effects, the speech bubbles can be greatly improved, using default paint colours will not help you in any way. Too much unnecessary black space. Those are only a few major problems, if you want to make a decent sprite comic, create something yourself and make it original. I do not mean to be harsh, as I know how hard it may seem to accept bad criticism on your first sprite comic, but it must greatly improve. I've been there.
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06-02-2007, 02:47 PM
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I wish my lawn were emo so it'd Ctrl+X itself.
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Psst, this might be ironic, but this isn't my first
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06-02-2007, 02:56 PM
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Ishologu Child
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Bah. Leiz.
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06-02-2007, 03:57 PM
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I wish my lawn were emo so it'd Ctrl+X itself.
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You cannot acuse me of anything. I have the URL to my FIRST Sprite comic right here:
http://www.zeldauniverse.net/forums/...n-shadows.html Burn    . Could you please get off my thread now, I don't want you to ruin your eyes looking at my "piece of crap"  .
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06-03-2007, 09:09 PM
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YAY!
It's not that bad. I like the backgrounds a lot! Just don't resize it and it'll be great. Oh, and try speech bubbles. Anyway the plot seems good, and I like the sprites  I'm really looking forward to more.And... Lost Darkness isn't exactly the authority.
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06-03-2007, 09:18 PM
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The Golden Stud
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YAY!
It's not that bad. I like the backgrounds a lot! Just don't resize it and it'll be great. Oh, and try speech bubbles. Anyway the plot seems good, and I like the sprites I'm really looking forward to more.And... Lost Darkness isn't exactly the authority.
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