my new comic:pointless!

oh, so like i do it when it is a big bubble then? i mean, the too many words...

Originally Posted by Carge

oh, so like i do it when it is a big bubble then? i mean, the too many words...

First off, your post isn't very clear. I really don't know what you are saying here.

Yes, too many words. It's seriously confusing who's beginning the conversation and who's ending it. Have a limit of 2 people talking each panel (unless it's a crowd of people saying short phrases). Having every character say a whole paragraph in the same panel is very very confusing.

ayup, i recognise your comments and i dunno what its called imrpovent tips, i will take that into consideration tomorrow on my next comic...
oh and one more thing:
THE BACKGROUND IS TOO DAMN COOL,I'LL NEVER CHANGE IT!
sorry about that

EDIT: yo, here's the next comic:
ISSUE 9: Killing tingles!



EDIT: um, guys, the PNG stuff isn't working... i wonder why

sorry to double post, but people, please post!!! i just added a new comic!!!

It's too small Make it bigger.

oh, ok, then, i'll edit it now!

Thanks I like your comics!

i guess it's too small for some stupid reason... hmmmm

its small, because your on Photobucket. Just use imageshack.us. It dosen't resize your images. Anyways... DIE TINGLE BROS DIE!

oh, kk, thx stoopidmahn

EDIT: then i guess you could see smackjeeves for the comics in original size...

A HUUUUGE improvement. Might I inform you the whole ghost of crappy jokes is a pretty crappy joke and should be tooken out (no offense). Just kill him off in the next one or something because he is distracting WAY to much from the real comic (and when I said use outside of the panel action, I meant action that has to do with the comic itself, not something completly different.) It still is too small, and any files should be able to save as a PNG.

Also, you should move the panels a little closer together. And in the panel where it says "Link Wins" there is a red smudge (I am very very very picky about those types of things. Also at the end when the tingles say "They're doomed" it should be "We're doomed". Also might I advise using tails on your bubbles instead of those lines, it makes it MUCH more easier to tell who's talking. Also you forgot to give credit to every sprite you used (I am pretty sure you didn't make all of them yourself. And I am pretty sure they would like to have some credit.) Also Kirby should not be wielding his sword 24/7, wouldn't his hand get a little tired?

And last but not least, work to decorate your comic a little more. Trust me, it'd be SOOOOOO much better. A good title and a good ending credit/ending thingy would give it the spark it needs.

Also it looks like you are trying to see how many you can make in so little time. Take your time, patience makes the world go round.

FTW~ your words pwnd jyou!

anyway, nice comic ^^ or at least nice sprites of you XD

For people who don't understand I made those sprites of him... so.... yeah... not an inside joke thingy... yeeerrroooooooooonnnnnnnneeeeeeeyyyyyy..... ye.... ya...yar...yoghurt! Yoghurt!

actually, Sonic just kicked the spirit's butt outta the comic...
and also, i like kirby with the sword, but FINE! i'll get a new Kirbs...

Originally Posted by Carge

actually, Sonic just kicked the spirit's butt outta the comic...
and also, i like kirby with the sword, but FINE! i'll get a new Kirbs...

I am not telling you to do anything. If you like Kirby, fine, keep it. I am just simply say what could help you have a better comic. And I really couldn't see the entire comic, it was too small. Good job with kicking his butt though.

FTW~ your words pwnd jyou!

Is this an insult?

Nah, that's just Rantick, he's a good friend of mine and a great spriter... he just probably doesn't like very strict critics, lol